Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g., use gerunds: "chatting"), and give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps us stay connected and support each other when we have problems. For instance, we often share advice about studies or personal issues, which keeps our friendship strong.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence naming typical topics, then give specific examples and use linking words like "for example" or "also". Correct verb forms and possessives.

Example: I usually talk about study and work. For example, we discuss upcoming assignments, job opportunities, and sometimes I tell them about my day. Also, we give each other advice when one of us has a problem.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference in a single sentence, then explain why with specific reasons and a short example. Use correct grammar (singular/plural agreement) and linking words like "because" and "for example."

Example: I prefer talking to one friend rather than a group because conversations are more personal and deeper. For example, when I speak to a close friend we can discuss personal problems in detail without interruptions.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, use correct adjectives (e.g., "faster" not "fatter"), and explain both advantages and disadvantages with linking words like "however". Be specific about how social media affects relationships.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media because it is faster and more convenient, especially when friends live far away. However, it can weaken face-to-face interactions because messages lack non-verbal cues, so relationships may feel less close.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear statement about frequency, then give a concise example of when arguments happen and how you resolve them. Avoid filler words and be grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially during group projects when we disagree about ideas. For example, if we have different approaches to a task, we discuss the pros and cons and try to reach a compromise.

× Yes, of course, I very like chatting with my friends because when I chatting with my friends, I uh, we can stay connected and I can uh, and we can help uh, conservation, uh, even though we cannot miss face to face.

✓ Yes, of course, I really like chatting with my friends because when I chat with my friends, we can stay connected and we can have conversations, even though we cannot meet face to face.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'very like' and 'when I chatting' and 'help conservation' and 'miss face to face'. 'Like' should be modified by 'really' (adverb) not 'very'. After 'when I' use base verb 'chat' (not -ing) for habitual actions (present tense). 'Help conservation' is incorrect and likely intended 'have conversations' or 'help conserve' depending on meaning; here 'have conversations' fits. 'Cannot miss face to face' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'cannot meet face to face'. Use clear verb forms to express habitual present actions. Suggestions: replace 'very like' with 'really like', use 'when I chat' not 'when I chatting', use 'have conversations' for talking, and use 'meet face to face' for in-person meetings.

× Uh, when I chat with my friends, I have a lot of, uh, topics and I usually, uh, chatting with my friends about study or jobs and beside us, we can help, uh, conservation that I say about my days, my.

✓ When I chat with my friends, I have a lot of topics and I usually chat with them about study or work. We also can share conversations about our days.

The sentence wrongly mixes 'I usually, uh, chatting' where the correct form is 'I usually chat' (use base verb after adverb 'usually'). 'Jobs' is better as 'work' in this context. 'Beside us, we can help conservation that I say about my days' is unclear; likely intended 'We also can share conversations about our days.' Keep parallel verb forms and simple vocabulary. Use 'chat with them' rather than repeating 'with my friends'. Suggestions: use 'I usually chat', replace 'jobs' with 'work', and rephrase unclear parts to 'We also can share conversations about our days.'

× For me I refer chatting with only one friends and we need to write it's mafia and when I just wish only one friend we have a lot of topics in order to share story beside us.

✓ For me, I prefer chatting with only one friend, and we can write to each other privately. When I chat with just one friend, we have many topics to share stories with each other.

Multiple pronoun and noun-number errors: 'I refer' should be 'I prefer' (word choice). 'Only one friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires singular 'friend'. 'We need to write it's mafia' is unclear; likely intended 'we can write to each other privately' or 'it's more private'. 'When I just wish only one friend' is ungrammatical; use 'when I chat with just one friend'. Also 'we have a lot of topics in order to share story beside us' should be 'we have many topics to share stories with each other.' Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and correct singular/plural forms. Suggestions: use 'prefer', match singular/plural ('one friend'), and rephrase unclear metaphors like 'mafia' to 'privately'.

× I refer to communication via social media because it's uh, become, uh, fatter and more convenient. Uh, we, I think it's very, uh, it's very, umm, convenient. However, it also reduct 5 to 5, uh, so it's reduced relationships.

✓ I prefer communication via social media because it has become faster and more convenient. I think it is very convenient. However, it also reduces relationships.

Tense and word choice errors: 'I refer to' should be 'I prefer'. 'It's become' requires present perfect 'it has become' for a change up to now. 'Fatter' is incorrect; likely 'faster'. 'Reduct 5 to 5' is ungrammatical; the verb should be 'reduces' (third person singular present) and the object 'relationships' is appropriate. Maintain correct tense forms and correct comparative adjectives. Suggestions: use 'prefer', 'has become faster', and 'reduces relationships' or better 'reduces the quality of relationships' for clarity.

× Uh, yes, uh, sometime I agree with friends, for example, when I think when we teamwork we are any happens several uh argue shutters, uh, different about idea or different about.

✓ Yes, sometimes I disagree with friends. For example, when we work in a team, disagreements can happen; we may argue about different ideas.

Errors in tense, word choice and sentence structure: 'sometime I agree with friends' likely intended 'sometimes I disagree' given context about arguing. 'When we teamwork' should be 'when we work in a team' (use verb 'work' and 'in a team' phrase). 'We are any happens several argue shutters' is ungrammatical; correct idea is 'disagreements can happen' or 'we may have arguments'. 'Different about idea' should be 'argue about different ideas'. Use proper verb forms and clearer noun phrases. Suggestions: use 'sometimes', 'disagree', 'work in a team', and 'disagreements can happen; we may argue about different ideas.'