Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "the yes", "disadvantage of conversation").

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually use apps like WhatsApp and Instagram, and I often message my best friend Aryan to discuss topics such as schoolwork or plans for the weekend.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a topic sentence then specific examples. Use linking words (for example, and, also, such as) and avoid unclear words like "tragedy" if you mean "events". Keep sentences simple and grammatical.

Example: I usually chat about daily life and plans. For example, we talk about our routines, upcoming events, and share jokes or memes to cheer each other up.

Suggestion: Make a clear preference statement and explain with one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar and linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid repeating phrases.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for a more personal and direct conversation. For example, I can discuss private thoughts and get focused advice without interruptions.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (say "face-to-face") and avoid redundancy. Provide one concise example of when face-to-face is better.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it lets you see emotions and body language. For instance, when discussing sensitive issues or giving support, meeting in person is much clearer than texting.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason and one example. Use correct grammar and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "government are produ"). Keep to one or two sentences with linking words such as "when" or "because".

Example: Sometimes I argue with friends, especially when we discuss politics, because we have different opinions. For example, last month we disagreed about a new government policy and had a long debate.

× Yes, the yes, I like chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends.

The phrase contains an unnecessary repeated word 'the yes'. Remove the extra word to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Use 'I like chatting with my friends.' as a simple present statement about a habitual activity.

× Most of the time I'm chatting in different types of social media apps just like Snapchat, WhatsApp, Instagram and mostly I chat with my best friend Aryan on WhatsApp to discuss a disadvantage of conversation in different topics.

✓ Most of the time I chat on different social media apps like Snapchat, WhatsApp, and Instagram, and I mostly chat with my best friend Aryan on WhatsApp to discuss the disadvantages of conversations on different topics.

Use simple present 'I chat' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm chatting' when describing general routines. Use 'social media apps' (no 'types of'), 'like' instead of 'just like', and plural 'disadvantages' and 'conversations' to match meaning.

× I usually chat with my friend.

✓ I usually chat with my friends.

If the student refers to chatting with friends in general, use plural 'friends'. If meant singular, specify 'a friend' or name the friend. Here context implies plural, so change to 'friends'.

× What can I do in my daily routine?

✓ What do I do in my daily routine?

When asking about habitual actions, use 'do' for present simple questions, not 'can'. 'Can' asks about ability or permission. Use 'What do I do in my daily routine?' to ask about typical activities.

× Which type of tragedy and different types of activity in doing?

✓ What kinds of activities do I do, and are there any unfortunate events or difficulties I experience?

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'What kinds of activities do I do?' for activities and rephrase the 'tragedy' part clearly if meaning difficulties or problems. Form a proper question with auxiliary 'do' for present simple.

× We can explain everything and also create different types of jokes and also share in memes deals that not do any types of thing activity to do.

✓ We can explain things, make different kinds of jokes, and share memes; sometimes we don't do any real activities.

Original has redundant 'also' and incorrect phrasing. Use concise verbs 'explain', 'make', 'share'. Clarify the last idea: 'not do any real activities' rather than 'not do any types of thing activity to do'.

× In my personal opinion, I prefer to chat with a single person because group of people not be not be able to explain your personal things and thoughts by single people to give a direct connection and give a different type of activities.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to chat with a single person because a group cannot help you explain personal things and thoughts as directly as one-on-one conversation, and one-on-one chats allow for more personal interactions.

Use 'In my opinion' (more natural than 'In my personal opinion'). Use 'a group' with an article. Use correct auxiliary 'cannot' or 'can't' for negative. Rephrase to compare group vs one-on-one clearly and use consistent nouns/verbs.

× I mostly prefer to communicate a face to face because they have lots of thing you are not sure in social media.

✓ I mostly prefer to communicate face to face because there are many things you cannot be sure of on social media.

Do not use 'a' before 'face to face'. Use 'there are many things' and the correct modal 'cannot be sure of' and preposition 'on social media'.

× That's why I communicate with face to face because show your emotion, feeling, thoughts and expression.

✓ That's why I prefer face-to-face communication: it lets you show your emotions, feelings, thoughts, and expressions.

Use 'prefer face-to-face communication' or 'prefer to communicate face to face'. Include articles and plural nouns 'emotions, feelings'. Sentence needs subject 'it' to show what allows these expressions.

× Also because there are lots of things you're not showing your social media that's why I prefer face to face.

✓ Also, there are many things you don't show on social media, so I prefer face-to-face communication.

Avoid double connectors 'Also because' and 'that's why'. Use 'don't show on social media' and 'so' to link cause and preference. Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective.

× They are depend on which types of conversation are doing then mostly most of time I'm talk about a politic that why I argue with my friends in different types of topic and recently government are produ government are give a arrival.

✓ It depends on the type of conversation. Most of the time I talk about politics, which is why I argue with my friends about different topics. Recently, the government announced something.

Use 'It depends' (not 'They are depend'). Use singular 'type' with 'depends'. Use 'talk about politics' (uncountable) and 'which is why' for cause. 'Argument with friends about different topics' is correct. The final clause was unclear; simplify to 'the government announced something' or specify the announcement. Use correct verb forms and subject-verb agreement.