Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response natural and more grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct grammar. Use one concise reason and a brief elaboration with linking words. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “socializing” or “connecting”).

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because I like socializing and exchanging ideas. For example, talking with them helps me relax after a busy day and often gives me new perspectives.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a topic sentence and use linking words to list typical topics. Be specific and correct tense agreement. Avoid overgeneral phrases like “in general” and replace with clear examples. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: We usually talk about our daily lives and recent events. For instance, we often discuss work, weekend plans, and relationships, and we exchange advice when someone has a problem.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, then briefly explain with specific reasons and linking words. Correct awkward phrases and keep sentences smooth. Avoid repetition like “people” twice and refine comments about interruptions.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one because conversations are quieter and more focused. For example, with one friend I can share personal stories and we have more time to listen to each other without interruptions.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words. Improve grammar (e.g., “enjoy” → “enjoyable”) and avoid vague phrases like “feel each other feeling.” Use natural collocations like “show empathy” or “read body language.”

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and make eye contact. Moreover, in-person talks feel more personal and allow me to show empathy more easily than messages do.

Suggestion: State the main idea clearly, then give a brief reason and an example of how you handle disagreements. Correct grammar (e.g., “have arguments,” “their stories”), and avoid repetition of “argument.”

Example: I don't usually argue with friends because I prefer to keep harmony. If we disagree, I tend to listen carefully and discuss calmly until we find a compromise.

× I love interacting to other people and it makes me feel enjoy.

✓ I love interacting with other people and it makes me enjoy myself.

Use the preposition 'with' after 'interact' (interact with someone). Also 'make someone enjoy' is unnatural; use 'makes me enjoy myself' or 'makes me happy'. Replace 'feel enjoy' with 'enjoy myself' for correct verb/noun usage.

× Sometimes we talked about work or even about our boyfriends.

✓ Sometimes we talk about work or even about our boyfriends.

The question asks about usual actions (present habit), so use present simple 'talk' rather than past 'talked' to match habitual context.

× So obviously we just share everything to each other.

✓ So obviously we just share everything with each other.

Use 'share with' or 'each other' without 'to'. 'Share with each other' is correct prepositional structure.

× I would prefer to chat with just only one friend because if there are many people, people just want to talk and interrupt each other, so I don't prefer that much more.

✓ I would prefer to chat with only one friend because if there are many people, they just want to talk and interrupt each other, so I don't like that much.

Remove redundant 'just' with 'only'. Use 'only one friend'. Replace repeated 'people' with 'they' to avoid repetition. 'Don't prefer that much more' is awkward; use 'don't like that much' or 'prefer that less'.

× Better and enjoy.

✓ It's better and more enjoyable.

Sentence fragment lacking subject and verb. Convert to a full comparative clause: 'It's better and more enjoyable' to express preference.

× I prefer to communicate face to face or in person because I can see eye contact and body language.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face or in person because I can see people's eye contact and body language.

Add 'people's' to clarify whose eye contact and body language. Alternatively 'see eye contact' is acceptable but adding a possessive clarifies the object.

× There's more fun and enjoy and feel each other feeling.

✓ It's more fun and enjoyable, and we can feel each other's emotions.

Original mixes nouns and verbs incorrectly. Use 'more fun and enjoyable' and 'feel each other's emotions' to express mutual feeling correctly; use possessive 'each other's'.

× Also we show empathy as well.

✓ We also show empathy.

'Also' and 'as well' are redundant together; choose one. Place 'also' before the verb for natural order: 'We also show empathy.'

× I don't normally have argument with friends or with others because I don't like argument.

✓ I don't normally have arguments with friends or with others because I don't like arguments.

Use plural 'arguments' after 'have' and 'like' when speaking generally about occurrences. Countable noun requires plural in habitual statements.

× I will avoid it as much as I can most of the time.

✓ I avoid it as much as I can most of the time.

When talking about habitual behaviour, use present simple 'I avoid' rather than future 'I will avoid'. Present simple fits the context of usual actions.

× I just would like to share my stories and listen more about their.

✓ I would just like to share my stories and listen more to theirs.

'Their' is a possessive adjective and needs a noun (e.g. 'stories'). Use possessive pronoun 'theirs' to stand alone: 'listen more to theirs'. Also move 'just' for natural word order 'I would just like'.