Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yeah, I really like chatting with friends. I usually chat with friends in Instagram. We use Instagram to post pictures, but for me I mainly use it for have a chat with my friends because it is a little more difficult to exchange mails or.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
I usually chat about with friends about the homeworks and the activities we had. Because we are school friends, we have a lot of common about the homeworks and the club activities, so I usually talk about them.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I prefer having a chat with a group of people because when we chat together a lot of ideas can come out. When I for For example, when I thought about the idea for my school festival, we had a chat and there were a lot of ideas.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Definitely, I prefer in communicating face to face. It is because we need umm communicates directly. I can see the official expression of the opponent people, person umm when when I chat in the SNS I can't.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Yes I do. I I argue with friends once a week. It is because I am a member of the manage knowledge. In my circle we often have a discussion about what to do next and how we should do to solve this problem. And so I do have a.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 答えは自然で内容は伝わりますが、文法ミスと冗長な表現が目立ちます。トピック文の後に理由を簡潔に述べ、不要な繰り返し("chat with friends"など)を避け、動詞形を正しく使うこと。具体的には"I use Instagram mainly to chat because exchanging emails is less convenient"のように一文でまとめ、語順と前置詞に注意してください。
Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I mainly use Instagram because it’s more convenient for quick messages than exchanging emails.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 答えは内容的に適切ですが、文法(複数形・前置詞)と繰り返しが問題です。トピック文を明確にし、理由や具体例を一つ加えると良いです。また接続詞で文をつなぎ、語彙を少し変えると自然になります。例えば"homework and club activities"と表現し、具体的な例を付け加えてください。
Example: I usually talk about homework and our school club activities because we share the same classes. For example, we often plan events for the club and divide tasks among members.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 考えははっきりしていますが、繰り返しや言い淀みがあり、文が冗長です。トピック文→理由→具体例の順で簡潔にまとめ、不要な重複を避けてください。また過去の出来事を述べるときは時制を整えましょう。
Example: I prefer chatting in a group because it generates many ideas. For example, when we discussed plans for the school festival, everyone suggested different activities and we chose the best ones.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 意味は伝わりますが、語順や語彙選択、言い淀みが多く不自然です。"prefer communicating face-to-face"のように前置詞を正しく使い、"facial expressions"など正確な語彙を使ってください。練習ではつなぎ言葉を減らし、短く明確な理由を述べましょう。
Example: I definitely prefer communicating face-to-face because I can see people’s facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings more clearly than on social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 答えが途切れており、語彙の誤用("manage knowledge"など)や文法ミスが多いです。まず完全なトピック文で頻度を述べ、その理由と具体例を付けて一文内でまとめましょう。適切な語彙は"management committee"や"planning group"です。
Example: Yes, I do. I usually argue with friends about once a week because I’m part of the planning committee, and we debate how to solve problems and organize events.
× I usually chat with friends in Instagram.
✓ I usually chat with friends on Instagram.
Use the preposition 'on' with platform names (on Instagram). 'In' is incorrect for social media platforms.
× I mainly use it for have a chat with my friends because it is a little more difficult to exchange mails or.
✓ I mainly use it to have a chat with my friends because it is a little more difficult to exchange emails.
After 'use it to' the base form of the verb is required, not the infinitive with 'for'. Also 'exchange mails' is unidiomatic; use 'exchange emails'. End the sentence properly.
× I usually chat about with friends about the homeworks and the activities we had.
✓ I usually chat with friends about the homework and activities we had.
Remove the extra preposition 'about' after 'chat' and use 'with friends about'. Also 'homeworks' is uncountable or pluralized incorrectly; use 'homework' or 'assignments'.
× Because we are school friends, we have a lot of common about the homeworks and the club activities, so I usually talk about them.
✓ Because we are school friends, we have a lot in common regarding homework and club activities, so I usually talk about them.
Use the idiom 'have a lot in common' rather than 'have a lot of common'. Use 'regarding' or 'about' for topics; 'homeworks' should be 'homework' or 'assignments'.
× I prefer having a chat with a group of people because when we chat together a lot of ideas can come out.
✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because when we chat together many ideas come out.
Use the gerund 'chatting' after 'prefer' for a general preference. 'A lot of ideas can come out' is awkward; 'many ideas come out' is more natural.
× When I for For example, when I thought about the idea for my school festival, we had a chat and there were a lot of ideas.
✓ For example, when I thought about an idea for my school festival, we chatted and many ideas came up.
Remove duplicated words and streamline the sentence. Use 'an idea' or 'ideas' appropriately, past tense 'chatted' and 'came up' for events in the past.
× Definitely, I prefer in communicating face to face.
✓ Definitely, I prefer communicating face to face.
Do not use the preposition 'in' before the gerund here. 'Prefer communicating' or 'prefer to communicate' are correct.
× It is because we need umm communicates directly.
✓ It is because we need to communicate directly.
Use the infinitive 'to communicate' after 'need'. 'Communicates' is incorrect as a third-person singular verb here.
× I can see the official expression of the opponent people, person umm when when I chat in the SNS I can't.
✓ I can see the facial expressions of the other person; when I chat on social media I can't.
'Official expression' is incorrect; 'facial expressions' or 'expressions' is appropriate. Use 'the other person' or 'other people'. Use 'on social media' or 'on the SNS' for platforms. Remove duplicate 'when' and clarify contrast.
× Yes I do. I I argue with friends once a week.
✓ Yes, I do. I argue with my friends once a week.
Add a comma after 'Yes'. 'With friends' is acceptable, but 'with my friends' is more natural. Remove duplicated 'I'.
× It is because I am a member of the manage knowledge.
✓ It is because I am a member of the management committee.
'Manage knowledge' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'management' or 'management committee'. Use a noun phrase that accurately describes the group.
× In my circle we often have a discussion about what to do next and how we should do to solve this problem.
✓ In my circle we often have discussions about what to do next and how we should solve the problem.
Use plural 'discussions' for repeated events. Replace 'how we should do to solve' with 'how we should solve' for correct verb pattern.
× And so I do have a.
✓ And so I do have arguments/disagreements occasionally.
The original sentence is incomplete. Provide a complete noun or phrase such as 'arguments' or 'disagreements' and include an adverb like 'occasionally' to finish the thought.