Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 어순을 명확히 하고 불필요한 반복(umm, when I long)과 문법 오류를 줄이세요. 주제 문장으로 바로 답한 뒤 구체적 상황(예: 출퇴근, 산책 중)과 이유를 연결하는 간결한 부연 문장을 1~2개 사용하세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 말의 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Example: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friend when I feel lonely, for example during my commute or while walking. I find it helps me relax and feel less isolated.

Suggestion: 주어와 관사 사용, 단어 선택을 바로잡고 더 구체적인 정보를 제공하세요. 왜 그 주제로 이야기하는지(예: 고민, 정보 공유)를 설명하고 연결어(because, so)로 이유를 명확히 하세요. 어색한 표현("my age person") 대신 정확한 표현을 쓰세요.

Example: We usually talk about jobs and salaries because many of us are in our first year at work and want advice on careers and pay. For instance, we compare offers and discuss how to negotiate a better salary.

Suggestion: 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 과거 예시를 말할 때 시제와 어휘를 정확히 사용하세요. 불필요한 소리(umm)와 중복을 줄이고, 단일/소그룹 선호 이유(예: 깊은 대화, 집중)를 간단히 설명하세요.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one because I can have deeper conversations. For example, when I was at university I sometimes met in small groups of six, but I felt closer and more understood in one-to-one chats.

Suggestion: 'prefer' 구조와 비교 표현을 정확히 사용하고 이유를 자연스럽게 확장하세요. ‘boring at typing’ 같은 어색한 표현 대신 ‘I’m bad at typing’이나 ‘I find typing tedious’로 바꾸세요. 예시(예: non-verbal cues, tone)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because I find typing tedious and miss non-verbal cues. In person, it’s easier to read facial expressions and tone, which makes conversations more engaging.

Suggestion: 문법(시제, 주어-동사 일치)과 어휘(‘different think’, ‘food menu’)를 고치고, 구체적인 예와 결과를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(when, because, for example)를 사용해 상황과 이유를 명확히 하세요. 가능한 한 간결하게 1~2문장으로 말하세요.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, for example when we can’t agree on what to eat. Usually it’s a small disagreement and we resolve it by taking turns choosing or compromising.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend UMM when I long when I feel lonely, I usually umm chat with my friend during working, walking.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friend when I feel lonely; I usually chat while working or walking.

The sentence uses awkward and incorrect pronouns/phrasing ('when I long' and repeated 'my friend'). Replace 'when I long' with 'when I feel lonely' and remove repetition. Also use 'while' for simultaneous actions ('while working or walking'). Use semicolon or separate clauses for clarity.

× I usually chat about umm salary or jobs because my age person usually umm first year at jobs.

✓ I usually chat about salary or jobs because people my age are often in their first year at a job.

Original has incorrect quantifier phrasing 'my age person' and missing plural agreement. Use 'people my age' and 'are often in their first year at a job' to show typical situation for that group.

× I prefer only one friend friends. Umm when I was university student I have AI had a. Umm party. For six people, The Times.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. When I was a university student, I had a party for six people.

There are singular/plural and article errors: 'one friend friends' is redundant; 'when I was university student' needs the article 'a'; 'I have AI had a' is unclear and should be 'I had a party'. Ensure noun number matches and include articles where necessary.

× I prefer communicate face to face or rather than social media because I'm boring at typing and texting. Also face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because I find typing and texting boring.

Missing infinitive 'to' after 'prefer' and awkward pronoun/verb 'I'm boring at' which incorrectly makes the speaker the boring thing. Use 'I find typing and texting boring.' Use 'via social media' for clarity.

× Yes, I argue with friends umm when we different think about food menu umm we argue your opinion.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends when we have different opinions about the menu; we discuss our views.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear pronoun use ('we different think', 'your opinion'). Use 'have different opinions about the menu' and rephrase to 'we discuss our views' for clarity and grammatical correctness.