Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "go respect to our literal". Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: At my university, there are only a few important rules that students must follow, such as respecting teachers and attending classes on time.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và trình bày rõ ràng hơn về lợi ích của việc có thêm quy tắc cho học sinh.

Example: Yes, I believe that having more rules can help students develop a stronger sense of responsibility and improve their behavior, such as respecting teachers and maintaining good discipline.

Suggestion: Bạn đã không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi vì nói về cha mẹ thay vì giáo viên. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời còn dài dòng và thiếu liên kết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về một giáo viên tận tâm.

Example: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher who always helped me understand difficult topics and encouraged me to do my best.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của mình.

Example: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop responsibility and good behavior over time.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có ý nghĩa, nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác như "managing times" và bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, my current lecturer is very strict, but this helps me manage my time better and become more responsible in my studies.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because rules help students develop skills and take responsibility for their learning.

× Actually, since I am a university student, there are few words for students to follow.

✓ Actually, since I am a university student, there are a few rules for students to follow.

The phrase 'there are few words' is incorrect because 'words' is not the appropriate noun here; the correct noun is 'rules'. Also, 'few' without 'a' implies almost none, but the intended meaning is some, so 'a few' is correct.

× However, we still have to go respect to our literal as much as possible and also our responsibility to sacrifice.

✓ However, we still have to show respect to our teachers as much as possible and also take responsibility to make sacrifices.

The phrase 'go respect to our literal' is incorrect. The verb 'go' is unnecessary, and 'literal' is likely a mistranslation or typo for 'teachers'. The correct preposition is 'show respect to'. Also, 'responsibility to sacrifice' should be 'take responsibility to make sacrifices' for clarity.

× Actually, I think Sweden would get a bit more from the rules it had to prove, have them to develop a sense of responsibility and also improve this behavior.

✓ Actually, I think students would benefit more from the rules because they help develop a sense of responsibility and also improve behavior.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect quantifiers and unclear references. 'Sweden' is likely a mistake for 'students'. 'Get a bit more from the rules it had to prove' is incorrect; it should be 'benefit more from the rules'. The phrase 'have them to develop' is incorrect; it should be 'because they help develop'.

× For example, some strictly related to behavioral health, students who serve respect to their teacher and others.

✓ For example, some rules are strictly related to behavioral health, such as students showing respect to their teachers and others.

The sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'Some strictly related' needs a verb like 'are'. 'Serve respect to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'show respect to'. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'students'.

× Actually I have many dedicated people but the most up everyone is my parents literally who is not only helped me a lot in study but also gives me various beautiful advice to my real life problem which makes me overcome.

✓ Actually, I have many dedicated people, but the most important ones are my parents, who have not only helped me a lot in my studies but also given me valuable advice for my real-life problems, which helps me overcome them.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'most up everyone' is unclear and corrected to 'most important ones'. 'Parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'is'. 'Helps me overcome' should be 'helps me overcome them' to refer to 'problems'. Also, 'study' should be 'studies'.

× In my opinion, I prefer having more growth at school because tends to be slow building, could develop their responsibilities and also build many good behavior.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer having more rules at school because students tend to develop their responsibilities slowly and also build good behavior.

'More growth' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'more rules'. The phrase 'tends to be slow building' is unclear and corrected to 'students tend to develop their responsibilities slowly'. 'Many good behavior' should be 'good behavior' as 'behavior' is uncountable.

× Actually, I have had this in my current lecturer who is really strict for not only me but also other students.

✓ Actually, I have this in my current lecturer who is really strict not only with me but also with other students.

The phrase 'I have had this in my current lecturer' is awkward; 'I have this in my current lecturer' is better as the lecturer is current. Also, 'strict for not only me but also other students' should be 'strict not only with me but also with other students' to use correct prepositions.

× But uh, this characteristic helps me a lot in many managing times and also build my responsibilities for studying.

✓ But, this characteristic helps me a lot in managing many situations and also builds my responsibility for studying.

'Many managing times' is incorrect; it should be 'managing many situations'. 'Build my responsibilities' should be 'builds my responsibility' to agree with singular subject 'characteristic'.

× Actually I didn't enjoy working as a teacher in the room through school because I think building this role is a umm, how to say a package or a useful way to have students umm, develop their skills and also responsibilities.

✓ Actually, I didn't enjoy working as a teacher in a rule-free school because I think having rules is a useful way to help students develop their skills and responsibilities.

'Room through school' is likely a mistranslation of 'rule-free school'. 'Building this role is a package' is unclear and corrected to 'having rules is a useful way'. The verb 'have students develop' is better than 'have students umm, develop'.