Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Use correct word forms and reduce hesitations.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, we often share funny stories and discuss our plans, which makes life more interesting and prevents boredom.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then provide specific examples. Use linking words (for example, such as) and avoid filler words and repeated phrases.

Example: I usually talk about daily routines and current local issues. For example, we discuss work or study plans, new cafés nearby, and recent community events.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then explain reasons with linking words (because, so). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., “I enjoy chatting with one friend”). Provide one concrete reason.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel nervous in groups. For example, in a group I worry about others’ opinions, so I find one-to-one conversations more comfortable and relaxed.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct expressions (face-to-face), and give a clear comparison with reasons using linking words (because, whereas). Avoid awkward phrases and tense errors.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because you get immediate responses and nonverbal cues. Whereas on social media people may delay replies or misunderstand tone, so face-to-face feels more reliable.

Suggestion: Be specific about frequency and typical reasons, and use linking words to structure your response. Avoid absolute words like “always” unless true, and correct word forms (argument, disagree).

Example: I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree about decisions. For example, if I believe one approach is better but others prefer another, we discuss the pros and cons until we reach a compromise.

× I enjoy chatting with my friends because I think it is very enjoy enjoyful for me and when I chat with my friends I feel the life is very interesting and I never get bored while while when I stay with my friends.

✓ I enjoy chatting with my friends because I find it very enjoyable, and when I chat with them life feels very interesting and I never get bored when I am with my friends.

The student used nonstandard and repeated forms 'enjoy enjoyful' instead of the correct adjective 'enjoyable.' Repetition 'while while when' is redundant. 'The life is very interesting' is unnatural; use 'life feels very interesting' or 'I find life very interesting.' Also replace 'when I stay with my friends' with 'when I am with my friends.' Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives (enjoyable) and avoid repetition.

× Uh, for me, I usually, I usually chat with my friends about some daily routine and some some topics about the society in the current area because I think that it would be we will usually interesting. Interesting. Is it?

✓ For me, I usually chat with my friends about daily routines and topics about society in my area because I think they are usually interesting.

Problems include unnecessary repetition and incorrect tense/modal phrasing 'it would be we will usually interesting.' Use simple present 'are usually interesting' to describe habitual actions. Use plural 'daily routines' and 'topics about society in my area' for clarity.

× Uh, for me, I enjoy to chat with only one friend because, uh, I feel very nervous when I chatting with a group of people and otherwise, uh, many when I stay with a group of people, they have, uh, have their, all opinions on me, but uh, I have a difficulty to say.

✓ For me, I enjoy chatting with only one friend because I feel very nervous when I chat with a group of people, and when I am with a group they all express their opinions about me, which makes it difficult for me to speak up.

After 'enjoy' use the -ing form 'chatting' rather than the infinitive 'to chat.' 'When I chatting' is incorrect; use 'when I chat.' 'I have a difficulty to say' should be 'it is difficult for me to speak up' or 'I have difficulty speaking.' Suggestion: use correct -ing forms after verbs like 'enjoy' and use natural phrasing for difficulties.

× Uh, for me, I enjoy to communicate faith, have enjoyed a face to face communication because I think it is so I can quickly to receive the answer from the other people.

✓ For me, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can quickly receive answers from other people.

Multiple issues: 'enjoy to communicate faith' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'prefer face-to-face communication.' 'Have enjoyed a face to face communication' is awkward and unnecessary. 'quickly to receive' should be 'quickly receive.' Use concise natural phrasing: 'I prefer face-to-face communication because I can quickly receive answers.'

× And while when I in the social media, maybe the other people will think about it and never get the direct answer.

✓ When I use social media, people may think about their replies and I may not get a direct answer.

'While when I in the social media' is ungrammatical; use 'When I use social media.' 'Maybe the other people will think about it and never get the direct answer' mixes subjects; clarify that people may take time and you may not get direct answers. Use modal 'may' for possibility and simple present/conditional appropriately.

× Yes, I always argue with friends and when I face some disagreement with their art with friends, for example, when I think that this way will be right, but my friends say uh, maybe we can see another way.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends. For example, when I think my idea is right but my friends suggest another way, we disagree.

'Always argue' is unlikely and may be overstated; 'sometimes' fits better but keep present simple for habitual actions. The phrase 'face some disagreement with their art with friends' is unclear and incorrect. Use 'we disagree' or 'we have a disagreement.' Simplify: 'when I think my idea is right but my friends suggest another way, we disagree.'

× But I still believe that this was right, so maybe we have a argu argument with each other.

✓ But I still believe that I am right, so we may have an argument with each other.

Tense and word choice issues: 'this was right' should be 'I am right' (present belief). 'Maybe we have a argu argument' contains a typo and wrong article usage; use 'we may have an argument.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent when expressing current beliefs and use correct noun 'argument.'