Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구성과 발음 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 불명확합니다. 먼저 질문에 직접 답하는 문장(예: 'No, I don't enjoy reading.')을 간단히 말한 뒤 이유를 하나나 두 개로 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(because, so, however)를 사용해 문장의 흐름을 자연스럽게 하고, 단어 선택(예: cladding → reading, prepare → prefer)을 정확히 하세요. 또한 문장은 최대 3~4개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Example: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I prefer watching movies because they are more engaging and take less time to finish. For example, I can understand the plot quickly without spending hours on a book.

Suggestion: 대답이 불완전하고 문장이 이어지지 않아 의미가 불명확합니다. 먼저 선호를 분명히 밝힌 뒤 이유를 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 설명하세요. 예를 들어 'I prefer reading on paper because...' 형태로 시작하고, 경험이나 이유(눈의 피로, 집중도)를 덧붙이세요. 문장 연결을 위해 'because' 또는 'so'를 사용하세요.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more natural and comfortable for my eyes. When I read on a screen for a long time, my eyes get tired and I lose concentration.

Suggestion: 응답은 핵심을 포함하고 있지만 문장 구조와 어휘 사용이 어색합니다. 질문에 대해 대조 구조를 사용해 'When I don't need to read carefully...'와 'When I do need to read carefully...'로 명확히 구분하여 말하세요. 구체적인 예시(잡지, 연구 논문)를 제시하고 연결어(while, but, however)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Example: I don't need to read carefully when I'm reading something for fun or to kill time, like a magazine or a blog. However, I need to read carefully when I'm studying or reading research papers because I must understand the details and facts accurately.

Suggestion: 의도를 알 수 있으나 문법과 어휘가 부정확합니다. 'I prefer scanning because I have limited concentration'처럼 명확한 주제문을 말한 뒤 이유를 덧붙이세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 간결하게 설명하고 가능한 경우 예시(예: skimming headlines, reading summaries)를 포함하세요.

Example: I prefer scanning texts because I have limited concentration and often need to find information quickly. For example, I usually skim headlines and summaries to get the main idea rather than reading every detail.

× No, I don't like cladding. I prepare watching movie because reading is enjoyable but it take much longer time to finish.

✓ No, I don't like reading. I prefer watching movies because reading is enjoyable but it takes much longer to finish.

The student used the wrong word 'cladding' instead of 'reading' and 'prepare watching movie' is ungrammatical. 'Prefer' should be followed by a gerund or noun phrase: 'prefer watching movies'. Subject-verb agreement error: 'it take' -> 'it takes'. Use plural 'movies' for general preference. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund and ensure verbs agree with their subjects.

× I prefer. Because when I was. A thread screen. It feels not natural level.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because when I read on a screen it does not feel natural.

Fragmented sentences and unclear phrase 'A thread screen' cause meaning issues. Combine into a full sentence: 'I prefer reading on paper because when I read on a screen it does not feel natural.' Use 'does not' for negative with singular subject 'it' and correct verb form 'read on a screen'.

× When I leave something for waste time, I have to. I don't have to read carefully, but if I read some. Paper like. Research I have to read carefully.

✓ When I read something to pass the time, I do not have to read carefully, but if I read a paper, like research, I have to read carefully.

Several fragments and awkward phrasing: 'leave something for waste time' should be 'read something to pass the time'. 'I have to. I don't have to' fragments must be combined. Use 'do not' for negative and article + noun 'a paper' or 'a research paper'. Clarify 'research' as 'research paper'. Maintain consistent verb forms.

× I prepare scanning because I don't have a lot of. Focus ability. So I just read skipping.

✓ I prefer scanning because I don't have a lot of focus, so I just read by skimming.

Use 'prefer' not 'prepare'. 'Scanning' is fine but 'read skipping' is unnatural; use 'skim' or 'skim through' and noun 'focus' rather than 'focus ability'. Combine into one sentence: 'I prefer scanning because I don't have a lot of focus, so I just skim.' Use gerund/noun forms correctly.