Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: もっと流暢で自然な応答を練習してください。不要な「uh」や繰り返しを減らし、主題文を明確に述べた後で具体例を1つ付け足すと良いです。文は最大5文に収め、語順と時制（例えば “when I talk”）に注意してください。

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax. For instance, we often talk about what to eat or where to go on our next holiday, which makes breaks between classes more enjoyable.

Suggestion: 理由と具体例を明確にし、時制と語順の誤りを直しましょう。接続詞（for example, because, and）を適切に使って論理をつなぎ、冗長な語や繰り返しを避けてください。

Example: I usually talk about plans and daily decisions because discussing options helps us decide quickly. For example, we often chat about where to eat or what to order when we meet.

Suggestion: 好みをはっきり述べ、理由を論理的に展開しましょう。文法（e.g. 'when there are only two people'、'ask questions'）と単語の正しい形に注意し、不要なフィラーを減らしてください。

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can have deeper conversations. For example, when there are only two of us, I can ask more personal questions and follow up on their answers.

Suggestion: 理由を具体的に述べ、‘five senses’などの表現を正しく使ってください。繰り返しを避け、具体的な利点（表情、声のトーン）を挙げると説得力が増します。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and facial expressions. For example, seeing someone's smile or hearing their tone helps me understand their feelings better than a text message.

Suggestion: 応答が不明瞭なので、まず直接的に答え（Yes/No）を言い、その後頻度と理由を具体的に述べてください。曖昧な語や未完成の文を避け、例を1つ示すと良いです。

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, usually about small matters like where to eat. For example, we once argued about whether to try a new restaurant or go to our usual place, but we resolved it by taking turns choosing.

× I can, I, I can feel relaxed when I talking to my friends, uh, about, uh, what to eat, uh, next one and where to go on next holiday.

✓ I can feel relaxed when I am talking to my friends about what to eat next and where to go on the next holiday.

The verb 'talking' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous (be + -ing). Use 'I am talking' or 'when talking' to be grammatically correct and match the present continuous context. Also adjust word order and articles: 'next one' -> 'next' and add 'the' before 'next holiday' for specificity. Suggestion: Use 'when I am talking' or 'when talking' and include appropriate articles.

× I usually chat about what to do next with them because by talking in that way helps us to decide, uh, things.

✓ I usually chat about what to do next with them because talking in that way helps us decide things.

The phrase 'by talking in that way helps' is ungrammatical because 'by + -ing' should either be followed by a clause or replace 'because'. Remove 'by' so the gerund phrase 'talking in that way' functions as the subject and use 'helps us decide' (no 'to' required after 'helps'). Suggestion: Use 'talking in that way helps us decide things' or 'because by talking in that way, we can decide things.'

× And in addition, it made me it makes me feel relaxed.

✓ In addition, it makes me feel relaxed.

The sentence mixes past ('made') and present ('makes') incorrectly. Context is habitual/present, so use present tense 'makes'. Remove the redundant 'it' and 'in addition' only once. Suggestion: Keep consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× For example, I often discussing what do they eat?

✓ For example, I often discuss what they eat.

Use the base verb 'discuss' with 'often' for a habitual action, not the -ing form 'discussing' without auxiliary. Also change the embedded question 'what do they eat?' to the statement form 'what they eat' when it's a subordinate clause. Suggestion: Use 'I often discuss what they eat' or 'I often discuss what to eat.'

× Uh, I prefer to chat with, uh, only one friend, uh, because by into doing so, uh, we can talk, uh, deeply.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because by doing so we can talk more deeply.

'By into doing so' is incorrect; use 'by doing so'. 'Talk deeply' is awkward — use 'talk more deeply' or 'have deeper conversations.' Ensure correct adverb placement: 'talk more deeply' modifies 'talk.' Suggestion: Use 'by doing so' and 'have deeper conversations'.

× Uh, for example, uh, when there is only two people, uh, I can deeply asking questions about what the other person say.

✓ For example, when there are only two people, I can deeply ask questions about what the other person says.

Subject-verb agreement: 'there is' should be 'there are' with plural 'two people'. 'I can deeply asking' mixes modal + -ing incorrectly; use 'I can ask'. 'The other person say' needs third-person singular verb 'says'. Suggestion: Use 'there are two people', 'I can ask', and 'the other person says.'

× I like face to face communication because, uh, it enables me to, uh, use a sense of UH-5 senses.

✓ I like face-to-face communication because it enables me to use my senses.

Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective and use plural 'senses' rather than 'a sense of UH-5 senses' which is unclear. Also include possessive 'my' to indicate the speaker's senses. Remove filler 'uh' and unclear 'UH-5.' Suggestion: Say 'face-to-face communication' and 'use my senses' or specify which senses (e.g., sight and hearing).

× Uh, for example, uh, I can see the facial expression, uh, when face to face, uh, communication when face to.

✓ For example, I can see facial expressions in face-to-face communication.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use plural 'facial expressions' and concise phrasing 'in face-to-face communication.' Remove repeated fragments 'when face to face' and trailing 'when face to.' Suggestion: Keep sentences concise: 'I can see facial expressions when communicating face to face.'

× Ah yes, sometimes because I think hesitating to what to say is but in a long perspective, for example, I would like to for example.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue because I hesitate about what to say, but in the long term, for example, I would like to...

The original is fragmented and contains misplaced phrases. 'Hesitating to what to say' should be 'I hesitate about what to say' or 'I hesitate to say something.' 'In a long perspective' should be 'in the long term' or 'from a long-term perspective.' The trailing 'I would like to for example' is incomplete; indicate intended continuation or remove. Suggestion: Use clear connectors and complete clauses: 'Sometimes I argue because I hesitate about what to say, but in the long term I would like to...'. Please complete the thought.