Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural, concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect word order, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words for coherence and vary vocabulary (e.g., “chat” alternatives).

Example: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends throughout the day, discussing everything from small daily details to longer conversations about our plans. It helps us stay connected and support each other.

Suggestion: Give a structured response: state main topics, then give 1–2 specific examples. Avoid filler words (“uh”), improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and clarity. Use linking words like “for example” or “especially”.

Example: We talk about a wide range of things. For example, we share personal matters and study-related questions, and sometimes we help each other solve technical problems with apps or devices.

Suggestion: Answer directly then support briefly. Correct grammar (use “creates” not “create”) and avoid redundancy. Explain why with one clear reason and an example. Use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Example: I prefer chatting with groups because it helps me build friendships and feel more outgoing. For instance, group chats let us coordinate events and share different opinions easily.

Suggestion: Be concise and accurate: state preference, give 1–2 specific reasons and avoid vague phrases. Improve grammar (“you can sense someone’s presence”, “you can’t get the exact impression”). Use linking words like “because” and “however”.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and you can read body language. However, social media is useful when meeting in person isn’t possible.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer, then explain briefly with a clear cause and resolution. Fix grammar (use “my friends and I”, “different mindsets”, “which can make communication difficult”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a linking word like “however” or “but”.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different mindsets. However, we talk it through afterwards and usually resolve the disagreement calmly.

× I and my friend chat all day.

✓ My friend and I chat all day.

The subject pronoun order in English places the speaker last (My friend and I). 'I and my friend' is nonstandard. Also use 'My friend and I' to maintain correct subject pronoun order.

× We talk about from tiny to tiny details to a large conversation on chats.

✓ We talk about everything from tiny details to large topics in our chats.

The phrase used incorrect prepositions and repetition. Use 'about everything from X to Y' and 'in our chats' to indicate medium. 'Large conversation' is unnatural; 'large topics' or 'big issues' is better.

× Chatting is our favorite thing to do on social media.

✓ Chatting is our favorite thing to do on social media.

No correction necessary; sentence is correct. Included for completeness to show no change needed.

× It connects my friend and me throughout the day.

✓ It connects my friend and me throughout the day.

Sentence is correct as written; 'my friend and me' is correct object order. Included to indicate no change.

× From tiny details to huge conversations and mainly our secrets of life to some uh, technological, uh, problems to till uh, curricular subjects.

✓ We discuss everything from tiny details to huge conversations, from personal secrets to technological problems and curricular subjects.

Original had incorrect connectors and filler words. Use parallel structure 'from A to B, from C to D' and remove fillers. 'Till' is incorrect here; 'to' or 'and' is appropriate.

× We discuss everything on chats.

✓ We discuss everything in our chats.

Use 'in our chats' rather than 'on chats' for natural collocation. 'On chats' is not idiomatic.

× We that's why we are best friends.

✓ That's why we are best friends.

Remove the extra subject 'We' and start with 'That's why...' to form a correct clause. The original had a fragment and redundant pronoun.

× We chat bold with each other.

✓ We speak openly with each other.

'Chat bold' is ungrammatical; use 'speak openly' or 'chat boldly'. 'Speak openly' is more natural for describing candid conversation.

× I prefer talking to lots of people in life and that's create a great bond and friendship between me and other people and that makes me more extroverted in life.

✓ I prefer talking to lots of people, and that creates great bonds and friendships between me and others; it makes me more extroverted.

Subject-verb agreement: 'that's create' should be 'that creates'. Improve noun plurality and pronoun usage: 'bonds and friendships', 'me and others' becomes 'me and others' or 'between me and other people'. Remove repetitive 'in life'.

× I love chatting with loads of people and to create a community among ourselves.

✓ I love chatting with loads of people and creating a community among us.

Use parallel gerund forms: 'chatting' and 'creating'. 'Among ourselves' is awkward here; 'among us' is more natural.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than meeting someone on social media because in face to face conversation it's more like open conversation and you can have some physical sense of presence of other people.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than through social media because face-to-face conversation is more open and you can have a physical sense of the other person's presence.

Use 'through social media' not 'on social media' for contrast, hyphenate 'face-to-face' when used adjectivally, and restructure 'physical sense of presence of other people' to 'physical sense of the other person's presence.'

× When in social media, in the virtual screen you can't get the exactly the person or is heard.

✓ On social media, through a screen you can't really get the exact person or hear them properly.

Use 'on social media' and 'through a screen'. Remove extra 'the' before 'exactly' and fix verb phrase: 'or be heard' -> 'or hear them properly.' Original had pronoun and verb issues and word order problems.

× Yes, of course arguments are natural among people who used to communicate on daily basis.

✓ Yes, of course arguments are natural among people who communicate on a daily basis.

Use present tense 'communicate' rather than 'used to communicate' which implies past habit. Add article 'a' before 'daily basis' and remove unnecessary comma.

× I and my friend for example, argued a lot during conversations because we have different mindset and which make us difficult to talk to with each other.

✓ My friend and I, for example, argue a lot during conversations because we have different mindsets, which makes it difficult for us to talk to each other.

Order pronouns 'My friend and I'. Use present tense 'argue' to match habitual action. 'Different mindset' -> 'different mindsets'. 'Which make' should be 'which makes' to agree with singular 'which' referring to the situation; rephrase 'difficult to talk to with each other' to 'difficult for us to talk to each other.'

× But we resolved it later on.

✓ But we resolved it later.

Sentence is acceptable; 'later on' is informal but not incorrect. 'Resolved it later' is more concise. Included to show minor stylistic improvement.