Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and filler words, and use one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and remove redundant phrases.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps me relax, and I often get useful advice from my best friend because we share personal experiences and support each other.

Suggestion: Organize your points clearly and avoid hesitations. Use linking words to group topics and give specific examples. Prefer correct word choices (e.g., "personal matters" not "personals").

Example: We usually talk about our daily routines, such as work or classes, and personal matters like problems or secrets. For example, last week we discussed how to balance work and study and gave each other practical advice.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, then briefly explain with a reason. Reduce fillers and correct grammar (e.g., "it depends"). Use linking phrase like "however" to contrast preferences.

Example: It depends. I usually prefer one friend for private conversations because it's more comfortable, but if I want to learn about trends or get many opinions I prefer chatting in a group.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons with fewer generalizations. Use correct collocations (e.g., "face to face" -> "face-to-face", "social media is" singular). Avoid absolute claims about safety; qualify them.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's clearer and more flexible for discussing work or personal matters. I also worry that social media may not protect privacy as well as in-person conversations.

Suggestion: Clarify what you mean by "argue" and avoid awkward metaphors. Give a brief reason and an example of a constructive argument. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "relationship stronger").

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, but usually about small issues. I think constructive disagreements can strengthen a relationship because they help us understand each other's views and solve problems, for example when we discuss plans or responsibilities.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friends, I found it incredibly enjoyable and relaxing for me and furthermore, I felt very comfortable when I chatted with my best friend and we always share shared our personal perspective with each other and find a good piece of advice.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I find it incredibly enjoyable and relaxing, and I feel very comfortable when I chat with my best friend; we always share our personal perspectives with each other and find good advice.

The phrase 'like to chatting' mixes the infinitive 'to' with the -ing form; use either 'like to chat' or 'like chatting' (Grammar problem type ID 8). Tense consistency: the student used past tense 'found' and 'felt' but the general habit should be in present simple 'find' and 'feel' (Grammar problem type ID 6). 'Share shared' is a duplicated verb form; use the correct present form 'share'. 'Personal perspective' should be plural 'personal perspectives' to match 'each other' and plural sense (Grammar problem type ID 1). Also punctuation and sentence boundaries were improved for clarity.

× Mostly we share our daily routines with each other. Uh, additionally, uh, sometime we share our personals, uh, or secrets, uh, chats with each other and uh, find good or valuable advice. Sometime we just talk uh, long hours over family.

✓ Mostly we share our daily routines with each other. Additionally, sometimes we share personal matters or secrets and get useful advice. Sometimes we just talk for long hours about family.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime' for frequency (Grammar problem type ID 20). 'Personals' is incorrect; use 'personal matters' or 'personal things' (Grammar problem type ID 13). 'Find good or valuable advice' is better phrased 'get useful advice' for natural English. Use 'talk for long hours about family' instead of 'talk long hours over family' (preposition error, Grammar problem type ID 11). Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I think it's depend on the type of chat if I would just share my personal, uh, perspective or personal, uh, chat with my friends. So I just prefer one friend, uh, furthermore, umm, if I, if I uh, want to get more information about trends, so I would prefer to talk with a group of people.

✓ I think it depends on the type of chat. If I am just sharing my personal perspective, I prefer one friend. However, if I want to get more information about trends, I would prefer to talk with a group of people.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb must agree with the subject: 'it depends' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Use consistent tense and form: 'if I would just share' should be 'if I am just sharing' or 'if I just share' (present tense habit) (Grammar problem type ID 6). Also split into separate sentences for clarity (sentence structure, Grammar problem type ID 26). Removed filler words.

× I would prefer to communicate face to face with my friends and some business employees because it is very convenient and flexible for me. On the other side, I found social media are not a safe platform which can keep secrets personally.

✓ I would prefer to communicate face to face with my friends and some colleagues because it is very convenient and flexible for me. On the other hand, I find social media are not a safe platform for keeping personal secrets.

'Some business employees' is awkward; 'colleagues' or 'business colleagues' is more natural (word choice, Grammar problem type ID 13). 'On the other side' should be 'on the other hand' (conjunction/collocation, Grammar problem type ID 16). Tense consistency: 'I found' should be 'I find' when stating a general opinion (present tense issue, Grammar problem type ID 6). Use 'for keeping personal secrets' rather than 'which can keep secrets personally' (preposition and phrasing, Grammar problem type ID 11). Also 'social media are' vs 'social media is' — 'social media' is plural but can be treated as plural; keep 'are' but better to rephrase; here kept 'are' matched with plural.

× Yes, of course I argue with my friends. I uh, I feel it is very comfortable and accessible way to communicate with your friends. Uh, Furthermore, arguing with your friend can make your bone more strengthen and valuable for our relationship.

✓ Yes, of course I argue with my friends. I feel it is a very comfortable and accessible way to communicate with them. Furthermore, arguing with your friends can strengthen and add value to our relationships.

'It is very comfortable and accessible way' needs an article and adjective order: 'a very comfortable and accessible way' (article error, Grammar problem type ID 22 and adjective order, Grammar problem type ID 18). 'Your friends' inconsistent with 'my friends'; use 'them' or 'my friends' for consistency (pronoun error, Grammar problem type ID 12). 'Make your bone more strengthen' is incorrect; use the verb 'strengthen' and correct phrasing 'can strengthen and add value to our relationship(s)' (verb form issue, Grammar problem type ID 9 and word choice, Grammar problem type ID 13).