Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e grammar ar sentence structure improve korte hobe. Apnar uttor ta besh bistarito kora dorkar, kintu sentence gulo shothik bhabe link kora nai. Apni simple ar clear sentence use korun, ar linking words (like 'and', 'because') use kore uttor ta logical banan.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, wearing a uniform is mandatory. Also, if a student is late, they must wait outside until the assembly finishes. These rules help maintain discipline and order.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar ar vocabulary improve korte hobe. Apni clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor supporting details den. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'so' jate uttor ta logical hoy.

Example: Yes, I think more rules can help students become more responsible. For example, teachers give us homework regularly, and if we don't complete it, we get punished. This makes us understand the importance of homework in daily life.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar pronunciation error ache. Apni clear ar simple sentence use korun. Linking words use kore uttor ta aro bhalo banan. Specific example dile uttor aro strong hobe.

Example: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers. They care about us like their own children. For instance, when I have difficulties in class, they always help me to understand the problem.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e sentence structure ar grammar improve korte hobe. Apni clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor supporting details den. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'so' jate uttor ta logical hoy.

Example: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because too many rules can be tiring. For example, when I was a student, I sometimes felt exhausted by strict rules and wished to skip school. Therefore, schools should have limited rules to give students some freedom.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar ar vocabulary khub bhalo korte hobe. Apni clear ar simple sentence use korun. Specific example diye uttor ta bistarito korun. Linking words use korun jate uttor logical hoy.

Example: Yes, I had a strict teacher once. For example, one day I wore sandals instead of shoes because my leg was hurt, but she did not accept my excuse. She made me stand outside the classroom as a punishment.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar ar sentence structure improve korte hobe. Apni clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor supporting details den. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'if' jate uttor ta logical hoy.

Example: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because rules are necessary. If there were no rules, students might not be responsible or listen to their teachers. Therefore, some rules are important to maintain discipline.

× Is there a lot of rules at my school?

✓ Are there a lot of rules at my school?

The phrase 'a lot of rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a common error in subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are'.

× When I was in school the uniform was mandatory and also right now is mandatory

✓ When I was in school the uniform was mandatory and also right now it is mandatory

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'is mandatory'. Also, 'right now' refers to present tense, so 'is' is correct but needs the subject for clarity.

× if I being late I have to stay outside of my school till the assembly done and the teacher.

✓ if I am late I have to stay outside of my school until the assembly is done and the teacher arrives.

'Being' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'am' for present tense. Also, 'till the assembly done and the teacher' is incomplete; it should be 'until the assembly is done and the teacher arrives' for clarity and correct verb forms.

× Guess it help us student to be responsible about their life.

✓ I guess it helps us students to be responsible for our lives.

'Guess' should be 'I guess' to be a complete sentence. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'us'. 'Responsible about' should be 'responsible for'. 'Their life' should be 'our lives' to match 'us'.

× I teacher are always gave us homework and if we don't do that they will give up punishment which makes us realize that homework is important in our daily life.

✓ The teacher always gives us homework and if we don't do it, they give us punishment which makes us realize that homework is important in our daily life.

'I teacher are' is incorrect; it should be 'The teacher always gives' (third person singular). 'Gave' should be 'gives' to match present tense. 'Give up punishment' is incorrect; it should be 'give us punishment'. 'Do that' is better as 'do it'.

× We we have to maintain all these things.

✓ We have to maintain all these things.

The repetition 'We we' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'We'.

× Guess we always had a delicate teacher in our every classes.

✓ I guess we always had a dedicated teacher in every class.

'Delicate' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'dedicated'. 'Our every classes' is incorrect; it should be 'every class'.

× They are serious about us, they care about us, they treat us like their own child and and if we don't, if we get stuck in something, they will help us to solve this.

✓ They are serious about us, they care about us, they treat us like their own children and if we get stuck in something, they will help us to solve it.

'Child' should be plural 'children' to agree with plural possessive 'their'. The phrase 'help us to solve this' is better as 'help us to solve it'.

× Sometimes I prefer that have few rules at school is also good because when I was in school I sometimes got exhausted for these rules and I really wish that time that I if I skip school.

✓ Sometimes I prefer that having few rules at school is also good because when I was in school I sometimes got exhausted by these rules and I really wished at that time that I could skip school.

'That have few rules' should be 'that having few rules'. 'Exhausted for' should be 'exhausted by'. 'I really wish that time that I if I skip school' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I really wished at that time that I could skip school'.

× School should be limited. Don't overrule everything so student can be free.

✓ School rules should be limited. Don't overrule everything so students can be free.

'School should be limited' is unclear; it should be 'School rules should be limited'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with general statement.

× Yes, I had strict teacher once, for example I wear sandal instead of shoes one day because my leg is hurt at but she didn't listen to me and lately do the class in empty food.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher once. For example, I wore sandals instead of shoes one day because my leg was hurt, but she didn't listen to me and later made me do the class in an empty room.

'Wear' should be past tense 'wore'. 'Sandal' should be plural 'sandals'. 'Is hurt at' should be 'was hurt'. 'Lately do the class in empty food' is incorrect; corrected to 'later made me do the class in an empty room'.

× Uh, no, because rules should be everywhere. Uh, if there was no rules, student don't be responsible in future or do not, uh, listen to their teacher at all.

✓ Uh, no, because rules should be everywhere. Uh, if there were no rules, students wouldn't be responsible in the future or listen to their teachers at all.

'If there was no rules' should be 'if there were no rules' (subjunctive mood). 'Student don't be responsible' should be 'students wouldn't be responsible'. 'Do not listen' is better as 'listen' in this context.

× Rules should be there, but they're not so many rules that a student feel in person.

✓ Rules should be there, but there shouldn't be so many rules that a student feels pressured.

'They're not so many rules' is incorrect; it should be 'there shouldn't be so many rules'. 'A student feel in person' is unclear; corrected to 'a student feels pressured' for clarity.