Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct repetition/grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, and add one specific example to support your view. Use linking words briefly to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially my best friend. I find conversations help strengthen our relationship and help me relax after studying. For example, we often talk about our day and share funny stories, which makes us feel closer.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence then list specific topics with linking words and a brief example. Fix grammar (prepositions and word choice) and avoid filler words.

Example: We usually talk about a variety of topics. Generally we discuss our studies and assignments, but at weekends or during vacations we chat about fashion or viral videos. For instance, last weekend we shared opinions about a popular music video.

Suggestion: Reply directly and correct grammar: use clear comparative language and give a reason with one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because one-on-one conversations tend to be deeper and more relaxed. For example, when it's only the two of us, we can talk about personal issues without interruptions.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and a concise reason. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'face-to-face communication' and 'body language provides more information'). Provide a short specific example comparing both modes.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it strengthens relationships and allows me to read body language. For example, when we talk in person I can tell if a friend is upset, which I might miss in a text message.

Suggestion: Avoid tense errors and hesitations. State directly whether you argue, give a reason and an example of a positive outcome. Use linking words and remove fillers like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, and I think that's normal because people have different opinions. For instance, after a disagreement about plans, we talked it through and ended up understanding each other better.

× I really like chatting with my friend, especially my best friend, and I think chatting is a good way to strengthen strengthen our relationship and help me to relax.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends, especially my best friend, and I think chatting is a good way to strengthen our relationships and help me relax.

Use plural 'friends' and 'relationships' when referring generally to friendships; also 'help me relax' is correct verb pattern (help + base verb). Remove duplicate word 'strengthen'. ID:1

× So I think chatting is the popular way to connect each other.

✓ So I think chatting is a popular way to connect with each other.

Include article 'a' before 'popular' and use correct preposition 'connect with' and add 'each other' after it. Original sentence structure and preposition were incorrect. ID:26

× Well, actually we talk about all kinds of things because we are students.

✓ Well, actually we talk about all kinds of things because we are students.

Sentence is acceptable; present simple is correct for habitual action. No change needed. (No ID change required.) ID:6

× So basically we talk about study, but in we can in weekend day or some vacation, we always talk about outfits or some video.

✓ So basically we talk about studying, but on weekends or during vacations we always talk about outfits or watch videos.

Use gerund 'studying' after 'talk about'; use prepositions 'on weekends' and 'during vacations'; 'watch videos' is clearer than 'some video'. This fixes noun/verb forms and preposition errors. ID:1

× Well, I think it's undeniable that they are a good way, but I prefer to with only one friend because I think talking with only one friend the communication will be deeply and more relaxed.

✓ Well, I think group chats are a good way, but I prefer to be with only one friend because I think talking with one friend allows communication to be deeper and more relaxed.

Replace vague 'they' with 'group chats'; use 'prefer to be with' not 'prefer to with'; use 'allows' to link subject and predicate; comparative adverb 'deeper' and 'more relaxed' are correct. Fixes subject reference, infinitive usage and adjective/adverb choice. ID:2

× Well I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communicate is good way to strengthen my and I and my friends relationship and I can see their body languages is provide more.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because face-to-face communication is a good way to strengthen my relationship with my friends, and I can see their body language which provides more information.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective, 'communication' noun, 'strengthen my relationship with my friends' uses correct preposition, 'body language' is uncountable singular, and 'provides more information' completes the clause. Fixes multiple preposition and noun errors. ID:11

× Yes, I was argued with my friend because I think it is very normal situation because, uh, everyone has different uh, emotions and, uh, thinking.

✓ Yes, I have argued with my friend because I think it is a very normal situation; everyone has different emotions and ways of thinking.

Use present perfect 'have argued' to indicate experience; remove passive 'was argued'; add article 'a' before 'very normal situation'; replace 'thinking' with 'ways of thinking' or 'thoughts' for clarity. ID:5

× So I think argue is not a bad way to, uh, strengthen our relationship. We can, uh, express.

✓ So I think arguing is not a bad way to strengthen our relationship. We can express ourselves.

Use gerund 'arguing' as the noun subject; 'express ourselves' is the correct reflexive pronoun and verb pattern to indicate expressing one's feelings. This fixes verb form and pronoun use. ID:8