Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Shorten and organize your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, word order).

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, we often share updates about work or study, and this helps me feel supported and less stressed.

Suggestion: Be more concise and use clearer linking words. Give one specific example to make the content concrete and avoid filler words like “uh.” Check verb forms (e.g., 'we chat' not 'we always chatting').

Example: We usually chat about everyday life, work and study. For instance, last week a friend asked for advice about job applications, and we discussed interview tips and CV improvements.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two precise reasons with linking words. Correct phrasing and word choice: 'one-on-one' and 'takes more energy.' Avoid trailing off at the end.

Example: I prefer to chat one-on-one because group conversations can be noisy and tiring. Also, one-on-one talks are more private, so I can discuss personal issues more comfortably.

Suggestion: Use a clear structure: state your preference, give two reasons with linking words, and avoid hesitations. Fix grammar (e.g., 'social media can reduce concentration' or 'seem disrespectful').

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can distract people and make conversations less meaningful. For example, when someone checks their phone during a chat, it feels rude and reduces the quality of the discussion.

Suggestion: Respond with a direct statement and one specific explanation using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'we rarely argue' and 'we discuss and respect each other').

Example: I rarely argue with my friends because when we have different opinions, we calmly discuss them and try to understand each other. For example, if we disagree about plans, we talk it through and find a compromise.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because chatting with them we I will feel more relaxed and we will talk a lot of topic and like work life in the study every every topic context.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I chat with them I feel more relaxed and we talk about many topics, such as work and study.

Original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order: 'chatting with them we I will feel' mixes subjects and future tense incorrectly. The phrase 'talk a lot of topic' uses noun count and missing preposition. Use present simple for general preferences ('I like', 'I feel', 'we talk') and 'talk about many topics' for correct verb + preposition and plural noun 'topics'. Also reduce redundancy and unclear phrases like 'every every topic context'.

× Most of the time we always chatting about life, work or study, uh, all about our uh, uh, families or sometimes about uh, problems. We need some uh, advice for each other.

✓ Most of the time we are chatting about life, work, or study, and also about our families or sometimes our problems. We give each other advice.

'we always chatting' needs the auxiliary 'are' for present continuous ('we are always chatting') or use present simple 'we always chat'. 'all about our families' is fine but redundant filler removed. Second sentence uses passive/awkward phrasing 'We need some advice for each other' — better as 'We give each other advice' to express reciprocal action. Remove fillers 'uh'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think chat with a group of people is very noisy and will take my more energy and I think 1 by chat with 1 by 1 is more private and more.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think chatting with a group of people is very noisy and uses more of my energy, and one-on-one chats are more private.

Use gerund 'chatting' after 'think' to refer to the activity. 'will take my more energy' is ungrammatical — use 'uses more of my energy' or 'is more tiring'. Replace '1 by chat with 1 by 1' with 'one-on-one chats'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun phrases.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think communicate by social media. It can umm unconcentrate on this conversation is not respect my friends or family or or person. So I like to communicate.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because communicating via social media can make it hard to concentrate on the conversation and can feel disrespectful to friends or family. So I like face-to-face communication.

Use 'communicating via' or 'on' social media for correct preposition. 'unconcentrate' is not a word; use 'make it hard to concentrate'. 'is not respect my friends' should be 'can feel disrespectful to friends'. Maintain consistent gerund forms and clearer noun phrases.

× I'm not very often argue with my friends because if we uh, made different opinions, we will, uh, discuss this topic. Uh, and uh, respect uh, each, uh, each, uh, each, each each.

✓ I don't often argue with my friends because if we have different opinions, we discuss the topic and respect each other.

'I'm not very often argue' is incorrect; use 'I don't often argue' (present simple negative). 'if we made different opinions' mixes tenses; use 'if we have different opinions' (present simple) for general situations. 'we will discuss' can be simplified to 'we discuss' in habitual context. Use the reciprocal pronoun 'each other' to express mutual respect. Remove filler sounds.