Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and fix tense/word order errors.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, whenever something good happens to me I tell them about it, which helps us stay close and support each other.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Correct word choice and sentence structure, and provide one or two specific examples.

Example: We talk about many topics, such as our relationships, work, and funny posts on social media. For example, last week I shared a humorous video we all enjoyed, which started a long conversation.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct preference sentence, then briefly explain reasons using linking words and correct pronouns. Keep it natural and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because group conversations can be noisy and everyone speaks at once. As a result, it's harder to have a deep or meaningful discussion.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and add a balanced reason using correct grammar. Use linking words to contrast advantages of both methods and correct collocations (e.g., "feel warm and real").

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels warmer and more personal; however, social media is very convenient for quick messages when we are busy.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then explain with a specific example and correct grammar (e.g., "different opinions"). Avoid filler phrases and unclear expressions like "not a special."

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue when our opinions differ, but we usually resolve it quickly. For instance, we had a disagreement about plans last month but talked it through and stayed friends.

× Yes I do, I like chatting with my friends every time when I have happy things on the side and that I will share it with my friends and it helps us to keep a closer relationship.

✓ Yes, I do. I like chatting with my friends whenever I have good news, and I share it with them because it helps us maintain a closer relationship.

Run-on sentence and awkward tense/phrase choices: 'every time when I have happy things on the side' is unnatural; use 'whenever I have good news'. 'That I will share it with my friends' is incorrect structure; use 'and I share it with them'. 'Keeps a closer relationship' -> 'helps us maintain a closer relationship' is more natural. Also add commas and split into two sentences for clarity.

× Well, lots of things. No our relationships or work or happy news or funny things we saw on the social media. I will all share with my friends. It makes us closer.

✓ Well, lots of things: our relationships, work, happy news, or funny things we see on social media. I share all of these with my friends. It brings us closer.

Several pronoun and article issues: 'No' is inappropriate — remove it. 'we saw' should match present habitual 'we see'. 'on the social media' should be 'on social media'. 'I will all share' is incorrect modal/word order; use present habit 'I share all of these'. 'It makes us closer' -> 'It brings us closer' is more natural.

× Well, I prefer chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people it is noisy and everybody wanted to talk and express his opinion, so I don't like that chat.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people it is noisy and everybody wants to talk and express their opinions, so I don't like group chats.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer' requires infinitive 'to chat'. 'Everybody wanted' mixes tenses; use present 'wants' for habitual action. Use gender-neutral plural pronoun 'their opinions' instead of 'his opinion'. 'That chat' is awkward; use 'group chats'.

× I prefer chat face to face because it will makes us feel warmed and real but the social media is very convenient and it no matter.

✓ I prefer to chat face-to-face because it makes us feel warm and genuine, but social media is very convenient so it also works.

Use infinitive 'to chat'. 'Will makes' is incorrect; use 'makes'. 'Warmed' should be adjective 'warm'. 'Real' in this context better as 'genuine'. 'the social media' should be 'social media'. 'it no matter' is ungrammatical; replace with 'so it also works' or 'it's fine too'.

× Yes I do, when I have different opinion with my friends we will argue but but after that we still are good friends because I mean that is not a special.

✓ Yes, I do. When I have different opinions from my friends, we argue, but afterwards we are still good friends because it's not a big deal.

Use plural 'opinions' and correct preposition 'different from' (or 'different with' is nonstandard). 'We will argue' implies future; use present 'we argue' for habitual actions. Remove repeated 'but'. 'After that we still are good friends' -> 'afterwards we are still good friends' is more natural. 'That is not a special' is ungrammatical; use 'it's not a big deal'.