Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'be attitude to teacher'. Hơn nữa, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để mô tả các quy tắc, đồng thời tránh câu quá dài và thiếu liên kết.

Example: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must respect their teachers and follow the dress code. However, some rules, like boys not being allowed to have long hair, seem confusing to me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'MMM' hay 'uh'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

Example: In my opinion, it depends on the type of rules. Some rules are very beneficial because they help students learn discipline and gain knowledge, but others may not be helpful.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như sử dụng sai đại từ nhân xưng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách giáo viên đó giúp bạn để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Ling Wen when I was in primary school. She always taught me carefully and helped me learn many valuable lessons.

Suggestion: Bạn cần tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm' hay 'uh' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'fuel rules' thành 'fewer rules'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của bạn.

Example: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can limit my ability to express myself and learn valuable lessons.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về quan điểm của bạn về giáo viên nghiêm khắc và môi trường giáo dục hiện nay.

Example: Yes, I have had a strict teacher before. However, I think strict teachers are not suitable for today's education because students need freedom to express themselves and think independently.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'there the student can be R rude'. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do của bạn.

Example: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because students might be rude and disrespectful. Without rules, they may not do their homework or pay attention in class.

× Just there are many kind of rules for student as my school.

✓ There are many kinds of rules for students at my school.

The noun 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved by starting with 'There are'.

× Some normal rules such as be attitude to teacher but some are very confused like boy candidate have a long hair.

✓ Some normal rules such as having a good attitude towards teachers, but some are very confusing, like boy candidates having long hair.

The phrase 'be attitude to teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'having a good attitude towards teachers'. 'Confused' should be 'confusing' to describe the rules. 'Boy candidate have a long hair' should be 'boy candidates having long hair' to correct plural and article usage.

× Some rule is very, very benefit for student life.

✓ Some rules are very, very beneficial for student life.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'some'. 'Benefit' is a noun; the adjective form 'beneficial' is needed. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to generalize.

× They can learn uh many kind of knowledge and some are not.

✓ They can learn many kinds of knowledge, and some cannot.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. 'Some are not' is incomplete; 'some cannot' clarifies the meaning.

× That is the time when I was in primary school he was always teaching me carefully and.

✓ That was the time when I was in primary school; he was always teaching me carefully.

The sentence needs past tense 'was' to match the time reference. Also, a semicolon or conjunction is needed to connect the clauses properly.

× Teach me many valuable.

✓ He taught me many valuable lessons.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'Teach' should be 'taught' in past tense, and 'valuable' needs a noun to complete the meaning, such as 'lessons'.

× I prefer fuel rules at school, umm uh be because uh, too many rules can limit my ability to express myself and learns valuable lesson.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can limit my ability to express myself and learn valuable lessons.

'Fuel' is incorrect; it should be 'fewer' to indicate a smaller number. 'Learns' should be 'learn' to match the subject 'my ability'. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to generalize.

× Yes, I have had a really strict teacher because now I think St. teacher do not appropriate to the education environment now because then that now prefer the ability to express themselves and the freedom to thinking.

✓ Yes, I have had a really strict teacher, but now I think strict teachers are not appropriate for the current educational environment because students now prefer the ability to express themselves and the freedom to think.

The sentence has unclear pronouns and structure. 'St. teacher' should be 'strict teachers'. 'Do not appropriate' is incorrect; it should be 'are not appropriate'. 'Freedom to thinking' should be 'freedom to think'.

× I would not like to work as a teacher in a real free school because with a rule free school there the student can be R rude and not respect me.

✓ I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because in such a school, the students can be rude and not respect me.

'Real free school' should be 'rule-free school'. 'With a rule free school there the student' is awkward; 'in such a school, the students' is clearer. 'R rude' is a typo and should be 'rude'.

× They can also don't do homework and don't understand the the lesson and they will play.

✓ They also might not do homework, not understand the lessons, and will play instead.

'They can also don't do' is incorrect; 'might not do' or 'may not do' is better. 'The the lesson' has a repeated article; 'lessons' should be plural. The sentence is restructured for clarity.