Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: state the hobby directly (topic sentence), give one or two specific supporting details, and use correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and keep under five sentences. Focus: say you enjoy traveling, what you do when you travel (e.g., exploring cultures, trying food), and why you like it.

Example: I have several hobbies, but my favourite is travelling. I enjoy visiting different countries to explore new cultures and try local foods. For example, last year I visited Japan and loved learning about their traditions and cuisine. Because travelling broadens my perspective, I try to plan at least two trips a year.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use past tense correctly. Give a clear topic sentence about the childhood hobby, then add one specific detail or brief reason. Avoid filler words and correct grammar (e.g., 'when I was a child' and 'my hobby was driving').

Example: Yes, when I was a child my favourite hobby was pretending to drive cars. I used to play with toy cars and imagine I was on long journeys with my family. This helped spark my interest in real driving later on.

Suggestion: Be consistent and precise: state clearly that travelling/photography is a long-term hobby, use linking words to explain how it developed, and give a specific example. Use fewer fillers and correct tense (present perfect or present simple) when talking about continuing hobbies.

Example: Yes, I have loved travelling since I was a child and I have always enjoyed taking photos of places I visit. For instance, I started collecting postcards and pictures at age ten and now I keep a digital album of every trip. Because I enjoy sharing experiences with friends, I often plan trips with them.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. State whether your family shares the hobby, then give one specific comparison or brief example of how you and your brother enjoy it together. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Example: Yes, my brother and I share the same hobby of travelling. We often plan trips together and enjoy exploring new cities and trying local food. For example, last summer we visited a nearby country and organized the itinerary together, which made the trip more fun.

× Yes I have lots of hobby but I love one most hobby as I grooming around the world so I love to visit different type of places in different countries.

✓ Yes, I have lots of hobbies, but I love one hobby the most: grooming around the world, so I love to visit different types of places in different countries.

The original sentence uses singular 'hobby' with 'lots of' which requires plural 'hobbies' (singular and plural issue). 'One most hobby' is incorrect word order; use 'one hobby the most'. 'Different type of places' should be 'different types of places' to match plural nouns. Also add commas and a colon for clarity. Improve by matching plural forms and correct word order. Suggested practice: review count nouns with quantifiers (lots of + plural), and place modifiers like 'the most' after the noun it modifies.

× Yes, when I was in child I had one Hobbies is my favorite. That is uh, that time I want to drive a car.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had one hobby that was my favorite. At that time I wanted to drive a car.

Errors: 'was in child' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'was a child' (sentence structure). 'Hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' because 'one' requires singular (singular and plural issue but fixed here as part of past tense context). 'Is my favorite' should be past 'was my favorite' to match 'when I was a child' (past tense issue). 'That time I want' should be past 'I wanted' (past tense issue). Improve by using past tense for actions and states in childhood and matching noun number.

× As I mentioned earlier, I have my one favorite hobby to travelling around the world and take some pictures in uh, about the different places and uh, enjoy with my friends. This is my favorite diary uh, I had since childhood.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I have one favorite hobby: travelling around the world, taking pictures of different places, and enjoying time with my friends. This has been my favorite pastime since childhood.

Problems: 'my one favorite hobby to travelling' mixes infinitive/gerund forms; use gerund 'travelling' after 'hobby' and parallel gerunds 'taking' and 'enjoying' for a list (verb + -ing form). 'Take some pictures in about the different places' is incorrect preposition usage; use 'taking pictures of different places' (incorrect use of prepositions). 'Enjoy with my friends' should be 'enjoying time with my friends' (adjective/adverb and verb form). Final sentence 'This is my favorite diary I had since childhood' is wrong: 'diary' is wrong noun and tense; use 'This has been my favorite pastime since childhood' to indicate continuous state (present perfect tense). Suggestions: use parallel gerunds and correct prepositions, and use present perfect for ongoing states.

× Yes, my brother have a same hobbies like me. He also want to traveling around to different places and he want to enjoy with his friends so it is the same hobby.

✓ Yes, my brother has the same hobby as me. He also wants to travel to different places and he wants to enjoy time with his friends, so it is the same hobby.

Errors: 'my brother have' should be 'my brother has' (subject-verb agreement). 'a same hobbies' is wrong: 'the same hobby' (article errors and singular/plural). 'want to traveling' mixes 'want to' + gerund; correct is 'wants to travel' (verb form and subject-verb agreement). 'enjoy with his friends' should be 'enjoy time with his friends' (preposition and noun choice). Improve by matching subject and verb forms, using correct articles, and correct verb patterns ('want to' + base verb).