Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然且直接，用主题句开头，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免重复。注意语法（时态和主谓一致）和用词（不要把兴趣说成“exact hobby”）。可以说明你常看哪类视频、频率和原因。

Example: I don't have a specific hobby, but I often relax by watching short videos on TikTok and YouTube. For example, I usually watch comedy skits and travel clips for about an hour each evening because they help me unwind after studying.

Suggestion: 回答要准确使用乐器名称并纠正语法错误。先用一句话回答问题，然后给出具体时间长度和学习经历。使用连词使句子连贯。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child I learned to play a traditional Chinese instrument called the guzheng. I studied it for nearly ten years and performed in school concerts several times, which helped me build confidence.

Suggestion: 避免重复信息，合并句子使表达更简洁自然。纠正乐器拼写并注意时态（present perfect）。可以补充具体影响或有趣的经历。

Example: Yes, I have. I have been playing the guzheng since primary school for nearly twelve years, and it has become an important part of my life because it relaxes me and connects me with my cultural roots.

Suggestion: 回答清晰但需注意语法一致性（主谓一致）和连词使用，使句子更自然流畅。可以用对比词丰富内容并简要说明你与他们的不同。

Example: Not really. Each family member enjoys different activities: my father goes fishing at the weekends, my mother watches interesting TV shows in the evenings, and my younger brother plays computer games. I prefer listening to music and practicing the guzheng, so our hobbies don't overlap much.

× I do not have any exact hobby but I just like lying on my bed and watching some interesting videos on TikTok or YouTube that makes me feel relaxed.

✓ I do not have any exact hobby, but I just like lying on my bed and watching some interesting videos on TikTok or YouTube that make me feel relaxed.

错误类型：代词/指代与主谓一致问题（归入错用代词/主谓一致）。句中关系代词that指代复数名词videos，但谓语动词用单数形式makes，造成主谓不一致。改为make与复数主语videos一致。另外添加逗号使句子更自然。建议：判断先行词是单数还是复数，确保动词形式与之保持一致。

× When I was a child, I liked playing some classic Chinese instruments like Gujarat. I have been study Guzheng for nearly ten years.

✓ When I was a child, I liked playing some classic Chinese instruments like the Guzheng. I have been studying the Guzheng for nearly ten years.

错误类型：动词形式与时态错误/动词的现在分词和冠词使用。第一句Gujarat应为Guzheng且作为可数乐器前需加定冠词the（谈某类乐器时常用the）。第二句中现在完成进行时应使用have been + 现在分词(studying)，原句用错了原形动词study。建议：现在完成进行时结构为 have/has been + V-ing；注意专有名词Guzheng拼写一致。

× Yes, I started to play a traditional Chinese instruments called Gujarat for nearly 12 years. I started to learn from primary school. Till now it has been a part of my life.

✓ Yes, I started to play a traditional Chinese instrument called the Guzheng nearly 12 years ago. I started to learn in primary school. Until now it has been a part of my life.

错误类型：时态与数的使用错误。第一句：instrument应为单数，且表达开始的具体时间用started ... ago更自然；called后接乐器名Guzheng并修正拼写。第二句中介词搭配应为 learn in primary school（在小学学习），不应用from。第三句将Till now改为Until now更正式但均可，整体时态保持与事实相符。建议：表过去具体起点常用...ago，注意可数名词单复数和介词搭配。

× Absolutely not. Each member of my family has their own hobbies. For example, my father likes fishing on the weekend and my mom like watching some interesting TV shows and my younger brother like playing computer games.

✓ Absolutely not. Each member of my family has his or her own hobbies. For example, my father likes fishing on the weekend, my mom likes watching some interesting TV shows, and my younger brother likes playing computer games.

错误类型：代词使用与主谓一致问题。each member为单数，应使用单数代词 his or her（或用singular they在口语可接受，但正式书面应改为his or her）。另外三个并列分句中的动词like应与单数主语匹配，改为likes；并用逗号和and连接使句子更清晰。建议：当主语为each、every等单数时，动词与代词应使用单数形式；注意句子并列时保持一致的动词形式。