Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use a linking word to contrast moods. Also correct small grammar issues (use 'it depends on my mood' and avoid duplicate words). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: It depends on my mood. When I'm happy, I enjoy chatting with friends because we share jokes and funny videos, but when I'm in a bad mood I prefer to be quiet and spend time alone.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence about current topics and give specific examples; avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to contrast past and present and explain reasons briefly.

Example: We used to talk a lot in 2020, but now we communicate much less. At present we mainly message each other to arrange outings or discuss schoolwork and assignments.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then provide a clear and grammatically correct reason with a specific example. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., 'some friends gossip behind my back').

Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I value deeper conversations. For example, I avoid group chats since some people gossip behind my back and I find one-on-one talks more trustworthy.

Suggestion: Answer directly and eliminate filler words. State the preference and give one clear reason with linking language. Correct phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer in-person communication because I value eye contact').

Example: I prefer to communicate in person because I value eye contact and nonverbal cues, which help me understand people better than messages do.

Suggestion: Keep the answer brief and natural: start with a direct statement, then give a specific reason or a short example. Remove repeated words and use correct term 'friend circle'.

Example: No, I rarely argue with my friends because my friend circle is small and we trust each other, so disagreements are usually resolved quickly.

× Actually depends on my mood.

✓ It actually depends on my mood.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding the subject 'It' completes the clause and clarifies what depends on mood. Suggestion: always include an explicit subject for independent clauses.

× When I am in a good mood, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share jokes and and send funny reels to each other.

✓ When I am in a good mood, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share jokes and send funny reels with each other.

There is a duplicated word 'and' and the preposition use 'to each other' is less natural here; use 'with each other' or simply 'send each other reels.' Also ensure no word duplication. Suggestion: read aloud to catch repeated words and choose the correct preposition for reciprocal actions.

× But when However, when I am in a bad mood, I I prefer to be quiet and spend time alone.

✓ However, when I am in a bad mood, I prefer to be quiet and spend time alone.

There are repeated discourse markers ('But when However, when') and a duplicated pronoun 'I I'. Remove duplicates and choose one connector (e.g., 'However' or 'But') to make the sentence fluent. Suggestion: avoid repeating fillers; edit for a single cohesive connector.

× We used to talk a lot back in 2020.

✓ We used to talk a lot back in 2020.

This sentence is correct; 'used to' correctly indicates a past habitual action. No change needed.

× However, at present we barely talk with each other.

✓ However, at present we barely talk to each other.

The verb 'talk' usually takes the preposition 'to' when indicating speaking with someone in English. Use 'talk to each other' or 'talk with each other'; 'talk to' is more common here. Suggestion: prefer 'talk to each other' in casual contexts.

× We send message when we want to go outside or educational chatting because.

✓ We send messages when we want to go out or when we need to discuss something educational.

Multiple issues: 'message' should be plural 'messages'; 'go outside' is better as 'go out'; 'educational chatting' is awkward and sentence ends with an incomplete 'because.' Rephrase to complete the idea and use appropriate pluralization and parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure parallel structures and finish clauses introduced by 'because.'

× I believe to chat with only one friend because I believe in quality rather than quantity.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I believe in quality rather than quantity.

The phrase 'I believe to chat' is incorrect. Use 'I prefer to chat' to express preference. The rest is fine. Suggestion: use verbs that match the intended meaning (prefer for choices).

× For example, some of my friend one of my friends beaches behind my back about me so I I I love to avoid that type of.

✓ For example, one of my friends talks behind my back, so I like to avoid that type of person.

This sentence has several errors: 'some of my friend one of my friends' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'beaches' is a wrong word (should be 'talks') and 'behind my back about me' is awkward; duplicated 'I I I'; sentence ends incomplete 'that type of.' Correction fixes subject plurality ('friends'), verb choice ('talks behind my back'), removes repetition, and completes the noun phrase 'that type of person.' Suggestion: choose the correct verb, ensure subject-verb agreement, and finish noun phrases. },{