Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use present simple), avoid redundancy, and use precise vocabulary for plants and activities.

Example: Yes, I enjoy gardening. I look after a small balcony garden where I grow herbs, tomatoes and flowering plants, and I usually spend an hour there in the evenings because it helps me relax. For example, I harvest fresh basil for cooking and pick flowers to decorate my home.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct countable nouns (comics or comic books) and past tense. Add one specific detail about why you liked it and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I loved reading comic books when I was a child. I had a large collection because I enjoyed the stories and the illustrations, and often I would read them before bed to relax.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement that you have continued this hobby, use present perfect for continuity (have had), and provide specific examples and a reason or result. Keep sentences natural and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I've enjoyed drawing since I was a child. I often draw family portraits, flowers and airplanes, and I usually color them and hang my favorite pieces on the wall to decorate my room.

Suggestion: Clarify the relationship and use clear tense and pronouns. Answer directly (yes/no or partly), give one specific comparison and a linking phrase to explain, and avoid unclear or fragmented sentences.

Example: Yes, my father also enjoyed painting when he was a child, so we share an interest in art. For instance, he kept a diary of his drawings, and sometimes we paint together at home, which I really enjoy.

× You have any hobbies? Yes, I have a hobby and it's gardening.

✓ Do you have any hobbies? Yes, I have a hobby: gardening.

The original sentence used incorrect question form 'You have any hobbies?' which lacks the auxiliary 'do'. Use 'Do you have any hobbies?' Also the answer is wordy; use a colon or a short appositive 'gardening' for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I have a little balcony garden and when I get free time then I spend my quality time in here.

✓ I have a small balcony garden, and when I have free time I spend quality time there.

Use 'small' instead of 'little' for natural collocation; 'get free time' should be 'have free time'. Do not use 'then' after 'when' and use 'there' not 'in here' for location. This fixes adverb/phrase order and preposition choice. Grammar Problem Type ID: 20

× I planted so many colorful vegetable fruits, flower vegetables on there and eat.

✓ I grow many colorful vegetables and fruits there, and I eat them.

'Planted' suggests past-only; use present simple 'grow' for habitual action. 'Vegetable fruits, flower vegetables' is incorrect word order and categories — separate 'vegetables and fruits'. 'On there' is wrong; use 'there'. 'Eat' needs an object 'them'. This corrects verb tense, word order and pronoun reference. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

✓ Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

Question is correct as originally written; no change needed. Included for completeness. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× Yes, when I was a child I had a hobby and it was reading comics book.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a hobby: reading comic books.

Use plural 'comic books' for a collection. 'Reading comics book' is ungrammatical; use noun phrase 'reading comic books'. A colon improves clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I had a large large amount of comics book and I I had a great collection of comics book and I enjoyed to seeing the picture on it.

✓ I had a large collection of comic books, and I enjoyed looking at the pictures in them.

Avoid repetition 'large large' and use 'collection' rather than 'amount' for countable items. Use plural 'comic books'. 'Enjoyed to seeing' is incorrect; use 'enjoyed looking at'. Use 'in them' to refer back to 'comic books'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 14

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

✓ Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

Question is grammatical and uses present perfect appropriately to ask about a hobby continuing from childhood; no change needed. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Yes, when I was a child then I had a hobby and it was drawing picture.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a hobby: drawing pictures.

Omit 'then' after 'when' (unnecessary). Use plural 'pictures' and a colon for clarity. 'Drawing picture' is ungrammatical. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I draw various types of pictures like family photos, flowers, aeroplane and so on.

✓ I drew various types of pictures, like family photos, flowers, and airplanes.

Context refers to childhood, so use past tense 'drew'. Maintain parallel noun forms and correct 'aeroplane' to 'airplanes' (plural). Add commas for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× And also I colored this picture and hang it on the wall.

✓ I also colored those pictures and hung them on the wall.

Use past tense 'colored' and 'hung' to match childhood context. If referring to multiple pictures, use plural 'pictures' and pronoun 'them'. Avoid starting sentence with 'And' in formal speech. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This question is grammatical; no change needed. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I heard that my father's had same office when he was child and he also loved to paint and record keep record on the diary.

✓ I heard that my father had the same hobby when he was a child; he also loved to paint and to keep a diary.

'Father's had same office' is unclear and incorrect — likely 'father had the same hobby'. Use 'the same hobby' and 'when he was a child'. 'Loved to paint and record keep record on the diary' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'loved to paint and to keep a diary'. Include articles 'the' and 'a' appropriately. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× I like I followed her all the time and when I listen that he.

✓ I liked that, so I followed him all the time and listened to him.

The original has mixed tenses and incorrect pronouns ('her' then 'he'). Use past tense 'liked' to match childhood context, 'followed him' (correct pronoun), and 'listened to him' for the verb 'listen' requiring 'to'. This fixes pronoun use and sentence structure. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12