Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "I find chatting with friends interesting"), avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or brief example. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it’s interesting and helps me see new perspectives. For example, they often suggest different ways to solve problems at work, which I find helpful.

Suggestion: Use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence such as "I usually talk about my work and personal relationships." Then give one specific detail or example. Avoid incorrect words like "upgrade my statue" — use "update them" or "talk about". Keep sentences short and linked logically.

Example: I usually talk about my job and my relationships with family and my boyfriend. For example, I tell them about recent projects at work and ask for advice about any relationship issues.

Suggestion: Give a direct, grammatical answer and one clear reason. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repetition. Say "one-on-one" or "individually" correctly and provide a brief example of why you prefer that.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows a deeper, more personal conversation. For instance, when a friend is upset, I can listen carefully and offer support without distractions.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct word choices (use "body language" or "facial expressions", not "statue"). Use contrast linking such as "though" or "however" to acknowledge both options. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with a brief example.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language. However, I also use social media for quick messages when we’re busy or far apart.

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: say when and why disagreements happen, and emphasize constructive outcomes. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "but" or "however" to show contrast and give a brief example of how you resolve arguments.

Example: Yes, we sometimes disagree because we have different ideas, but we don’t let it turn into conflict. For example, we discuss our viewpoints calmly and try to understand each other’s reasons.

× Yes I do because chatting with friends finds interesting and also I can find some new perspectives from my friends so it means a lot to me to chat with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do because chatting with friends is interesting and I can gain new perspectives from them, so chatting with my friends means a lot to me.

The verb 'finds' is incorrect because 'chatting' (a gerund) requires the linking verb 'is' to describe a state (adjective 'interesting'). Also 'find some new perspectives from my friends' is awkward; 'gain new perspectives from them' is more natural. Punctuation and repetition were simplified. Suggestion: use 'is' after gerunds when describing qualities and prefer concise phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:13

× When I talk with my friends, I usually upgrade my statue about my work and my relationship between my with my boyfriend and with my family.

✓ When I talk with my friends, I usually update my status about my work and my relationships with my boyfriend and my family.

'Upgrade' and 'statue' are incorrect word choices; the correct verb is 'update' and the noun is 'status'. 'Relationship between my with my boyfriend and with my family' is ungrammatical; use 'relationships with my boyfriend and my family'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations (update status, relationships with). Grammar problem type ID:11

× So updating our statue makes me. Communicate.

✓ So updating our status helps me communicate.

The original is fragmented and has punctuation errors. 'Makes me communicate' is unusual; 'helps me communicate' is natural. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use verbs that collocate properly. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer child to in individually because I can understand deeply about my friend.

✓ I prefer chatting individually because I can understand my friend more deeply.

'Child to in individually' is meaningless; likely intended 'chat' or 'chatting' and 'individually'. 'Understand deeply about my friend' is incorrect word order; use 'understand my friend more deeply'. Suggestion: use gerund 'chatting' as noun and place adverbs after the verb or before adjectives. Grammar problem type ID:12

× So when I talk with my friend I usually talk talk one-on-one to update and support each other.

✓ So when I talk with a friend, I usually have one-on-one conversations to update and support each other.

The duplicated 'talk talk' is an error. 'One-on-one' should modify 'conversations'; use 'have one-on-one conversations' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid word repetition and use nouns for activities. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because I can see her statue from her face expression as well.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because I can see her mood from her facial expressions.

'Statue' is incorrect; intended 'state' or 'mood'. 'Face expression' should be 'facial expressions'. Suggestion: use 'mood' or 'emotions' and the adjective 'facial' before 'expressions'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× But also social media makes us talk whenever we ask.

✓ Also, social media allows us to talk whenever we want.

'Makes us talk whenever we ask' is unidiomatic. Use 'allows us to talk whenever we want' to express the idea that social media enables communication at any time. Suggestion: use 'allow' + object + 'to' + verb for ability. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I do at some point because because we have a different idea but we don't conflict with.

✓ Yes, sometimes, because we have different ideas, but we do not get into conflicts.

'At some point' is odd for a general habit; 'sometimes' fits better. 'We have a different idea' should be plural 'different ideas'. 'We don't conflict with' is incomplete; use 'get into conflicts' or 'argue'. Suggestion: match tense and use complete verb phrases for negative statements. Grammar problem type ID:6

× We share our own thought and think about to understand each other well.

✓ We share our thoughts and try to understand each other better.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. 'Think about to understand' is ungrammatical; use 'try to understand' or 'think about how to understand'. Suggestion: use 'try to' + base verb for attempts and pluralize countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:11