Rules— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Yes, definitely, just like in every school. Uh, my school also had rules and regulations when I was studying there because it is important, uh, necessary for students to follow rules so they can learn discipline in life. Without it, it will be difficult for them to live, live.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
Yes, definitely. It helps them to grow and have discipline in their life without rules. For example, the animals are living without rules, so there won't be any difference between them and us. So it is a essential part of life to to invent rules in our lives, especially for students.
Examiner
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Candidate
Let me think about it. That's a very interesting question. Uh, just in my college, I have a very dedicated teacher, uh, who worked hard to, for the improvement, uh, of the students. And he was very also strict and we were scared of him a lot. He scared us a lot.
Examiner
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Candidate
I prefer to have more rules and regulations and guidelines for students in school because studying in school is like a fundamental growth of students and children, so they can learn in school and implement in college and university and later in life. It will help them in future.
Examiner
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Candidate
Yes, in every school, college, university, I mean, especially in college, we had a chemistry teacher and he was very strict. He used to beat us all the time and punished us during the break. So he was very strict and everyone of us, each and everyone of us all was scared of him.
Examiner
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Candidate
Not really, uh, if I were to become a teacher will, which I definitely will, I will make sure to implement rules and regulations in school because, uh, I have experienced, uh, these in my life. So I want other students to follow these rules as well.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'live, live'. Also, make your answer more concise and directly state the importance of rules with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail using linking words.
Example: Yes, my school had several rules and regulations because they help students develop discipline. For example, following rules teaches responsibility, which is essential for success in life.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Avoid unclear comparisons like animals without rules. Use clearer reasons and linking words to explain why more rules benefit students. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a essential' to 'an essential'.
Example: Yes, I believe more rules help students grow because they promote discipline and order. For instance, having clear guidelines encourages students to focus on their studies and behave responsibly.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Avoid filler phrases like 'let me think' and repeated words such as 'scared us a lot'. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add details about the teacher's dedication and strictness.
Example: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in college who worked hard to improve students' skills. Although he was strict, his guidance helped us achieve better results.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy like 'rules and regulations and guidelines'. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and correct grammar such as 'help them in future' to 'help them in the future'.
Example: I prefer more rules at school because they provide a strong foundation for students. This discipline helps them succeed in higher education and later in their careers.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary repetition like 'everyone of us, each and everyone of us all'. Also, avoid mentioning physical punishment as it may be sensitive. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.
Example: Yes, I had a very strict chemistry teacher in college who enforced discipline firmly. Because of his strictness, many students were afraid to break the rules.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'if I were to become a teacher will'. Use a clear topic sentence and linking words to explain your reasons logically and concisely.
Example: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because rules are essential for maintaining discipline. Since I have experienced the benefits of rules, I want my students to follow them as well.
Grammar
× So it is a essential part of life to to invent rules in our lives, especially for students.
✓ So it is an essential part of life to invent rules in our lives, especially for students.
The article 'a' is used before words starting with a consonant sound, but 'essential' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' should be used instead. Also, the word 'to' is repeated twice, so one should be removed.
× He was very also strict and we were scared of him a lot.
✓ He was also very strict and we were scared of him a lot.
The adverb 'also' should be placed before 'very' to maintain correct word order. The original sentence has incorrect adverb placement.
× everyone of us, each and everyone of us all was scared of him.
✓ every one of us, each and every one of us all were scared of him.
The phrase 'everyone' should be 'every one' when referring to individuals separately. Also, since the subject is plural, the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.
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