Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more grammatically correct and clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Although there are many rules at my school, most students do not follow them. For instance, there is a rule against talking during class, but it is rarely enforced."

Example: Although there are many rules at my school, most students do not follow them. For instance, there is a rule against talking during class, but it is rarely enforced.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like "however" properly and avoid repetition. For example, "I don't think adding more rules would be beneficial because many students already ignore existing ones. However, new rules might help those who are unaware of their importance."

Example: I don't think adding more rules would be beneficial because many students already ignore existing ones. However, new rules might help those who are unaware of their importance.

Suggestion: Focus on answering the question directly and use correct vocabulary. "Educated" is incorrect here; use "dedicated" or "strict". Also, avoid vague or inappropriate descriptions. For example, "I have never had a very dedicated teacher, but my older brother had one who was very strict and punished students who broke rules."

Example: I have never had a very dedicated teacher, but my older brother had one who was very strict and punished students who broke rules.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary mistakes and clarify your points. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "I prefer fewer rules at school because many rules seem unnecessary. For instance, my school has a strict attendance policy that reduces discipline points for absences without accepting excuses."

Example: I prefer fewer rules at school because many rules seem unnecessary. For instance, my school has a strict attendance policy that reduces discipline points for absences without accepting excuses.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear or incorrect words like "drug teacher"; perhaps you meant "strict teacher." Use correct adverbs and prepositions. For example, "Yes, I had a very strict teacher in first grade. She was obsessed with rules and would yell at anyone who disobeyed. For example, she made us sit straight with our forefingers in front of our mouths."

Example: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in first grade. She was obsessed with rules and would yell at anyone who disobeyed. For example, she made us sit straight with our forefingers in front of our mouths.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and word choice. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, "No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. Teaching is already challenging, and without rules, I think it would be chaotic because there would be no control over students."

Example: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. Teaching is already challenging, and without rules, I think it would be chaotic because there would be no control over students.

× Although there are lots of rules for students in my school, most of students don't follow it.

✓ Although there are lots of rules for students in my school, most students don't follow them.

The phrase 'most of students' should be 'most students' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'don't follow it' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so it should be 'don't follow them'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× For example, there's a rule prevent the side talking at the class and you barely see anyone doesn't talk at the class.

✓ For example, there's a rule preventing side talking in class, and you barely see anyone who doesn't talk in class.

The sentence has incorrect article usage and structure. 'Prevent the side talking at the class' should be 'preventing side talking in class'. Also, 'anyone doesn't talk at the class' is incorrect; it should be 'anyone who doesn't talk in class'. The definite article 'the' before 'class' is unnecessary here.

× I believe that adding more rules would not be benefit because most of the students don't follow the rules.

✓ I believe that adding more rules would not be beneficial because most of the students don't follow the rules.

The modal verb phrase 'would not be benefit' is incorrect. The correct form is 'would not be beneficial' or 'would not benefit'. This is a modal verb usage issue.

× I have never had educated teacher but my older brother had.

✓ I have never had an educated teacher but my older brother had.

The phrase 'educated teacher' needs an article 'an' before it because 'teacher' is singular and countable. This is a singular and plural issue related to article usage.

× If someone didn't follow the rules he will punish him by hitting him badly.

✓ If someone didn't follow the rules, he would punish him by hitting him badly.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't' with future tense 'will'. It should be consistent. Using 'would' after 'if' with past tense is correct. This is a third person singular and tense consistency issue.

× I prefer fewer rolls at school because most of the rules don't have a real benefit.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because most of the rules don't have a real benefit.

The word 'rolls' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'. This is a singular and plural issue involving word choice.

× For example, in my school there is discipline degrees which absent decrease it and they don't accept any excuses.

✓ For example, in my school there are discipline points which decrease with absences, and they don't accept any excuses.

The phrase 'discipline degrees which absent decrease it' is unclear and incorrect. 'Discipline points' is more appropriate, and 'absent decrease it' should be 'decrease with absences'. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' for plural. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and subject-verb agreement issue.

× Yes, I have had a drug teacher when I was in first grade.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher when I was in first grade.

The word 'drug' is incorrect here; likely, the intended word is 'strict'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× She was really obsessed with rules and would yell on anyone who didn't follow her rules.

✓ She was really obsessed with rules and would yell at anyone who didn't follow her rules.

The correct preposition after 'yell' is 'at', not 'on'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× For example, she forced us to sit straightly with our forefinger in front of our mouths.

✓ For example, she forced us to sit straight with our forefingers in front of our mouths.

The adverb 'straightly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'straight'. Also, 'forefinger' should be plural 'forefingers' to match 'our'. This is an incorrect use of adverbs and plural form.

× No, I would not work as teacher in a rough way.

✓ No, I would not work as a teacher in a rough way.

The phrase 'work as teacher' needs the article 'a' before 'teacher'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/articles.

× School working as teacher is already hard and I cannot imagine how it could be in a role free school.

✓ Working as a teacher in school is already hard, and I cannot imagine how it could be in a rule-free school.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'School working as teacher' should be 'Working as a teacher in school'. Also, 'role free' should be 'rule-free'. This is a sentence structure error.

× I believe it's going to be a chaos because there is nothing control the students.

✓ I believe it's going to be chaos because there is nothing to control the students.

The word 'chaos' is uncountable and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'nothing control' should be 'nothing to control'. This is an incorrect use of the definite article and sentence structure issue.