Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 질문에 직접적으로 답하고 개인적 이유를 제시한 것은 좋습니다. 하지만 발음·단어 선택의 반복(예: "gives me, gives always gave me"), 불필요한 반복적 채움말(umm, uh)이 많아 유창성이 떨어집니다. 문장은 구조가 불명확하고 의미 전달이 다소 혼란스럽습니다. 더 나은 문장 구조(주제문 + 구체적 이유 1~2개 + 연결어)를 사용하고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 또한 'imaginary, imaginary thinking' 대신 더 정확한 표현(예: imagination, critical thinking)을 사용하세요.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, although I don't read very often. I read mainly to gain information and to stimulate my imagination. Also, reading helps me improve my critical thinking, which is useful for my studies.

Suggestion: 질문에 명확히 답했고 이유도 제시했지만 문법 오류(예: "when I read reading", "it is uncomfortable to me be")와 시제 혼동("felt" 대신 "feel")이 있어 정확도가 떨어집니다. 문장을 더 간결하게 만들고, 연결어와 이유 설명을 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적 사례로 뒷받침하세요. 발음과 불필요한 채움말을 줄이면 유창성이 향상됩니다.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because screens make my eyes feel tired. For example, after reading on a phone or tablet for an hour I usually get a headache, so physical books are more comfortable for me.

Suggestion: 의도는 분명하지만 표현과 문법이 많이 어색합니다(예: "when in dusseld in unusual time" 의 의미 불명확, "I'm not read carefully" 문법 오류). 질문에 대해 대비 상황(시험)과 비대비 상황(일상 스캔)을 명확히 설명하되, 구체적 예시와 연결어를 사용하세요. 문장 구조: 주제문 → 이유/예시 → 대조 표현(However, otherwise)을 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm preparing for exams at university because every detail matters for questions. Otherwise, in everyday situations like browsing news or emails, I usually just scan the text to get the main idea.

Suggestion: 의견은 제시했으나 표현이 어색하고 반복("is is"), 문장 구조 불완전("preferred like me which in a hurry person")입니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 이유(예: 시간이 부족할 때, 목적에 따라)를 제시하고, 연결어(However, because)를 사용해 대조를 보여주세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 간결하게 말하세요.

Example: I prefer scanning because I'm often in a hurry and just need the main points quickly. However, for important documents or study materials I do detailed reading to fully understand the content.

× Actually, I like reading, but not often, umm, because reading gives me, gives always gave me, uh, information and, uh, imaginary, imaginary thinking, and they can scale up my critical reading.

✓ Actually, I like reading, but not often, because reading gives me information and has always given me imaginative thinking, and it can improve my critical reading.

The student mixed present and past forms ('gives' and 'gave') which is inconsistent. Use present perfect 'has always given' to indicate a continuing effect from past to present. 'Imaginary thinking' is unnatural; 'imaginative thinking' or 'imagination' is correct. 'They' incorrectly refers to 'reading' (singular), so use 'it' and 'improve' instead of 'scale up'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, choose correct noun/adjective forms, and ensure pronoun agreement.

× I prefer to read on paper because when I read reading a book on screen, I felt like my eyes are so tired and uh, it is uncomfortable to me be.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read a book on a screen, I feel like my eyes get very tired and it is uncomfortable for me.

Problems: incorrect gerund phrase ('read reading')—use only one verb form; preposition 'on screen' needs article 'a screen' in this context; tense was inconsistent ('felt' past vs present preference) so use present 'feel'; 'uncomfortable to me be' is incorrect word order—use 'uncomfortable for me'. Suggestion: avoid duplicate verbs, keep tense consistent, use correct prepositions and word order.

× Actually, uh, in my opinion, umm, when I'm in a test like in university, I read carefully the paragraphs, but when in dusseld in unusual time, umm, I'm not read carefully, only scanning.

✓ Actually, in my opinion, when I'm taking a test at university, I read the paragraphs carefully, but at other times I don't read carefully and only scan.

Issues: verb placement and tense ('read carefully the paragraphs' should be 'read the paragraphs carefully'); 'when in dusseld in unusual time' is unclear—interpreted as 'at other times' or 'in unusual times'; 'I'm not read' is ungrammatical—use 'I don't read' or 'I don't read carefully'. Suggestion: place adverbs (carefully) after the object, use correct auxiliary 'do' for negative present, and use clear temporal phrases.

× Umm, actually I think that I prefer scanning. Uh, of course both scanning and detailed reading are reasonable for me, but I think the scanning is is preferred like me which in a hurry person.

✓ Actually, I prefer scanning. Of course both scanning and detailed reading are useful for me, but scanning is better when I am in a hurry.

Problems: redundant 'is is', awkward phrasing 'preferred like me which in a hurry person'. Use concise structure: 'scanning is better when I am in a hurry.' Replace 'reasonable' with 'useful' for natural collocation. Suggestion: eliminate repetition, simplify clauses, and use natural expressions for reasons.