Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., tense, article use). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Not really. I prefer meeting friends in person because texting feels draining and I often don’t have time during the day. For example, face-to-face meetings are quicker and more satisfying than long message threads.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples connected by linking words. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases like “that just.”

Example: We usually talk about everyday life. For instance, friends often tell me about relationship problems, their gym routines, or things happening at work.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, and). Avoid filler phrases and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer group chats because they’re less demanding and I don’t have to carry the whole conversation. Also, having several people chatting prevents awkward silences and keeps the mood light.

Suggestion: Make your main point clear, then support it with one or two specific reasons and a brief example. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., ‘interpret’). Avoid repeating the same idea and unclear phrases like “emotions to the world.”

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, when a friend tells me about a problem in person, I can respond immediately and offer comfort, which is harder over text.

Suggestion: Begin with a concise direct answer, then explain the typical situation with a clear example. Fix redundancy and grammar (e.g., ‘I do argue sometimes’ not ‘a lot’ if you then say you avoid huge arguments). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I sometimes argue with friends, but I avoid big fights. Usually the disagreements happen when they ask for advice about personal problems, and I might suggest what not to do and explain my point calmly.

× No I don't like chatting with friends at all. I prefer meeting them in person with Chatting or texting is about energy consuming for me and I do have a lot of things to do during the day so I don't always have the time for them for the shot.

✓ No, I don't like chatting with friends at all. I prefer meeting them in person because chatting or texting is energy-consuming for me, and I have a lot to do during the day, so I don't always have time for them.

This sentence contains multiple sentence structure problems: run-on sentences and improper connectors. 'with Chatting or texting is about energy consuming for me' is ungrammatical. Use a conjunction 'because' to explain reason and hyphenate 'energy-consuming'. Remove redundant words like 'the' in 'the time' and 'for the shot'. Improve punctuation by splitting into two clear sentences. ID:26

× They usually shared with me about their last relationship disaster or their gym or workout routine or that just their daily life.

✓ They usually share with me about their latest relationship disasters, their gym or workout routines, or just their daily lives.

Pronoun/verb form and plurality issues: 'They usually shared' (past) conflicts with 'usually' (habitual) — use present 'share'. 'Last relationship disaster' should be plural if referring to different people; 'gym or workout routine' should match plural 'routines'. Also remove unnecessary preposition 'with' after 'share' in this context or keep 'share with me' but adjust tense. ID:12

× No, I prefer to chat with group because that way I don't have to talk all the time and it's less energy consuming or less draining.

✓ No, I prefer to chat with a group because that way I don't have to talk all the time and it's less energy-consuming or less draining.

Missing article before 'group' — use 'a group'. Also hyphenate 'energy-consuming' as a compound adjective. ID:22

× And there the group chatting also prevents a cold silence. So yeah.

✓ Group chatting also prevents awkward silences, so yes.

Awkward phrasing 'there the group chatting' and 'a cold silence' is unnatural. Recast as 'Group chatting also prevents awkward silences' and combine sentences for fluency. ID:26

× No, I prefer to communicate face to face. That way I can see the faces of the person while they are talking.

✓ No, I prefer to communicate face to face. That way I can see the person's face while they are talking.

Use possessive form 'person's face' rather than 'faces of the person'. Also 'face to face' is acceptable without articles but possessive clarifies singular. ID:22

× They are the way they express their emotions and there will be emotions to the world as well.

✓ I can see the way they express their emotions, and their emotions are visible to the world as well.

Awkward and incorrect word order and choice: 'They are the way' is incorrect; restructure to 'I can see the way they express their emotions.' 'There will be emotions to the world' is ungrammatical — use 'their emotions are visible to others' or similar. ID:13

× Whereas texting is a bit cold and it doesn't have any emotion.

✓ Whereas texting is a bit cold and doesn't convey emotion.

'It doesn't have any emotion' is unnatural for inanimate texting; use 'doesn't convey emotion.' Remove redundant 'it'. ID:26

× You have interrupt into inter, inter interpretate.

✓ You have to interrupt or misinterpret.

This fragment is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning: 'You might interrupt or misinterpret.' Use modal 'might' or 'can' with verbs. 'Interpretate' is incorrect; use 'interpret.' ID:26

× Yes, I do argue a lot with friends, but I don't involve myself into huge argument.

✓ Yes, I argue a lot with friends, but I don't get involved in huge arguments.

Use simple present 'I argue' for habitual action. 'Involve myself into' is incorrect; use 'get involved in' or 'involve myself in.' 'Huge argument' should be plural or 'a huge argument' with proper article. ID:6

× The argument I involve myself in when they speak about their problem problems and I give them some advice or things to to not to do in that in that situation.

✓ The arguments I get involved in are when they talk about their problems, and I give them some advice or tell them what not to do in that situation.

Multiple errors: singular/plural mismatch 'argument' vs 'problems'; redundant words 'problem problems' and repeated 'to'. Use 'talk' not 'speak' for informal speech. Rephrase to clarify: 'The arguments I get involved in are when they talk about their problems...' ID:13

× But here we are.

✓ But that's how it is.

'But here we are' is colloquial and vague; 'But that's how it is' better conveys resignation. Adjust based on formality. ID:26