Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "broaden my horizon" without example—give a brief concrete example. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because I often learn new ideas from them. For example, last week a friend recommended a podcast about productivity, which helped me change my study routine. So conversations not only teach me practical tips but also inspire me to try new things.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and linking words. Be specific about topics and give one example. Avoid awkward phrasing like "tracked the study major" and "checked the video game"—use natural collocations (discuss our courses, play or talk about video games).

Example: We usually talk about our courses and assignments, and sometimes about video games we enjoy. For instance, we discuss project deadlines for our major and after that we chat about a multiplayer game we play together on weekends.

Suggestion: Answer directly and then give a concise reason with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" naturally, and correct word choice (happier, learn new skills). Keep sentences well-formed and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer chatting in a group because it feels livelier and I can learn different perspectives. For example, when we discuss a project together, each person shares a different approach and I pick up new study techniques.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and support it with a specific, natural reason. Use better phrasing like "talk about details" or "discuss things more clearly" and add a short example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to discuss details and read body language. For example, when planning a group assignment in person we can immediately clarify roles and avoid misunderstandings.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatically correct response and explain briefly how conflicts are resolved. Avoid unclear phrasing and repetition. Use linking words like "but" or "however" and provide a short example of how you handle disagreements.

Example: Not often. However, sometimes we disagree about advice or decisions, and when that happens we discuss calmly and try to reach a compromise. For example, when choosing a project topic, we vote or combine ideas so everyone feels included.

× Yes, because it can make me learn something new and it can also broaden my horizon.

✓ Yes, because it helps me learn new things and it can also broaden my horizons.

The original sentence uses 'can make me learn' which is awkward for habitual ability; use simple present 'helps me learn' for regular effects. 'Something new' is better as 'new things' and 'horizon' should be plural 'horizons' which is the idiomatic expression. Suggestion: Use simple present verbs for regular actions and choose idiomatic noun forms.

× Because we are students, so we also tracked the study major and we also checked the video game what we like.

✓ Because we are students, we also talk about our majors and the video games we like.

The original uses both 'Because' and 'so' together (redundant conjunctions) and incorrect verb forms 'tracked' and 'checked' for ongoing discussions. 'What we like' is a wrong relative clause; use 'the video games we like.' Suggestion: Do not combine 'because' and 'so'; use present simple 'talk about' for habitual actions and correct relative clause order.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because the more people I chat with, the more happy I will get and I can learn more skills.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because the more people I chat with, the happier I become and I can learn more skills.

Use 'happier' (comparative adjective) instead of 'more happy.' Also use present simple 'become' or 'I am' for general truths rather than future 'I will get.' Suggestion: Use comparative adjective forms and the appropriate tense for general statements.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face can talk to some details.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in-person conversation allows us to discuss details.

Repeating 'face to face' as a subject is awkward; use 'in-person conversation' or 'face-to-face communication.' 'Can talk to some details' is ungrammatical; use 'allows us to discuss details.' Suggestion: Use appropriate noun phrases for modes of communication and verbs like 'discuss' with direct objects.

× Not often, but when our advice was knocked at at four others will argue and we but we also friendly each other.

✓ Not often, but when there is disagreement among four others, they argue; however, we remain friendly with each other.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'advice was knocked at' is incorrect; unclear subject and tense. Rewritten to convey that when four others disagree they argue, but the speaker and friends stay friendly. Use 'there is disagreement' and 'remain friendly with each other.' Suggestion: State the situation clearly with correct subjects and verbs, avoid literal translations, and use 'remain friendly with each other' for continued friendliness.