Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and concise phrasing. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Correct verb forms, subject-verb agreement and prepositions. Add one brief specific example to support your statement.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends and we usually talk every day. Our conversations cover many topics, such as politics, hobbies, and plans for the coming weeks. For example, last night we discussed a weekend trip we are planning.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct topic sentence and use correct plural/singular forms. Use linking words to list topics and provide a specific detail or short example to make it more vivid.

Example: We talk about a variety of things, but most often we discuss our hobbies and travel plans. For instance, we recently planned a three-day trip to a nearby city and divided who will book accommodation and transport. We also sometimes talk about our boyfriends and personal relationships.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence and use correct pronouns and grammar. Explain reasons using linking words (because, however) and give one brief specific example. Avoid unclear or irrelevant words.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel safer sharing all my ideas. However, I avoid large groups because I often worry about what others will think. For example, when I discuss my plans with one close friend I feel more confident and open.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and correct grammar. Use linking words to add supporting points and one short concrete example. Use vocabulary like "face-to-face", "social media", "reduce misunderstandings" correctly.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because you can easily see a person's reactions, such as facial expressions and body language. This reduces misunderstandings that often happen online. For example, when we discuss plans in person, it's easier to agree on details quickly.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and clarify with reasons and a concise example. Improve grammar (collocations like "misunderstandings", "it's healthy") and use linking words (because, for example). Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, but that's normal because of misunderstandings or small mistakes. I think arguing can be healthy because it allows us to speak openly about problems and resolve them. For example, after a disagreement about plans, we talked it through and agreed on a solution.

× I adjourn was having with friends, usually we chat every day.

✓ I usually spend time with friends; we chat every day.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and word order ('I adjourn was having with friends') which makes it ungrammatical. This fits 'Sentence structure errors'. Use a clear subject-verb phrase: 'I usually spend time with friends' and then a related independent clause 'we chat every day'. Also place the adverb 'usually' before the main verb to show frequency.

× Our topic are very diverse from politics, hobby until a lot of planning next weeks.

✓ Our topics are very diverse, from politics and hobbies to a lot of planning for the next few weeks.

The head noun should be plural 'topics' to match plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also prepositions and conjunctions were incorrect: use 'from... to...' and pluralize 'hobby' to 'hobbies'. Use 'for the next few weeks' to express future time range.

× Our topic are really diverse.

✓ Our topics are really diverse.

The noun should be plural 'topics' to agree with the plural predicate 'are'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Most often we talk about hobby and our plan of travelling together.

✓ Most often we talk about hobbies and our plans for travelling together.

The sentence used singular nouns where plurals were expected and an awkward phrase 'plan of travelling'. Use 'hobbies' and 'plans for travelling' for natural English. This is a sentence structure and word choice correction.

× But the other thing we also talk about our boyfriends.

✓ We also talk about other things, like our boyfriends.

Original word order 'But the other thing we also talk about our boyfriends' is awkward and misuses 'other'. Rephrase to 'We also talk about other things, like our boyfriends.' This corrects pronoun/determiner use and improves clarity.

× Are people shopping are weird only one friend because I feel safer communicating all my ideas to 1 friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel safer communicating all my ideas to one person.

Original is ungrammatical and contains wrong word order and fragments ('Are people shopping are weird'). Reconstruct sentence to express preference: 'I prefer chatting with only one friend' and replace '1' with the word 'one'. Also 'one person' avoids repeating 'friend' unnecessarily. This is sentence structure correction.

× On the other side, I feel frightened to communicate in a big group because I was afraid of their opinion about.

✓ On the other hand, I feel frightened to communicate in a big group because I am afraid of their opinions.

Use the idiom 'on the other hand' not 'on the other side'. Tense should be present 'I am afraid' to match current preference. Remove the unnecessary 'about' and pluralize 'opinions'. This corrects pronoun/determiner and tense consistency.

× I prefer to so many kids face to face because you can easily see people reaction to your reply.

✓ I prefer to meet people face to face because you can easily see their reactions to your replies.

Original has extra words 'so many kids' that don't fit and incorrect phrase 'face to face' placement. Replace with 'meet people face to face'. Use plural 'reactions' and 'replies' and possessive 'their'. This is sentence structure and word choice correction.

× You can see the emotion, the body language.

✓ You can see the emotions and body language.

Use plural 'emotions' and join items with 'and' for natural listing. Articles before abstract nouns are unnecessary here. This fixes adjective/noun usage.

× Communicating face to face would a lesson misunderstanding that can happen in social.

✓ Communicating face to face would result in fewer misunderstandings than communicating via social media.

Original is missing a verb ('would a lesson') and uses awkward comparison 'in social'. Provide a clear comparative structure: 'would result in fewer misunderstandings than communicating via social media.' This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× It is impossible not to argue with a friend, mostly because of the simple mistake or simple understanding.

✓ It is impossible not to argue with a friend, mostly because of simple mistakes or misunderstandings.

Use plural nouns 'mistakes' and 'misunderstandings' for general statements. 'Simple understanding' is incorrect; use 'misunderstandings'. This is subject-verb and noun form correction.

× It doesn't really matter at all because arguing with a friend is very healthy.

✓ It doesn't really matter because arguing with a friend can be very healthy.

Original is mostly acceptable but 'is very healthy' is absolute; 'can be very healthy' is more natural. Adjusts modality for nuance. Also remove redundant 'at all'. This corrects modal shading.

× We can communicate openly what's wrong and solve them together.

✓ We can communicate openly about what is wrong and solve it together.

Use 'about what is wrong' rather than direct object inversion. 'Solve them together' mismatches singular 'what is wrong' so use 'solve it together' or pluralize both. This corrects pronoun reference and sentence structure.