Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise and natural by using a clear topic sentence, varied vocabulary and correct grammar. Avoid repeating ideas ("enjoy" twice) and use correct verb forms for parallel items. Include a brief reason or example to support your statement.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends online, especially on apps like WhatsApp and Instagram, because it helps me stay connected with their daily lives. For instance, we often exchange memes and quick updates, which keeps our conversations light and fun.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "we share what we have studied" is fine but could be smoother). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: We mainly talk about our studies; for example, we exchange notes and explain difficult topics to each other. Besides that, we often share funny memes and personal updates to keep the mood light, so the chats are both useful and entertaining.

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid filler words like "well" and "umm." Use correct grammar ("too many people make me feel pressured"). Offer a brief reason and one supporting detail to make the answer more natural and coherent.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because too many people make me feel pressured and anxious. For example, in a private chat I can express myself more clearly and I feel more comfortable asking personal questions.

Suggestion: This is a good balanced answer. Improve cohesion by using linking words and slightly more natural phrasing (e.g., "it depends"). Make sentences a bit shorter and avoid repetition ("conversation" used several times).

Example: It depends: for quick messages I prefer social media because it's fast and convenient. However, for deep or sensitive topics—such as advice or controversial issues—I prefer face-to-face meetings so we can discuss things clearly and read each other's reactions.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence, then explain with a specific example and a result. Correct small pronoun issue ("she" could be "they" or "a friend"). Mention how arguments are resolved to show maturity and communication skills.

Example: Yes, sometimes we argue, mostly about political views. For example, I once disagreed with a friend's stance on a current policy, but after discussing our reasons calmly we gained a clearer perspective and respected each other's opinions.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends through social media such as Facebook Messenger, WhatsApp, Instagram. I enjoy talking to them, share memes with them. I love this process.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends through social media such as Facebook Messenger, WhatsApp, and Instagram. I enjoy talking to them and sharing memes with them. I love this process.

Issue: incorrect parallel verb forms and missing conjunction. The sentence 'I enjoy talking to them, share memes with them' mixes two verb phrases without parallel structure and a coordinating conjunction. Correct by making both verbs gerunds linked with 'and' ('talking' and 'sharing') and add 'and' before the last item in a list (Oxford comma optional) to improve clarity.

× We usually chat about studies like we share what we have studied with each other and we share real and funny memes to keep the conversation light and warm.

✓ We usually chat about our studies; we share what we have learned with each other and share real and funny memes to keep the conversation light and warm.

Issue: incorrect or awkward preposition and repetition. Use 'our studies' not 'studies' for natural possession and change 'what we have studied' to 'what we have learned' for idiomatic expression. Also remove redundant 'we' before the second 'share' for conciseness.

× Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because too much people makes me feel pressured.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because too many people make me feel pressured.

Issue: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement. 'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; use 'too many' for countable 'people'. With plural subject 'people', the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'.

× I am very socially awkward so I prefer talking to only one of my friends.

✓ I am very socially awkward, so I prefer talking to just one friend.

Issue: redundancy and article choice. 'Only one of my friends' is wordy; 'just one friend' is more natural. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence flow.

× Depends, if I just want to have a quick conversation with someone then I prefer chatting via social media.

✓ It depends; if I just want to have a quick conversation with someone, then I prefer chatting via social media.

Issue: sentence fragment and missing subject. 'Depends' is informal and lacks a subject; add 'It' for a complete sentence. Also add punctuation and a comma after the conditional clause for clarity.

× And if I want to have a very deep conversation with someone or I have to understand a very controversial topic or I have to take advice then I prefer face to face conversation.

✓ If I want to have a very deep conversation with someone, need to understand a controversial topic, or want advice, then I prefer face-to-face conversation.

Issue: awkward conjunctions and article use. Avoid starting with 'And'. Make parallel items concise and parallel in structure ('need', 'want'). Use hyphens in 'face-to-face' as a compound modifier and include the article 'a' before 'conversation' for correctness.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends and usually it happens because of our political views.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends, and usually it happens because of our political views.

Issue: punctuation for clarity. Although grammar is mostly correct, add a comma before 'and' to separate independent clauses. 'Because of' is acceptable here.

× For example, I can have a political view that she does not support, so we can have an argument and get a clearer perspective.

✓ For example, I might have a political view that she does not support, so we may argue and gain a clearer perspective.

Issue: modal verb choice and word choice. 'Can have' is grammatical but 'might have' better conveys possibility. Use 'may argue' or 'might argue' for natural phrasing and 'gain' rather than 'get' for more formal spoken English.