Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and complete answer without hesitation. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, say 'wear appropriate clothes' instead of 'where the, uh, appropriate the clothes'. Keep your answer concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must arrive on time and wear appropriate uniforms every day.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear opinion. Use linking words to explain your reasoning and provide specific examples.

Example: I believe it depends on the school. While some rules help maintain order, too many can restrict students' freedom and creativity.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to complete your sentences and give specific details about the teacher to make your answer more engaging and clear.

Example: Yes, I have. One teacher I remember was very dedicated; he always stayed after class to help students who needed extra support.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: I prefer fewer rules at school because if students have a high level of moral responsibility, they can behave well without strict regulations.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear response with specific details about the strict teacher and why they were strict. Use correct sentence structures.

Example: Yes, I have had strict teachers. For example, one teacher was very strict about punctuality because it was important during that time.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Use clear vocabulary and grammar, and explain your reasons logically with linking words.

Example: Honestly, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, it would be difficult to manage and control the students effectively.

× students must arrive on time at school and where the, uh, appropriate the clothes, uh, uh.

✓ students must arrive on time at school and wear the appropriate clothes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'where' instead of 'wear' and misplaces 'the' before 'appropriate clothes'. The verb should be 'wear' to indicate putting on clothes, and 'the' is unnecessary before 'appropriate clothes'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× there is numerous rules at school.

✓ there are numerous rules at school.

'Rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to quantifiers and plurality. Using 'are' correctly matches the plural noun 'rules'.

× most of teachers nearly dedicate I'm, I'm at, uh, one of teachers I remembered is his, uh, he's a very.

✓ most of the teachers are very dedicated. One of the teachers I remember is very...

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and missing articles. 'Most of teachers' should be 'most of the teachers'. 'Nearly dedicate I'm' is incorrect; it should be 'are very dedicated'. The sentence is incomplete but correcting pronouns and articles improves clarity.

× I prefer pure rules at school, but indeed to prioritize that students has PR high level of moral condition and then they can.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school, but indeed, students should have a high level of moral standards so they can...

'Pure rules' is incorrect; likely intended 'fewer rules'. 'Students has' should be 'students have' for subject-verb agreement. 'Moral condition' is better expressed as 'moral standards'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and meaning.

× I have dearly straight.

✓ I have had very strict teachers.

'Dearly straight' is incorrect. The intended meaning is 'very strict'. Also, 'I have' should be 'I have had' to indicate past experience. Correct adjective use and tense improve clarity.

× I had nearly strict teachers and everyone was students.

✓ I had nearly strict teachers and everyone was a student.

'Everyone' is singular, so it should be followed by 'was a student' not 'students'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Most of teacher is realistic because it I think at that time that period is trend.

✓ Most of the teachers were realistic because I think at that time that period was a trend.

'Most of teacher' should be 'most of the teachers' (plural). 'Is' should be 'were' to match plural subject and past tense. 'That period is trend' should be 'that period was a trend' for correct tense and article use.

× I don't like to work as a teacher through preschool because, uh, if I work as teacher at Rupiah School, I can't control, uh, my students.

✓ I don't like to work as a teacher in a preschool because, if I work as a teacher at a rule-free school, I can't control my students.

'Through preschool' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in a preschool'. 'At Rupiah School' seems a mishearing of 'rule-free school'. Also, 'as teacher' should be 'as a teacher'. Correct preposition and article use improve clarity.