Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and word order (e.g., "chat with friends gives me a chance to share experiences and strengthen friendships").

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it gives me a chance to share experiences and learn from each other. For example, when we discuss study tips I often discover new methods that help me improve.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Correct plural forms and verb agreement, and connect ideas with linking words like "for example" or "such as." Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: We usually chat about personal topics, such as our feelings, dreams, and future plans. For example, we often talk about career goals and what steps we should take next.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct preference, then explain with a contrast using linking words (e.g., "however" or "on the other hand"). Fix grammar ("it depends", "sometimes") and be more specific about activities in groups.

Example: It depends, but I generally prefer one-on-one chats because I can have deeper conversations. However, I also enjoy group chats for playing games or sharing jokes, which is more fun and lively.

Suggestion: State a clear balanced opinion with linking phrases like "on the one hand" and "on the other hand." Correct collocations ("build strong friendships", "meet our friends") and avoid repeated words. Give a brief example of when each is better.

Example: I prefer both. On the one hand, face-to-face meetings build stronger friendships and allow clearer communication; for instance, we understand emotions better in person. On the other hand, social media is convenient when we are busy or far apart.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer and one reason with an example. Correct grammar ("sometimes I argue with friends", "make our friendship stronger") and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like "because" only once and be specific about what arguing achieves.

Example: Sometimes I argue with friends because it helps us understand each other's boundaries and opinions. For example, a disagreement about plans once helped us communicate better and avoid future misunderstandings.

× Yeah, obviously I like to chat you with friends because it's give me a chance of sharing experience with each other.

✓ Yeah, obviously I like to chat with friends because it gives me a chance to share experiences with them.

Errors: incorrect word order 'chat you with friends', wrong verb form 'it's give', incorrect phrase 'sharing experience with each other'. Corrections: use 'chat with friends' (correct preposition and order), 'it gives' (third person singular present), 'a chance to share experiences' (infinitive after 'chance' and plural for general experiences), and 'with them' or omit 'each other'. Suggestion: practice standard collocations: 'chat with someone', use subject-verb agreement for 'it gives', and use 'a chance to + verb'.

× It's gives me me to make better friendship with each other.

✓ It gives me the opportunity to make better friendships with others.

Errors: 'It's gives' mixes contraction and incorrect verb form; duplicate 'me me'; 'make better friendship' unnatural count. Corrections: 'It gives me' (use 'it gives' without contraction), 'the opportunity to make better friendships' (use plural or 'a better friendship' and natural noun 'opportunity'), and 'with others' instead of 'with each other'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid duplicated words; choose correct noun forms ('friendships').

× Well, we are often chat with several things.

✓ Well, we often chat about several things.

Errors: incorrect progressive structure 'are often chat' and wrong preposition 'with'. Corrections: simple present 'we often chat' (habitual action) and 'chat about' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use simple present for regular activities and learn verbs that require 'about'.

× Mostly we share our feelings, dream and what we could in the future.

✓ Mostly we share our feelings, dreams, and what we could do in the future.

Errors: 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'feelings'; missing verb 'do' after 'could'. Corrections: pluralize nouns and include the verb 'do' after 'could' to complete the clause. Suggestion: ensure parallel structure in lists and complete modal verb constructions (could + base verb).

× Those type of things are common nowadays.

✓ Those types of things are common nowadays.

Errors: 'Those type' is a mismatch between demonstrative plural 'Those' and singular 'type'. Correction: 'Those types' or 'That type' to agree. Suggestion: match singular/plural between demonstratives and nouns.

× Well, actually it's depend.

✓ Well, actually it depends.

Errors: 'it's depend' uses incorrect verb form after 'it'. Correction: 'it depends' uses third person singular present. Suggestion: for verbs in present tense with 'it' as subject, add 's'.

× I always try to spend my quality time with my best friend, but sometime when we are all in the group, we always spend our most valuable time by fun and puzzle.

✓ I always try to spend quality time with my best friend, but sometimes when we are all in a group, we spend our most valuable time having fun and solving puzzles.

Errors: 'my quality time' awkward possessive, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', 'in the group' -> 'in a group', 'by fun and puzzle' incorrect preposition and noun forms. Corrections: remove unnecessary 'my', use plural 'sometimes', 'in a group', and use gerunds 'having fun and solving puzzles'. Suggestion: use 'having fun' and 'solve puzzles' expressions; check singular/plural and verb forms.

× Actually, I prefer both because face to face communication is is build up a strong friendship or clear mind set up.

✓ Actually, I prefer both because face-to-face communication helps build strong friendships and clarifies the mindset.

Errors: missing hyphens 'face to face' -> 'face-to-face' as compound adjective, duplicated 'is is', wrong verb phrase 'is build up', awkward 'clear mind set up'. Corrections: use 'helps build' or 'builds', plural 'friendships', and 'clarifies the mindset' or 'creates a clearer mindset'. Suggestion: avoid duplicate words, use correct verb patterns (help + base verb), and choose natural collocations.

× On the other hand, sometimes we cannot get enough time for meet our friends so this time the social media is the best option for.

✓ On the other hand, sometimes we don't have enough time to meet our friends, so social media is the best option then.

Errors: 'get enough time for meet' wrong structure; use 'have enough time to meet'. 'the social media' unnecessary article; sentence-ending 'for' is dangling. Corrections: 'don't have enough time to meet', remove 'the' before 'social media', and 'then' or 'in that case' to finish. Suggestion: use 'have time to + verb' and omit 'the' when referring to general uncountable media.

× Yeah, there are several time I argue with friend because it's make our friendship more stronger, because without argue we cannot, cannot know someone clearly, because arguably is necessary for our life, we can know each other.

✓ Yeah, there are several times I argue with friends because it makes our friendship stronger; without arguments we cannot know someone clearly, and arguing is necessary in life so we can understand each other.

Errors: 'several time' -> 'several times', 'argue with friend' -> 'argue with friends' or 'a friend', 'it's make' -> 'it makes', 'more stronger' double comparative, 'without argue' should be 'without arguments', 'arguably is necessary' wrong word 'arguably' vs 'arguing'. Corrections: fix pluralizations, subject-verb agreement, remove double comparative, and use correct noun/gerund forms. Suggestion: pay attention to plural forms for countable nouns, use 'make' -> 'makes' with 'it', avoid 'more stronger' (use 'stronger' only), and use gerunds for activities (arguing).