Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và tiếng ừ/ừm. Chú ý ngữ pháp (động từ, số nhiều), thời lượng câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Ví dụ cụ thể: nói lý do cụ thể vì sao thích trò chuyện và nêu một kết quả. Luyện phát âm từ như "relaxed" và dùng thì động từ đúng (have/has strengthened).

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us relax and share new stories. For example, when we meet after work I usually tell them about my day and they give me advice, which has strengthened our friendship.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, sắp xếp ý theo cấu trúc: chủ đề chính rồi chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai (ting forms, articles). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "current events", "plans", "everyday life". Nên thêm liên từ như "for example" hoặc "such as" để cụ thể hóa.

Example: We usually talk about current events and our personal lives. For example, over coffee we often discuss news, work, or future plans and share funny stories from our daily life.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trình bày ý kiến trực tiếp: chọn một phương án rồi giải thích lý do rõ ràng, tránh ngập ngừng. Sửa cấu trúc: "I prefer chatting with one friend because..." và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống. Hạn chế dùng nhiều tiếng “uh” và cố gắng nối ý bằng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so".

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can have deeper and more meaningful conversations. For instance, when I talk to a close friend I feel comfortable sharing personal opinions and getting honest feedback.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, giải thích lý do cụ thể như lý giải về ngôn ngữ cơ thể. Sử dụng cấu trúc chính xác: "I prefer communicating face-to-face because..." và tránh lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể: khi gặp mặt bạn có thể thấy cảm xúc qua nét mặt.

Example: I prefer communicating face-to-face because we can read body language and facial expressions. For example, when we meet in person I can easily tell if my friend is worried or happy, which helps the conversation.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần mạch lạc: nói có/không rồi mô tả tần suất và cách giải quyết. Sửa ngữ pháp (some time→sometimes, have disagreements, resolve). Tránh câu không rõ nghĩa. Nên nêu ví dụ về một tranh luận gần đây và kết quả hòa giải.

Example: Yes, sometimes we have disagreements, but we usually resolve them quickly by talking. For example, last month a friend and I disagreed about plans, but we discussed it calmly and found a compromise.

× Yes, I enjoy getting up with friend and sharing a new story.

✓ Yes, I enjoy getting together with friends and sharing new stories.

Use of 'getting up' is incorrect; 'getting together' means meeting. 'friend' should be plural 'friends' for general meaning (singular/plural issue). 'sharing a new story' sounds odd; 'sharing new stories' is natural. Also use 'enjoy' + verb-ing correctly.

× I like chatting with my friend because it's so relax and comfortable when we sharing a new stories and uh and uh, it have uh, strengthened our friendship.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because it's so relaxing and comfortable when we share new stories, and it has strengthened our friendship.

Use 'relax' is wrong form; need adjective/participle 'relaxing'. 'we sharing' should be 'we share' (verb form). 'a new stories' conflicts number; remove 'a' or make singular. 'it have strengthened' should be 'it has strengthened' (subject-verb agreement and present perfect tense).

× We usually talking about current event and sharing of sharing a new story during our new life or future life and we are and we are talking about over coffee day and during meals.

✓ We usually talk about current events and share new stories about our lives or future plans, and we often talk over coffee or during meals.

'We usually talking' should be 'we usually talk' (correct verb form). 'current event' needs plural 'events'. 'sharing of sharing' is incorrect repetition; use 'share new stories'. 'our new life or future life' is awkward; 'our lives or future plans' fits. 'we are and we are' is redundant. 'over coffee day' should be 'over coffee'.

× All because I am a deeper and, uh, I, uh, and I think I am a meaningful, uh, understanding with one person.

✓ I prefer both, because I am a thoughtful person and I can have a deeper, more meaningful understanding with one person.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'deeper' needs noun context ('deeper understanding' or 'a thoughtful person'). 'I am a meaningful' is incorrect adjective use. Recast sentence to express preference and explain why.

× Uh, so I, umm, I prefer chat with uh, only one friend who I can share.

✓ So I prefer to chat with only one friend with whom I can share things.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer' plus infinitive. 'only one friend who I can share' needs object and correct relative pronoun; 'with whom I can share things' is formal and correct. Also avoid dangling 'who I can share'.

× I prefer communicate face to face with my friends because, uh, when we talk and chatting face to face, we can connect it with, uh, with, uh, our, when we can, umm, connect it, uh, to connect it and understand to about to about, uh, body.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because when we talk in person we can connect and understand each other's body language.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer'. 'talk and chatting' is inconsistent; choose one form. 'connect it with our... body' is unclear; use 'connect and understand each other's body language'. Simplify to correct verb forms and nouns.

× Yes, sometime we have a disagreement, uh, with together, so we sometime, uh, agree, uh, this friends, but uh, we usually, uh, involve the problem. So weekly and, uh.

✓ Yes, sometimes we have disagreements together, and sometimes we argue with these friends, but usually we resolve the problem fairly quickly.

'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'a disagreement' can be plural 'disagreements' for general statement. 'with together' is redundant. 'agree this friends' is wrong; likely 'argue with these friends'. 'we usually involve the problem' is incorrect; 'we resolve the problem' fits. 'So weekly' is unclear; suggest 'fairly quickly' or 'weekend' depending on context.