Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler (uh, umm) bulunmakta. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için bu kelimeleri azaltmalı ve cümlenizi doğrudan konuya odaklanarak kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha net ve kısa tutarak, maksimum 5 cümle kuralına uymalısınız.

Example: Yes, my school has several basic rules. For example, students must attend classes on time and complete their homework regularly. These rules help maintain discipline and ensure effective learning.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, dolgu kelimeleri azaltarak ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Example: I believe there should be a balance between rules and personal freedom. For instance, students can choose their shoes freely, but some rules like dress code help maintain order.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve eksik cümleler var. Cümlenizi tamamlamalı ve daha spesifik detaylar vermelisiniz. Ayrıca, dolgu kelimeleri azaltarak daha doğal bir ifade kullanmalısınız.

Example: Yes, I have a dedicated English teacher who has taught me since first grade. She is also my best friend's mother and often helps me improve my English outside of class. Besides teaching, she organizes extracurricular activities for students.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "girls" kelimesi muhtemelen "rules" olmalı. Cümlenizi netleştirip, daha doğru kelimeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümlenizi daha tutarlı yapmalısınız.

Example: I prefer fewer rules at school because I value my independence. Some rules, like wearing only black shoes, restrict personal choice and feel unnecessary.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "interfere or clothes" yerine "interfere with clothes" gibi doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar eklemelisiniz.

Example: Yes, I had a strict teacher in high school who often interfered with our clothes, makeup, and hairstyles. For instance, once she told me to wash my face because she thought I was wearing mascara, even though I wasn't.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve dolgu kelimeler mevcut. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için bu kelimeleri azaltmalı ve cümlenizi daha doğru gramer yapısıyla kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklemelisiniz.

Example: Absolutely not. Although I don't like many rules, I believe some rules are necessary. Especially in high schools, teenagers often act without thinking, so rules help maintain discipline.

× Uh, actually I recently graduate from university, so the rules are from, uh, my previous goal.

✓ Uh, actually I recently graduated from university, so the rules are from, uh, my previous goal.

The verb 'graduate' should be in the past tense 'graduated' because the action happened in the past. 'Recently' indicates a past event, so past tense is required.

× she always teach me English whenever I want.

✓ she always teaches me English whenever I want.

In the present simple tense, when the subject is third person singular ('she'), the verb must have an 's' at the end. Therefore, 'teach' should be 'teaches'.

× except from teaching English, she also, uh, organize very uh.

✓ except for teaching English, she also, uh, organizes very uh.

The correct preposition after 'except' in this context is 'for', not 'from'. Also, 'organize' should be 'organizes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× And I prefer fewer girls at my school because I love my independence and some of rules make umm our umm Dec decisions to blocked.

✓ And I prefer fewer rules at my school because I love my independence and some of the rules make our decisions blocked.

The original sentence mistakenly uses 'girls' instead of 'rules' which fits the context better. Also, 'some of rules' should be 'some of the rules' to be grammatically correct. 'Dec decisions' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo and is corrected to 'decisions'. 'To blocked' should be 'blocked'.

× she always interfere or clothes or makeup or hair and this kind of stuff.

✓ she always interferes with clothes or makeup or hair and this kind of stuff.

The verb 'interfere' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate what is being interfered with. Also, 'interfere' should be 'interferes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× one day I, uh, didn't wear any mascara but she'd set me to wash out my face because of mascara.

✓ one day I, uh, didn't wear any mascara but she'd sent me to wash out my face because of mascara.

The verb 'set' is incorrect here; the past tense of 'send' is 'sent'. The phrase 'set me to wash out' is incorrect; it should be 'sent me to wash out'.