Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes, I like it because at least that way I stay in touch with them even if we don't have opportunity to meet in real life, for example, we are far from each other or because of schedule.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Usually it doesn't have important reason, we just share each other memes. Sometimes we ask for each other about some advices.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
Actually it doesn't have any importance for me, but how I do. As usual I chat only with one friend because it's more convenient for me rather than chatting in a group, because if I wanna say about something it can be you don't notice it by others.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Personally I will choose face to face because in that way you can see the emotion of that person and you can understand what he really says rather than in social medias. By chatting you can cheat any emotional features.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Yes, I could have any conflict with my friends, but it happens rarely. And.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: Говорите короче и естественнее: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения. Избегайте лишних слов и грамматических ошибок (например, "we don't have the opportunity" и "because of our schedules"). Используйте связку: "because" и пример.
Example: Yes, I do. Chatting helps me stay in touch when we live far apart or have busy schedules, for example, to share updates about work or family.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Упрощайте и делайте фразы грамматически правильными: используйте конкретику и связки (e.g., "mostly", "sometimes"). Исправьте фразы: "share memes" и "ask each other for advice". Укажите пару конкретных тем.
Example: Mostly we share memes and funny videos. Sometimes we ask each other for advice about work, relationships, or travel plans.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: Сформулируйте короткий чёткий ответ и объяснение с логичными связками. Исправьте ошибки: "it doesn't matter to me" и "I usually chat with one friend". Уточните причину ясно: удобство и возможность выразиться.
Example: I don't mind either way, but I usually prefer chatting one-on-one because it's easier to have a private conversation and make sure the other person notices what I say.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: Давайте прямой ответ и короткие четкие причины с корректной лексикой: "face-to-face" и "social media". Избегайте нелитературных выражений как "cheat any emotional features" — лучше: "miss emotional cues". Используйте связки: "because" и "for example".
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps you understand emotions better; for example, sarcasm is clear in person but often missed online.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Дайте завершённый ответ: короткое утверждение и объяснение с примером. Исправьте конструкции: "I sometimes have conflicts with my friends, but it happens rarely." Избегайте недоговорок и обрывов. Добавьте причину или последствия и используйте связки: "but", "because", "for example".
Example: Yes, sometimes we argue, but it doesn't happen often; usually disagreements are about small things like plans or opinions, and we resolve them quickly by talking it through.
× Yes, I like it because at least that way I stay in touch with them even if we don't have opportunity to meet in real life, for example, we are far from each other or because of schedule.
✓ Yes, I like it because at least that way I stay in touch with them even if we don't have the opportunity to meet in real life, for example if we are far from each other or because of our schedules.
Используйте определенный артикль 'the' перед существительным 'opportunity', когда речь идет о конкретной возможности. Фраза 'because of schedule' должна быть 'because of our schedules' или 'because of a busy schedule' для естественного английского. Также добавлено 'if' перед 'we are far' для ясности. Советы: используйте 'the opportunity' для конкретной ситуации и согласуйте число (schedule -> schedules) или добавьте притяжательное местоимение.
× Usually it doesn't have important reason, we just share each other memes. Sometimes we ask for each other about some advices.
✓ Usually there isn't an important reason; we just share memes with each other. Sometimes we ask each other for advice.
Первая часть: некорректная структура 'it doesn't have important reason' заменена на 'there isn't an important reason' (There be issue + article). Также 'share each other memes' неверно — правильный порядок 'share memes with each other'. Во второй части 'ask for each other about some advices' неверный порядок и форма: 'ask each other for advice' (uncountable), 'advices' неверно. Советы: используйте 'with each other' после 'share', и 'ask each other for advice'; 'advice' неисчисляемое.
× Actually it doesn't have any importance for me, but how I do. As usual I chat only with one friend because it's more convenient for me rather than chatting in a group, because if I wanna say about something it can be you don't notice it by others.
✓ Actually it isn't important to me, but it depends on how I feel. Usually I chat only with one friend because it's more convenient for me than chatting in a group, because if I want to say something others might not notice it.
'It doesn't have any importance for me' лучше как 'It isn't important to me'. 'but how I do' неясно — заменено на 'but it depends on how I feel'. 'Rather than chatting' should compare gerunds: 'more convenient for me than chatting'. 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'say about something' -> 'say something'. Порядок слов и объект внимания исправлены: 'you don't notice it by others' -> 'others might not notice it'. Советы: избегайте разговорных 'wanna' в формальной речи, используйте parallel structure in comparisons.
× Personally I will choose face to face because in that way you can see the emotion of that person and you can understand what he really says rather than in social medias.
✓ Personally I would choose face to face because in that way you can see the emotions of the person and you can understand what they really mean, rather than on social media.
'I will choose' лучше заменять на 'I would choose' при выражении предпочтения (modal nuance) — можно использовать 'I prefer' as alternative. 'Emotion' -> plural 'emotions'. 'What he really says' assumes gender; use gender-neutral 'they' or 'the person'. 'Social medias' incorrect plural; correct 'social media'. Предлог: 'on social media' not 'in social medias'. Советы: используйте 'I prefer' or 'I would choose'; use 'on social media' and gender-neutral pronouns.
× By chatting you can cheat any emotional features.
✓ By chatting you can miss or misinterpret many emotional cues.
Фраза 'cheat any emotional features' некорректна и непонятна. Правильнее 'miss' или 'misinterpret emotional cues' или 'emotional signals'. 'Features' не подходит для эмоций. Советы: используйте 'emotional cues' или 'emotional signals' и глаголы 'miss'/'misinterpret'.
× Yes, I could have any conflict with my friends, but it happens rarely. And.
✓ Yes, I could have conflicts with my friends, but it happens rarely.
'Could have any conflict' некорректно: 'could have conflicts' или 'might have a conflict'. 'Any' неуместно в утверждении. Удалено лишнее 'And.' в конце. Советы: используйте 'might' или 'could' для возможности, и используйте множественное число 'conflicts' или 'a conflict' исходя из контекста.