Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and articles), remove redundancy, and make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Watch pronunciation of 'chatting' and avoid repeating phrases like 'whenever'.

Example: Yes, I’m quite extroverted, so I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, when I have free time I usually call or message them on apps like WhatsApp or Instagram to catch up or make plans.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and specific examples; avoid unclear or unrelated comments (e.g. 'when you exit the trains'). Use linking words to organize ideas and correct noun phrases (e.g. 'study', 'career plans', 'birthday parties'). Keep to 2–3 supporting details.

Example: We talk about different things. For instance, we discuss our studies and career plans, and we also organise social events like birthday parties or study groups.

Suggestion: Respond directly and coherently. State preference clearly, give a short reason, and provide one specific example. Fix pronouns and unclear phrases. Avoid irrelevant fragments and repetition.

Example: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends rather than a large group, because I’m more comfortable sharing personal feelings and secrets with people I trust.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason using a linking word (e.g. 'because'). Avoid sentence fragments and repetition. Mention one example of the social media or situation when you choose it.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media because I have a hectic schedule. For example, I often message friends on WhatsApp or have short video calls when I can’t meet them in person.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give clear reasons or conditions for when arguments happen. Use linking words (e.g. 'when', 'but') correctly, correct grammar (e.g. 'I argue', 'I am patient'), and avoid repetition. Add a brief example of a typical disagreement and how you resolve it.

Example: Yes, sometimes we argue, especially about debatable topics or misunderstandings. However, I try to stay calm and resolve conflicts by listening and apologising if necessary; for example, I once discussed a timetable mix-up and we solved it by planning more clearly.

× To be honest, I'm extrovert.

✓ To be honest, I'm extroverted.

The adjective 'extrovert' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'extroverted' to describe a person's personality. Use 'extroverted' to modify 'I'. Suggestion: Use adjective forms to describe people (introverted/extroverted).

× I really like to chatting with my friends whenever I feel bored and whenever I have a spare time.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends whenever I feel bored and whenever I have spare time.

After 'like' use the gerund 'chatting' rather than the infinitive with 'to'. Also, 'spare time' is uncountable so do not use 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'like' + gerund and remove the article before uncountable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So I that time I usually call my friends, message my friends on different kind of apps such as WhatsApp, Instagram, Facebook.

✓ At that time I usually call my friends and message them on different kinds of apps such as WhatsApp, Instagram, and Facebook.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time'; 'different kind of' should be plural 'different kinds of'; use 'and' to join actions and use the pronoun 'them' instead of repeating 'my friends'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositional phrase 'at that time' and pluralize 'kinds'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I usually chat about with my friends on different kind of topics, sometimes in simple topic such as about the study, career plans, making meetings, organizing parties for any for birthday parties and so on when you exit the trains.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about different kinds of topics, sometimes simple topics such as study, career plans, meetings, and organizing birthday parties, and so on.

Do not use both 'chat about with'—use 'chat with ... about'. 'Different kind of' should be 'different kinds of'. 'In simple topic' is wrong; use 'simple topics'. Remove unnecessary prepositions like 'for any for' and 'when you exit the trains' which is irrelevant. Suggestion: Use the pattern 'chat with someone about something' and simplify the list of topics. Grammar problem type ID:11

× We'll be honest, I usually prefer to chat with 1 and in the direction of travel or two friends on your right because I do not want to share my secrets with the group of people.

✓ To be honest, I usually prefer to chat with one or two close friends because I do not want to share my secrets with a group of people.

'We'll be honest' is incorrect; use 'To be honest'. Writing '1' should be 'one'. Phrases like 'in the direction of travel' and 'on your right' are irrelevant and confuse the sentence. Use 'a group of people' or 'groups' consistently. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and avoid unrelated phrases. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I have my few as you make one or two close friends so I can easily share my emotions as well as my secrets.

✓ I have a few close friends, usually one or two, so I can easily share my feelings and my secrets.

'My few' is incorrect; use 'a few'. 'As you make' is irrelevant. 'Emotions' is better expressed as 'feelings' in this context. Suggestion: Use 'a few' to indicate a small number and choose appropriate nouns like 'feelings'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× She always.

✓ She always does.

Sentence fragment 'She always.' lacks a verb; add 'does' to complete the idea or rephrase to a full sentence explaining what she always does. Suggestion: Ensure sentences have a verb and complete thought. Grammar problem type ID:23

× Nowadays technology advanced steadily.

✓ Nowadays technology is advancing steadily.

'Nowadays' indicates present continuous action; 'advanced' is past tense and does not match. Use present continuous 'is advancing' to show ongoing progress. Suggestion: Match tense to time adverbs like 'nowadays'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Usually prefer to communicate via social media.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate via social media.

Missing subject 'I'. Every full sentence needs a subject; include 'I' to be grammatical. Suggestion: Always include the subject in declarative sentences. Grammar problem type ID:23

× Because I have a hectic schedule, I do not have enough time to go outside to meet with my friends.

✓ Because I have a hectic schedule, I do not have enough time to go out to meet my friends.

'Go outside to meet with my friends' is wordy; 'go out to meet my friends' is more natural. The original is grammatical but can be simplified. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'go out' and omit 'with' when 'meet' already implies company. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So usually I you. So usually I talk, so usually I prefer communicate with.

✓ So usually I talk to them, and I prefer to communicate that way.

These fragments are incomplete and partly nonsensical ('I you'). Provide a complete clause: 'I talk to them' and state the preference clearly. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns and verbs match and sentences express a complete idea. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, sometimes if the topic is a debatable so that my usually argue with my friends and sometimes there is any misunderstanding I argue with my friends but but on some point usually I'm not very aggressive.

✓ Yes, sometimes if the topic is debatable, I usually argue with my friends, and if there is a misunderstanding I argue with them, but usually I am not very aggressive.

Remove redundant conjunctions and words ('so that', double 'but'). 'A debatable' is incorrect; use 'debatable topic'. Word order and punctuation needed for clarity. Suggestion: Use concise conjunctions and correct noun phrases ('debatable topic'). Grammar problem type ID:16

× I can handle my aggression as well as I'm very a patience person.

✓ I can control my aggression, and I am a very patient person.

'Handle my aggression' is acceptable but 'control' is clearer. 'I'm very a patience person' is ungrammatical—use 'a very patient person'. Suggestion: Use adjective 'patient' and correct article placement. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Mostly I handle all.

✓ Mostly I handle everything.

'Handle all' is incomplete; 'handle everything' is the correct collocation to express managing all issues. Suggestion: Use complete objects like 'everything' after 'handle'. Grammar problem type ID:26