Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct tense and avoiding redundancy. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, when I was in high school, there were rules about uniforms and hairstyles, so I had to follow them during that time.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students because too many rules can restrict their ability to express their personalities and feelings.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Provide more specific details to support your answer.

Example: Yes, when I was in elementary school, my teacher helped me make friends, which I really appreciated because she was very dedicated.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary mistakes and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: In my opinion, fewer rules are better for students because they allow them to express their personalities, which helps them grow in a healthier way.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Be more specific about the teacher's strictness and its impact.

Example: Yes, in high school, I had a very strict teacher who expected us to achieve high scores and follow the rules carefully, which made it a challenging time.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Explain your opinion clearly with linking words.

Example: Not really, because without any rules, the school would be chaotic, so I think working in such an environment would be very difficult.

× Yes, when I was in high school there were some rules like uniform or hairstyles, so I had to follow the rules in the time.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school there were some rules like uniforms or hairstyles, so I had to follow the rules at that time.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'in the time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at that time' to indicate a specific past period.

× If students have more rules, than they will be surpassed by rules.

✓ If students have more rules, then they will be surpassed by rules.

The word 'than' is used for comparisons, but here the correct conjunction is 'then' to indicate a consequence or result.

× Yes, when I was in elementary school my teacher already tried to make my friend for me, so I thanked to her and it was so dedicating.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school my teacher already tried to make a friend for me, so I thanked her and it was so dedicated.

The phrase 'make my friend for me' should be 'make a friend for me' because 'friend' is countable and indefinite here. 'Thanked to her' is incorrect; the correct form is 'thanked her' without 'to'. 'Dedicating' is a verb form; the correct adjective is 'dedicated' to describe the teacher.

× In my opinion, fewer rulers are more beneficial to students because they can show their more personality or features.

✓ In my opinion, fewer rules are more beneficial to students because they can show more of their personality or features.

The word 'rulers' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'. Also, 'their more personality' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'more of their personality'.

× Yes, when I was in high school my teacher was so strict so she arranged asked us to get high score and follow rules properly.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school my teacher was so strict that she asked us to get high scores and follow rules properly.

The phrase 'arranged asked us' is incorrect; it should be 'asked us'. Also, 'high score' should be plural 'high scores' because it refers to multiple scores.

× Not really, because without any rules at school then there will be chaotic.

✓ Not really, because without any rules at school, there will be chaos.

The word 'chaotic' is an adjective and cannot be used after 'there will be'. The correct noun form is 'chaos' to indicate disorder or confusion.