Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then give one or two specific reasons with simple linking words. Reduce repetition and avoid long, confused clauses.

Example: Yes, I do. I chat with friends nearly every day because it helps me share my feelings and opinions easily. For example, when I’m stressed about school, I message a close friend and they help me feel better.

Suggestion: Be more specific and use correct verbs. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples of topics and when you chat, using linking words like 'usually' or 'for example.'

Example: I usually chat with my friends after school, especially after I finish my homework. We mainly talk about school, teachers and our families; for example, we often discuss upcoming tests or funny things a teacher said.

Suggestion: Answer directly (group or one friend), then give a clear reason with an example. Use correct verbs and avoid fillers. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I find group chats confusing and hard to follow. For instance, in a group many people talk at once, so I miss important details and don’t know how to contribute.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and support it with specific reasons and an example. Improve grammar (use 'more confident', 'express') and avoid repeating phrases.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more confident writing than speaking face-to-face. For example, I can take time to think before I reply, so I express my opinions more clearly in messages.

Suggestion: Make your stance clear (do you argue or not) and give a concise reason and example. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague phrases. Keep sentences short and accurate.

Example: I rarely argue with friends because I’m easygoing and avoid conflicts over small issues. For example, if we disagree about where to eat, I usually give in so we can decide quickly and stay friendly.

× Actually my daily life I chatting all the time because I think chatting will impress my feelings also my emotion and my opinion because I I cannot have the conversation clearly because I think I cannot speak out in the in offline.

✓ Actually, in my daily life I chat all the time because I think chatting helps me express my feelings, emotions and opinions, since I cannot speak clearly in face-to-face situations.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'chatting' used where simple present 'chat' is required; awkward phrasing 'impress my feelings' incorrect verb choice; redundant words and article errors 'in the in offline'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions ('I chat'), use appropriate verbs ('express' instead of 'impress'), simplify and correct phrase for face-to-face communication ('in face-to-face situations' or 'offline').

× Actually, I usually, uh, touching with my friends after school and usually after I do all my homework.

✓ Actually, I usually get in touch with my friends after school and after I finish all my homework.

Errors: 'touching with my friends' is incorrect collocation; use 'get in touch with' or 'talk to'; verb form 'do all my homework' is understandable but 'finish' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs and simple present for habits ('I usually get in touch', 'after I finish').

× And I think, uh, we have the same topic about the school teacher family.

✓ And I think we talk about the same topics, such as school, teachers and family.

Errors: 'have the same topic about' is unnatural; 'topic' should be plural 'topics' and enumeration needs commas. Suggestion: use 'talk about' + plural 'topics' and list items clearly ('school, teachers, and family').

× So we talk a lot, we typing a lot and we usually talk to others.

✓ So we talk a lot, we type a lot and we usually talk to others.

Errors: mixed verb forms: 'talk' (simple present) and 'typing' (present participle) inconsistent. Use simple present 'type' to match habitual action. Suggestion: maintain consistent verb tense for parallel actions ('talk' and 'type').

× I prefer you to touch with only my friend is like the individual chatting because I cannot umm discuss with my friend of group.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I cannot discuss things in a group of friends.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and phrasing 'you to touch with only my friend'; wrong article and noun form 'friend of group'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + verb ('prefer to chat'), 'only one friend' for singular, and 'in a group of friends' for group discussions.'

× I usually seen that message and I don't have any comments about that because I'm just like that.

✓ I usually see those messages and I don't have any comments about them because that's just how I am.

Errors: past participle 'seen' incorrectly used instead of simple present 'see'; pronoun agreement 'that message' vs plural 'those messages' and 'about them'; informal 'I'm just like that' better as 'that's just how I am'. Suggestion: use correct present tense for habitual actions and ensure pronouns agree with plural/singular nouns.'

× I would like to chatting with my friends in social media because I think I will confident to chatting more than face to face.

✓ I would like to chat with my friends on social media because I feel more confident chatting than speaking face-to-face.

Errors: 'to chatting' should be base form 'to chat' after 'would like'; 'I will confident' incorrect — use 'I feel confident' or 'I am more confident'; preposition 'in social media' should be 'on social media'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after modal/phrase and appropriate prepositions.'

× Because I think chatting I will express more my feelings and my opinions.

✓ Because I think chatting allows me to express my feelings and opinions more.

Errors: word order awkward 'chatting I will express more my feelings'; unnecessary future 'will' for general truth; better structure 'chatting allows me to express...'. Suggestion: use clear subject and verb order and simple present for general statements.'

× So I prefer so I prefer beer on social media.

✓ So I prefer social media.

Errors: 'prefer so I prefer' repetition and 'beer' is a misspelling of 'being' or misuse; 'on social media' repetition unnecessary. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer social media' or 'I prefer being on social media' if intended; correct spelling and avoid redundancy.'

× I think it's really really my friend and I have an argument because I am like the people who are easy going for all the things, uh, so I think I will not agree with others when it doesn't important.

✓ I don't often argue with my friends because I am an easygoing person, so I usually don't disagree with others when it isn't important.

Errors: phrase 'it's really really my friend and I have an argument' unclear; tense and article issues; 'easy going' should be 'easygoing'; 'I will not agree' awkward for habitual tendency—use 'usually don't disagree'; 'it doesn't important' incorrect—use 'it isn't important'. Suggestion: use clear, idiomatic expressions for tendencies and correct adjective forms and verb tense for habitual actions.'