Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question, using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples of rules.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as maintaining discipline, wearing the proper uniform, and being punctual. These rules help create a respectful and orderly environment for all students.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of skills learned from rules.

Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because regulations teach essential life skills. For instance, rules about punctuality help students manage their time effectively, which is important for their future careers.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct pronouns and avoid repetition. Also, provide more specific details about the teacher's dedication and teaching methods with linking words.

Example: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher named Mr. Ischu Babbar who teaches medicinal chemistry. He is passionate about his work and uses various methods, such as computer-aided techniques and practical experiments, to help us understand the subject better.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys your opinion but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more precise in your explanation.

Example: In my opinion, having a moderate number of rules is sufficient for students. This balance helps them become more mature and understand the importance of rules and regulations in their lives, which prepares them to be responsible members of society.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns. Also, avoid mentioning physical punishment as it may be sensitive; instead, focus on strictness in terms of discipline.

Example: Yes, I had a strict teacher named Mr. Sanjeev who taught us math. He was very strict because he did not tolerate mistakes and expected students to be disciplined and attentive in class.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure. Be more specific about why rules are important in a school environment.

Example: Definitely not, because without rules, students might disobey teachers and behave inappropriately. This would disturb the learning environment, making it difficult to teach effectively.

× Honestly, in that time, in that time I am not at this school, but when I am to school, there are several roles like maintaining discipline, wearing proper uniform and punctuality and so on.

✓ Honestly, at that time, I was not at this school, but when I was at school, there were several rules like maintaining discipline, wearing proper uniform and punctuality and so on.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'am' and 'are' when referring to past time 'in that time'. The verbs should be in past tense to match the time frame. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules' as per context.

× Honestly, in that time, in that time I am not at this school, but when I am to school, there are several roles like maintaining discipline, wearing proper uniform and punctuality and so on.

✓ Honestly, at that time, I was not at this school, but when I was at school, there were several rules like maintaining discipline, wearing proper uniform and punctuality and so on.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; it should be 'rules' to refer to school regulations. Also, 'uniform' should be 'uniforms' if referring to multiple students, but 'uniform' can be used as uncountable noun here.

× Of course, student would benefit from more rules because of the regulation.

✓ Of course, students would benefit from more rules because of the regulations.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject implied. Also, 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' as it refers to multiple rules.

× They can learn the essential skill in their life like time management, punctuality and many more which help them to become a good person in the society.

✓ They can learn essential skills in their lives like time management, punctuality and many more which help them to become good people in society.

The pronouns and nouns need to agree in number: 'skill' should be plural 'skills', 'life' should be plural 'lives', 'person' should be plural 'people', and 'the society' should be 'society' without 'the'.

× There is a teacher named Mr. Mrs. Ischu Babbar which teaches medicinal chemistry in my college.

✓ There is a teacher named Mr. Ischu Babbar who teaches medicinal chemistry in my college.

The pronoun 'which' is incorrect for people; 'who' should be used. Also, 'Mr. Mrs.' is contradictory; only one title should be used.

× He is a very passionate teacher about their work and also teach us with the different methods like computer aided methods and so on.

✓ He is a very passionate teacher about his work and also teaches us with different methods like computer-aided methods and so on.

The pronoun 'their' should be 'his' to agree with singular 'He'. The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with singular subject 'He'. 'Computer aided' should be hyphenated as 'computer-aided'.

× They prefer practical work over practical work.

✓ He prefers practical work over theoretical work.

The sentence repeats 'practical work' which is illogical. Likely intended contrast is 'practical work over theoretical work'. Also, 'They' should be 'He' to agree with singular teacher.

× In my opinion, I would like to say moderate rules as sufficient for the student.

✓ In my opinion, I would like to say moderate rules are sufficient for the students.

The phrase 'moderate rules as sufficient' is incorrect; it should be 'moderate rules are sufficient'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students'.

× Because of moderate rule they can become the more mature in their life and understand the value of rule and regulation in in their life.

✓ Because of moderate rules, they can become more mature in their lives and understand the value of rules and regulations in their lives.

'Moderate rule' should be plural 'moderate rules'. 'The more mature' is incorrect; 'more mature' is correct. 'Life' should be plural 'lives'. 'Rule and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'. Also, 'in in' is a typo.

× Also they will become important part of the society.

✓ Also, they will become an important part of society.

'Important part' needs an article 'an'. 'The society' should be 'society' without 'the'.

× Of course there is teacher name Mr. Sanjeev who teaches teaches us math at school time.

✓ Of course, there is a teacher named Mr. Sanjeev who teaches us math at school.

Missing article 'a' before 'teacher'. 'Name' should be 'named'. 'Teaches' is repeated twice. 'At school time' is awkward; 'at school' is sufficient.

× He is very strict teacher because he doesn't tolerate any type of mistake and miss happening from the student and also sometimes they beat the student for their activity.

✓ He is a very strict teacher because he doesn't tolerate any type of mistake or misbehavior from the students and sometimes he beats the students for their actions.

Missing article 'a' before 'very strict teacher'. 'Miss happening' is incorrect; 'misbehavior' is appropriate. 'From the student' should be plural 'from the students'. 'They' should be 'he' to agree with singular teacher. 'Activity' should be 'actions'.

× Definitely not because of lack of rules.

✓ Definitely not because of the lack of rules.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'lack of rules'.

× There is nothing can do, shouldn't, will disobey their teachers.

✓ There is nothing they can do; they shouldn't and will not disobey their teachers.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject and verb agreement. It needs subjects 'they' and proper modal verb constructions.

× Because of this I don't like to teach at the rural free school.

✓ Because of this, I don't like to teach at a rule-free school.

'Rural free school' is incorrect; likely intended 'rule-free school'. Also, missing comma after 'Because of this'.

× Also they will do anything as they want, which is which disturbs the environment of study.

✓ Also, they will do anything as they want, which disturbs the study environment.

Extra 'which is' is incorrect. 'Environment of study' is better phrased as 'study environment'. Missing comma after 'Also'.