Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid repetition (e.g., "developed" repeated) and unnecessary fillers.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It’s a quick way to stay in touch thanks to smartphones and apps like WhatsApp and Instagram, which let us share messages, photos and short updates instantly.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give specific examples with linking words. Be careful with word choice ("moral life stories" unclear); use precise phrases like "college work" or "family matters." Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

Example: We usually chat about everyday life. For example, we talk about college assignments, plans for the weekend, and sometimes family responsibilities. Also, we share personal experiences or give each other advice when someone has a problem.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference with reasons and a linking word to connect ideas. Use correct grammar for singular/plural and reduce repetition. Offer a short example to illustrate your point.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in groups because it feels more personal and less noisy. For instance, in a one-on-one chat I can focus on the conversation and give honest advice without interruptions.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons and one example. Use correct verb forms ("it doesn't hide"), and avoid vague phrasing. Keep it to a couple of sentences.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more honest and clear; you can read body language and tone. For example, when discussing a serious issue I would rather meet in person to avoid misunderstandings.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a concise example with correct grammar and word order. Avoid repetition and long, unclear sentences. Explain briefly why the argument happens and how you resolve it, using linking words like "for example" or "usually."

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, usually about who should pay the bill when we eat out. For example, when four of us share a meal we often discuss whether to split the cost or let one person pay, and usually we decide by taking turns or using an app to split the bill.

× Since the develop the technology was developed, it is the easy way to communicate with your friends, family or your siblings.

✓ Since the technology was developed, it has become an easy way to communicate with your friends, family, or siblings.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect word order ('develop the technology was developed') and article usage. Correct structure is 'Since the technology was developed' and use present perfect 'has become' to show a change resulting from development. Also add commas and remove redundant 'your' before 'siblings'. Suggestion: simplify clauses and use correct tense for resulting state.

× But the easy way to chat with your friend by through some some kind of apps there are like Instagram and WhatsApp as well.

✓ But an easy way to chat with friends is through apps like Instagram and WhatsApp.

Original mixes prepositions ('by through') and has redundancy ('some some kind of apps there are like'). Use 'through apps' and remove extraneous words; use plural 'friends' for general statement. Also use the indefinite article 'an' before 'easy way'.

× Well, we don't have any specific topic to chat, but when we start chatting, we talk about daily conversation, about daily life, maybe the college life and might be the responsibilities of families.

✓ Well, we don't have any specific topic; when we start chatting, we talk about daily life, college life, and sometimes family responsibilities.

Phrase 'daily conversation, about daily life' is repetitive; use consistent present simple for habitual actions. Replace 'might be the responsibilities of families' with 'sometimes family responsibilities' for natural word order and noun choice. Use semicolon or sentence break to separate clauses.

× We talk, we share each other to our moral, moral life stories.

✓ We talk and share our personal life stories and values with each other.

Original 'share each other to our moral' misuses pronouns and prepositions. Use 'share ... with each other' and choose clearer nouns ('personal life stories and values'). Maintain parallel structure 'talk and share'.

× Well I don't like to chat in groups and lot of people I just wanted to be chat with one one person at each time because it give me more satisfaction.

✓ Well, I don't like to chat in groups with a lot of people; I just want to chat with one person at a time because it gives me more satisfaction.

Original has missing articles ('a lot of people'), incorrect verb forms ('wanted to be chat'), and subject-verb agreement ('it give'). Use present simple 'want' for preference and 'gives' for singular subject 'it'. Also 'one person at a time' is the correct phrase.

× Because chatting in a big group it might be a disturbance and disturb you.

✓ Chatting in a big group can be disturbing and may distract you.

Original has redundant 'it' and awkward phrasing 'may be a disturbance and disturb you.' Use modal 'can' or 'may' and adjective 'disturbing' with verb 'distract' for clarity.

× Well I slightly prefer to communicate face to face because it don't hide anything in but in communicating with the social media it might be hiding something from each other.

✓ I slightly prefer to communicate face to face because it doesn't hide anything, but communicating via social media may hide things from each other.

Use 'doesn't' not 'don't' for third person singular dummy 'it'. Remove extra words 'in' and restructure second clause: 'communicating via social media may hide things.' Maintain parallel gerund forms and proper modal 'may'.

× I don't like that. I like to communicate people face to face and give clearly.

✓ I don't like that. I prefer to communicate with people face to face and speak clearly.

Use 'communicate with people' (preposition 'with' required). 'Give clearly' is incorrect; use 'speak clearly' or 'communicate clearly.' Prefer 'prefer' for consistency.

× I argue with my friends where we have to pay the bills.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends about who has to pay the bills.

Use 'about who has to pay the bills' to express disagreement topic. Replace 'where' with 'about' and use present simple 'has' for third person singular 'who' (singular person).

× We communicate each other while eating food in the restaurant.

✓ We talk to each other while eating at a restaurant.

Use 'talk to each other' or 'communicate with each other' (not 'communicate each other'). 'Eating food' is redundant; use 'eating' and 'at a restaurant' for natural preposition.

× We decide one person from each group who have to pay the bill and all the three, four members of the group of the friends are argue on this topic say yes.

✓ We decide on one person from the group who has to pay the bill, and the three or four members often argue about this topic before agreeing.

Original has subject-verb agreement errors ('who have' should be 'who has'), article and number word order issues ('all the three, four members'), and incorrect verb forms ('are argue'). Use 'decide on', 'who has', and 'argue about' with correct word order and pluralization.