Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'plait' instead of 'plead' for hair, and ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'rules and regulations are'). Keep your answer concise and clear with proper linking words.

Example: Yes, my school has several rules for students. For example, we are required to wear the proper uniform and keep our hair neatly plaited. Additionally, students must follow the color code for uniforms and maintain discipline throughout the school.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. This will make your answer more coherent and effective.

Example: I believe that rules are important to help students maintain discipline; however, too many rules can be stressful and limit their freedom. Therefore, a balanced number of rules is necessary to create a positive learning environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but try to use more varied vocabulary and correct grammar, such as 'a lot of patience' and 'a delightful teacher'. Also, use linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher. For example, she was hardworking and patient, always willing to clarify any doubts. In addition, she enthusiastically repeated difficult points to help students understand better.

Suggestion: Avoid starting answers with 'Yes' when the question is a preference. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' effectively, and be careful with word order and possessive forms, e.g., 'students' mental health'.

Example: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because too many rules can restrict students' freedom and negatively affect their mental health. Also, having only essential rules helps maintain a balanced and healthy environment.

Suggestion: Try to use past tense consistently and avoid awkward phrases like 'she is too hurt the kids'. Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'fortunately' to organize your answer clearly and naturally.

Example: Yes, I had several strict teachers during my school years. For example, my kindergarten teacher was so strict that she would punish children who did not complete their homework. Fortunately, I was later moved to another class with a more understanding teacher.

Suggestion: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Use correct vocabulary such as 'rule-free' instead of 'rural free'.

Example: Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I believe teaching is a great profession that imparts knowledge to students. Also, it requires patience and humility, and teachers play an important role in shaping the future of students.

× Yes, my school provided wide variety of rules and regulation for the students.

✓ Yes, my school provided a wide variety of rules and regulations for the students.

The phrase 'wide variety' requires the article 'a' before it, and 'rules and regulation' should be pluralized to 'rules and regulations' to match the plural noun 'rules'. This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plural usage.

× They were also told to plead their hair and they were uh.

✓ They were also told to plait their hair.

The verb 'plead' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'plait' meaning to braid hair. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× They were also told to wear UH based on the color code given by the school and they were asked to maintain a proper discipline in the school uh, per.

✓ They were also told to wear uniforms based on the color code given by the school and were asked to maintain proper discipline in the school.

The phrase 'wear UH' is unclear and likely a typo; 'wear uniforms' fits the context. Also, 'a proper discipline' is incorrect; 'discipline' is uncountable here, so 'proper discipline' is correct. The sentence was also fragmented and needed restructuring.

× But sometimes the rules and regulation can go over a beyond to a limit where it could be distressful to the students.

✓ But sometimes the rules and regulations can go beyond a limit where they could be distressing to the students.

'Rules and regulation' should be pluralized to 'rules and regulations'. The phrase 'go over a beyond to a limit' is incorrect; 'go beyond a limit' is correct. 'Distressful' is not commonly used; 'distressing' is the correct adjective.

× So I would say that rules should be kept, but it should be.

✓ So I would say that rules should be kept, but they should be reasonable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Rules' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' not 'it'. Adding 'reasonable' completes the thought logically.

× Yes, I did have a dedicated teacher because she was very hardworking and she taught students with lot of patience and cleared each of everyone's doubt very well.

✓ Yes, I did have a dedicated teacher because she was very hardworking and she taught students with a lot of patience and cleared each of everyone's doubts very well.

The phrase 'with lot of patience' requires the article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, 'each of everyone's doubt' is awkward; 'everyone's doubts' is more natural and plural to match 'doubts'.

× She kept repeating the points which was hard for the students to understand and she was very enthusiastic and she was very delightful teacher.

✓ She kept repeating the points which were hard for the students to understand, and she was very enthusiastic and a very delightful teacher.

'Points' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, 'very delightful teacher' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Yes, I would prefer to have fewer rules in school because a lot of rules could bring down students freedom at school.

✓ Yes, I would prefer to have fewer rules in school because a lot of rules could bring down students' freedom at school.

The possessive form 'students' freedom' requires an apostrophe to indicate possession: 'students' freedom'.

× It could be very distressing to students mental health.

✓ It could be very distressing to students' mental health.

The possessive form 'students mental health' requires an apostrophe: 'students' mental health' to show that the mental health belongs to the students.

× Yes, I did have a lot of strict teachers around my school time.

✓ Yes, I did have a lot of strict teachers during my school time.

The phrase 'around my school time' is incorrect; 'during my school time' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'A lot of strict teachers' is correct plural usage.

× One of the teacher that I could remember from my childhood was my kindergarten teacher.

✓ One of the teachers that I can remember from my childhood was my kindergarten teacher.

'One of the teacher' should be 'one of the teachers' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'could remember' is better as 'can remember' for present ability.

× She was very strict to a point that she is too hurt the kids whenever they don't do their homework properly.

✓ She was very strict to the point that she would hurt the kids whenever they didn't do their homework properly.

The phrase 'strict to a point' should be 'strict to the point'. 'She is too hurt' is incorrect; 'she would hurt' fits the past habitual action. Also, 'don't' should be 'didn't' to match past tense.

× And then there were a lot of complaints against the teacher.

✓ And then there were a lot of complaints against the teacher.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× Fortunately, I was shifted from her class to another class with a good teacher at the end.

✓ Fortunately, I was transferred from her class to another class with a good teacher in the end.

'Shifted' is less common in this context; 'transferred' is more appropriate. 'At the end' is better as 'in the end' for this context.

× Yes, I would love to work as a teacher in a rural free school because the I consider teaching as a one of the greatest job which could which provides a lot of knowledge to the students out there.

✓ Yes, I would love to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I consider teaching as one of the greatest jobs which provides a lot of knowledge to the students out there.

'Rural free school' should be 'rule-free school'. 'The I consider' is incorrect; 'I consider' is correct. 'A one of the greatest job' should be 'one of the greatest jobs' to match plural 'jobs'.

× And teaching is a profession which carries lot of patience and humility.

✓ And teaching is a profession which carries a lot of patience and humility.

The phrase 'carries lot of patience' requires the article 'a' before 'lot'.

× So and we are the we are the promising future for the students as well because.

✓ So, we are the promising future for the students as well.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Removing extra words and completing the sentence improves clarity and structure.