Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct tense and phrasing (use present simple), and give one specific supporting detail. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often talk to them after a stressful day to relax and clear my mind. For example, last week I called a friend after a busy workday and felt much better after our conversation.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about typical topics and give one short example. Avoid repetition and grammatical mistakes.

Example: We usually talk about our daily lives and sometimes about work. For instance, if I have a problem at work I will ask for advice, or if something funny happens I will share the story and we laugh together.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly (group or one friend) with a clear reason and a brief example. Fix grammar (use 'prefer', 'only one friend', 'a few friends') and avoid trailing unfinished sentences.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because conversations are more personal and I can understand my friend's feelings better. For example, I usually call one close friend to discuss personal issues rather than talking in a large group.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Use correct phrases such as 'prefer face-to-face' and provide one brief example about emotions or nonverbal cues.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it lets me read facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, during an important conversation I prefer meeting in person so I can better understand the other person's feelings.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and explain why briefly with linking words. Use correct grammar (present simple or present perfect) and provide a short example showing resolution or outcome to demonstrate maturity.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but I think it's normal because people have different opinions. For example, we once disagreed about plans, but we talked it through and reached a compromise, which made our friendship stronger.

× To be honest, I'm enjoying chatting with friends, especially, uh, after I want to take off the thing, take the thing off my mind.

✓ To be honest, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially when I want to take something off my mind.

Use simple present 'I enjoy' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm enjoying'. Replace 'after I want to take off the thing' with 'when I want to take something off my mind' for natural phrasing and correct word order. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and use 'something' as a general object and phrase 'take something off my mind'.

× Uh, I often, uh, spend time to talk.

✓ I often spend time talking.

After 'spend time' use the -ing form of the verb (gerund), not the infinitive. Suggestion: say 'spend time talking' for correct collocation.

× Honestly, we talk everything about our life and sometime we talk about work.

✓ Honestly, we talk about everything in our lives and sometimes we talk about work.

'Talk everything about our life' is incorrect word order and quantifier use. Use 'talk about everything in our lives' and plural 'lives' for multiple people; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to mean occasionally. Suggestion: use 'talk about' + object and correct adverb form.

× When I face a a problem or have a funny story which I want to share them and into other things they can share their family, their stories and.

✓ When I face a problem or have a funny story that I want to share, they can share their family stories and other things.

Original misuses pronouns and relative clause. 'Which I want to share them' wrongly uses both 'which' and object pronoun 'them'. Use 'that I want to share' or 'which I want to share' without 'them'. 'Into other things' is incorrect; use 'other things' and clarify 'family stories'. Suggestion: keep clauses simple and avoid redundant pronouns.

× I offered job face to face over chat in a group because face to face help me understand deeply my friends.

✓ I prefer meeting face to face or chatting in a group because face-to-face meetings help me understand my friends better.

'Offered job' is incorrect verb choice; likely meant 'prefer'. 'Face to face help' incorrectly omits third-person singular agreement; it should be 'helps' or 'help me' depending on subject. Here 'meetings' or 'meetings help' matches plural; alternatively use 'face-to-face meetings help'. Also add 'better' for clarity. Suggestion: choose correct verb and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, to be honest, I don't have many friends. I just one or two friends, so when I talk to them I want to spend.

✓ To be honest, I don't have many friends. I have just one or two friends, so when I talk to them I like to spend time with them.

Missing verb 'have' after 'I just' and incomplete clause 'I want to spend' requires object. Use 'I have just one or two friends' and 'spend time with them'. Suggestion: complete the sentence with the object and use proper word order.

× Of course I refer face to face over chat or through social media because top face to face can help me with this and see clearly their emotion and face to play.

✓ Of course I prefer face-to-face communication over chat or social media because face-to-face contact helps me see their emotions and facial expressions clearly.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'Face-to-face' needs hyphens as adjective; 'over chat or social media' is fine. 'Top face to face' is incorrect; use 'face-to-face contact' and 'helps me see their emotions and facial expressions clearly' for natural wording. Suggestion: use 'prefer' and correct prepositions and nouns.

× Of course, I used to argue with my friends, but I think it's normal with friends because, uh, sometime we have uh, some common idea, but sometimes we have some, uh, argument to discuss, uh, all of things.

✓ Of course, I argue with my friends sometimes, but I think it's normal because sometimes we have different opinions and sometimes we have arguments to discuss various things.

'Used to argue' implies a past habit no longer true; context suggests a general present habit, so use present 'I argue sometimes'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Some common idea' is unclear; likely 'different opinions'. 'Argument to discuss all of things' is ungrammatical; use 'arguments to discuss various things'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and choose clearer nouns.