Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法和发音停顿。避免过多“uh”填充词，改用完整句子并控制在不超过五句。加入一两处具体细节（例如你喜欢的音乐类型或你在社交媒体上发布的频率），并用连接词使语句流畅。

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing. I earned an advanced singing certificate when I was a child, and I still practice regularly. Nowadays I often post short videos of pop and folk songs on social media about twice a month. Singing helps me relax and improve my vocal skills.

Suggestion: 注意语法和用词（例如不要说“calculated me”），表达要清晰并使用连接词列举。控制句子长度，减少重复（如不要重复“I”）。提供具体例子和原因会更有说服力。

Example: Yes, I had many hobbies as a child because my parents encouraged me to study the arts. For example, I took singing lessons, learned to play the piano, and practiced drawing and dancing. These activities helped me develop creativity and confidence.

Suggestion: 句子结构需更自然，注意介词和动词形式（例如“practice singing”）。使用连接词（such as, so）使叙述更连贯，并给出频率或具体练习方式作为细节。

Example: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child. On weekends I usually practice singing for an hour, working on breath control and technique. In my free time I also record short clips and post them on social media to track my progress.

Suggestion: 减少犹豫语（uh），注意重复和语法（如单复数和动词形式）。用一两句清楚说明谁与自己有共同爱好，并补充具体说明她如何影响你（例如她教你或一起演奏）。

Example: Yes, we share similar interests. My aunt is a university piano teacher and runs her own music school, so I grew up around piano lessons and often practiced with her students. Her influence inspired me to pursue singing and music activities.

× Absolutely. And my favorite hobby is uh, a singing.

✓ Absolutely. My favorite hobby is singing.

句中使用不定冠词加动名词（a singing）不正确。英文中当动词变为名词（gerund）表示活动时，不加冠词。应直接用 "singing"。建议记住：以 -ing 表示爱好或活动时不使用 a/an。

× And when I was a child, I also got a high level, uh, singing examination, uh, certifications, yes.

✓ When I was a child, I also received high-level singing examination certifications.

原句中用 got 口语且搭配混乱（a high level, singing examination, certifications）。更正式和正确的表达是 use "received" 或 "got" 与复数名词搭配，并把形容词和名词顺序调整为 "high-level singing examination certifications"。建议把动词与名词搭配清晰，并注意复数形式。

× And now I sometimes in my free time, I also sing a song on social media.

✓ Now, sometimes in my free time, I sing songs on social media.

原句语序不自然且单复数不一致（a song / sometimes）。使用复数 "songs" 更符合一般习惯，且将时间状语置于句首或句中使句子更自然。建议将时间短语放在适当位置并保持名词的一致性。

× Yes, when I was child I I had lots of hobbies because my parents calculated me about the art.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had lots of hobbies because my parents encouraged me in the arts.

缺少冠词 "a"（when I was a child）。原句使用了错误动词 "calculated"（意为计算），应为 "encouraged"（鼓励）。另外 "about the art" 不自然，应改为复数 "the arts" 或 "in the arts"。建议注意冠词使用并确保动词语义正确。

× So like singing, playing piano or drawing as in the dancing.

✓ So like singing, playing the piano, drawing, and dancing.

并列项需一致形式："playing piano" 常用 "playing the piano"；"as in the dancing" 不自然，应简化为 "dancing"。建议并列时保持形式一致并使用习惯搭配。

× So lots of hobby in.

✓ So I had lots of hobbies.

原句语序和词形错误（hobby 单数且位置错误）。应使用复数 "hobbies" 并完整表达主语和谓语。建议确保名词单复数与上下文一致并构成完整句子。

× Yes, I have enjoyed singing since childhood for on weekends I always practice the sing, practice my singing skills and in some free time I record a short video and post on social media.

✓ Yes, I have enjoyed singing since childhood. On weekends I always practice singing and work on my singing skills, and in my free time I record short videos and post them on social media.

句子过长且时态、动名词使用不当（practice the sing 应为 practice singing）。"since childhood" 与现在完成时搭配正确，其他部分用一般现在时更合适。把句子分开更清晰，并注意复数（videos）和代词（post them）。建议分句表达，使用正确的动词形式和一致的时态。

× Uh, yes. Uh, because my aunt, my aunt, uh, is, uh, she's an, she's an, uh, piano teacher in the university.

✓ Yes, because my aunt is a piano teacher at the university.

原句重复啰嗦并且冠词错误（a piano teacher 正确），以及介词应为 "at the university"。建议去掉重复词，保持简洁并使用正确介词。

× And she also, uh, have uh, herself school to teach children, uh, playing piano.

✓ She also has her own school to teach children how to play the piano.

主语为第三人称单数（she），动词应为 "has" 而不是 "have"。"herself school" 不正确，应为 "her own school"。此外，教弹钢琴应表达为 "teach children how to play the piano" 或 "teach children to play the piano"。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配（her own，how to play）。