Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., "conversing" and "chatting" together), and limit to up to 3 sentences. Add a specific reason or brief example using a linking word.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends online because it's quick and convenient. For example, I can send a short message or photo in under a minute to update them about my day.

Suggestion: Be direct and specific. Begin with a topic sentence saying what you usually chat about, then give one or two concrete examples linked with words like "for example" or "often". Pay attention to grammar and tense ("what she had made" → "what she made").

Example: I usually chat about daily life and plans. For example, I often message my friends on WhatsApp during breaks to catch up, and I also text my mother to ask what she made for dinner.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clearer linking words. Start with a preference sentence (if you have one) or say both have benefits, then support with concise specific reasons. Correct small grammar issues: "a group conversations" → "group conversations", "secrets" → "private matters" if more natural.

Example: I prefer one-to-one chats for private matters because they protect privacy and allow honest conversations. However, group chats are better for making plans or having fun with several friends.

Suggestion: Make the sentence shorter and clearer. Start with a direct statement of preference, then give one or two concrete reasons connected with linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid awkward phrases such as "if in case".

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it creates a personal connection and builds trust. For instance, talking in person makes it easier to resolve disagreements quickly.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar ("doesn't" → "don't", remove "the" before "when"). Begin with a clear statement about how you handle disagreements, then add a brief example or outcome using linking words like "however" or "so". Avoid vague phrases like "beyond the head" and "mid level"; use clearer expressions such as "if it gets heated" and "keep it calm."

Example: I try to stay calm when my opinions differ from my friends, but if a discussion becomes heated I may argue briefly. However, I usually try to resolve the issue calmly so it doesn't turn into a serious fight.

× Yes, I do like chatting and conversing through the social networking sites as it is very common and prominent way of communicating effectively and conveniently.

✓ Yes, I like chatting and conversing on social networking sites, as it is a very common and convenient way to communicate effectively.

Use 'on' with 'social networking sites' rather than 'through'. Remove redundant 'do' for simple present affirmation. Use 'a' before 'very common' because 'way' is singular and needs an article. Replace 'prominent' with 'convenient' to match intended meaning and use 'to communicate' instead of 'of communicating' for smoother structure.

× It takes less than a minute to write a full-fledged text.

✓ It takes less than a minute to write a full-fledged text.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change required. Kept for completeness.

× Whenever I get a break from my work, I often send the messages to my friends on WhatsApp groups to get catch up after the working hours.

✓ Whenever I get a break from work, I often send messages to my friends in WhatsApp groups to catch up after working hours.

Do not use 'the' before uncountable 'work' here. 'Messages' can be plural without 'the'. Use 'in' with 'WhatsApp groups' and 'to catch up' (verb) rather than 'to get catch up'. Remove 'the' before 'working hours'.

× Or I often ask my mother that what she had made in dinner.

✓ I often ask my mother what she made for dinner.

Do not use 'that' before an indirect question. Use simple past 'made' (not 'had made') for a completed action, and 'for dinner' is the correct prepositional phrase. Remove leading 'Or' which is unnecessary.

× I would say chatting with an individual or a group has different advantages as conversing with the person keeps the privacy with that individual and can share the secrets as well.

✓ I would say chatting with an individual or a group has different advantages: talking one-on-one preserves privacy and allows you to share secrets, while group conversations are better for planning or fun.

Original sentence is long and awkward. Rephrase for clarity and parallel structure. Use 'preserves privacy' instead of 'keeps the privacy with that individual', and add contrast with 'while' to introduce group benefits. Use 'allows you to' for clear subject reference.

× Whereas a group conversations are related to making a plan or for a fun talk.

✓ Group conversations are for making plans or for fun.

Remove 'a' before the plural 'group conversations'. Use plural verb agreement and simplify phrasing: 'for making plans' and 'for fun'.

× I prefer to converse by meeting the person in personal by making face to face contact as it creates a personal touch and helps to gain the trust of the individual and can also be helpful in reducing the fights if in case.

✓ I prefer to talk face-to-face because meeting someone in person creates a personal touch, helps build trust, and can help reduce conflicts.

Use 'in person' not 'in personal'. Use 'talk face-to-face' or 'meet someone in person'. Simplify and correct 'helps build trust' and 'reduce conflicts' instead of awkward 'reducing the fights if in case'.

× Firstly I try to stay calm even if the opinions doesn't match, but the when things go beyond the head I sometimes argue.

✓ Firstly, I try to stay calm even if opinions don't match, but when things go too far I sometimes argue.

Use plural 'opinions' with 'don't' (subject-verb agreement). Remove extra 'the' before 'when' and replace 'beyond the head' with idiomatic 'go too far'.

× But I prefer to resolve it and to keep it at mid level so that it doesn't get turned into an abusive fight.

✓ I prefer to resolve disputes and keep them at a moderate level so they do not turn into abusive fights.

Avoid starting sentences with 'But' redundantly. Use plural 'disputes' for generality and parallel verbs 'resolve' and 'keep'. Use 'moderate' instead of 'mid level' and plural 'fights'. Use 'do not turn' rather than passive 'doesn't get turned' for clarity.