Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more concise, correct grammar, and organize ideas: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix subject-verb agreement and remove repetitions.

Example: Yes, I do. Chatting helps me maintain friendships, especially with classmates and friends who live abroad. For example, we use messaging apps to share news and stay updated, which keeps our relationship close despite the distance.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details; use linking words to show reason or result. Correct phrasing (e.g., 'admissions test' or 'entrance exam') and avoid filler words.

Example: At the moment we mainly talk about the university admission tests because I'm applying next year. We exchange study tips, practice questions and encouragement, which helps us prepare and stay motivated.

Suggestion: Provide a concise direct answer followed by brief, specific examples using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because'). Remove hesitations and fix small grammar errors.

Example: It depends on the situation. If I need to speak privately I message one friend, but if I'm asking for help or sharing an update I use a group chat because it's faster and reaches everyone at once.

Suggestion: Answer directly, avoid filler words, and clarify reasons with smooth grammar. Give one or two specific examples of situations where social media is better.

Example: I prefer social media because I'm not comfortable showing emotions in person. For instance, I find it easier to express my thoughts in messages and use text or emojis to be clear without feeling awkward.

Suggestion: Good structure and example; improve accuracy and fluency by correcting plural/singular and article use, and make sentences more natural and compact. Use linking words like 'when' and 'so' correctly.

Example: Sometimes I do, because people have different opinions. When disagreements arise, I listen to their points of view and we discuss the issue calmly until we reach a compromise. For example, if we disagree on where to meet, we choose a location that is convenient for everyone so everyone feels comfortable.

× Of course, because chatting can contribute to better relationships because it's allows you to keep in touch with your friend not only in your in classroom but also friend that's go abroad so that you can be.

✓ Of course, because chatting can contribute to better relationships; it allows you to keep in touch with your friends not only in your classroom but also with friends who go abroad so that you can be.

Problems: incorrect use of contraction and verb form 'it's allows' (subject 'it' + verb 'allow' needs 'allows' without extra contraction) and singular/plural inconsistencies ('your friend' -> 'your friends'; 'friend that's go abroad' -> 'friends who go abroad'). Use of 'in your in classroom' has an extra preposition. Also 'so that you can be' is incomplete and unnecessary. Suggestion: remove extra contraction, use correct subject-verb agreement ('it allows'), make nouns plural when referring generally, use 'who' for people, and remove redundant words.

× Right now it would be merely in admission test because I'm going to have the admission next year. So that right now we will talk about these types of message the most to share news and support each other.

✓ Right now it is mainly about the admission test because I'm going to take the admission exam next year. So at the moment we talk about these kinds of messages most to share news and support each other.

Problems: inappropriate modal/helping verb 'would be' when simple present 'is' fits current situation; 'merely' is awkward, use 'mainly'; 'have the admission' should be 'take the admission exam'; 'these types of message' needs plural 'kinds of messages'; 'the most' placement and article usage fixed. Suggestion: use simple present for current recurring topics, choose correct collocations (take an exam, kinds of messages).

× It depends on the message. If I want to directly umm in one person I would chat with only one friend.

✓ It depends on the message. If I want to talk directly to one person, I would chat with just one friend.

Problems: missing verb 'talk' and incorrect preposition 'in one person'; 'only one friend' is acceptable but 'just one friend' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'talk to' for addressing someone and include the main verb.

× But if I want to ask for help or sharing some updates I will check in a group. So that depends on situation.

✓ But if I want to ask for help or share some updates, I will check the group. So it depends on the situation.

Problems: inconsistent verb forms 'want to ask' vs 'sharing' (should be parallel: 'share'); 'check in a group' is awkward—use 'check the group' or 'post in the group'; missing article 'the' before 'situation'. Suggestion: keep parallel verb forms after 'want to', use correct articles, and choose natural collocations.

× I personally prefer social media communication because I'm not that umm, I'm not that one who can express my facial emotion well.

✓ I personally prefer social media communication because I'm not someone who can express my facial emotions well.

Problems: awkward phrase 'not that one who' and singular 'facial emotion' should be plural 'facial emotions'; 'someone' is the correct pronoun. Suggestion: use 'someone who' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× So that umm, social conversation suits me the best. So I will choose.

✓ So social conversation suits me best, so I would choose it.

Problems: redundant 'So that umm,' and awkward 'social conversation suits me the best' (use 'suits me best'); 'So I will choose' is vague—choose what? Add object 'it' and use conditional/modal 'would' for preference. Suggestion: remove filler words and make sentences complete with clear subjects and objects.

× Sometime I do disagree with friends because people have different opinions.

✓ Sometimes I do disagree with friends because people have different opinions.

Problems: 'Sometime' should be plural/adverb 'Sometimes'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' to indicate occasional actions.

× When that happens, I will listen to their point of view and we will discuss issue calmly until we find a compromise.

✓ When that happens, I will listen to their points of view and we will discuss the issue calmly until we find a compromise.

Problems: 'point of view' may be plural 'points of view' when referring to multiple friends; missing definite article 'the' before 'issue'. Suggestion: use plural for multiple opinions and include articles for specific nouns.

× For example, if we argue about where to meet, we pick a place that is convenient to everyone so that everyone will comfortable with.

✓ For example, if we argue about where to meet, we pick a place that is convenient for everyone so that everyone will be comfortable.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'convenient to' should be 'convenient for'; missing verb 'be' after 'will'; awkward ending 'comfortable with'—complete phrase is 'comfortable' or 'comfortable with it'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and include auxiliary verbs in future constructions.