Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答有回应，但表达不够地道且有语法和用词错误。建议： 1) 开头直接给出主题句，如 I enjoy reading. 2) 用地道短语替换直译表达，例如 ‘broaden my horizons’ 替代 ‘improve our horizon of the world’，‘gain knowledge’ 替代 ‘improve our sight of the knowledge’。3) 用一两个具体例子或场景支持观点，句子不要超过五句。4) 注意时态和单复数（a relaxed time → a relaxing activity）。

Example: I enjoy reading because it helps me broaden my horizons and gain new knowledge. For example, reading history books gives me a better understanding of different cultures. It's also a relaxing activity I do before bed to unwind.

Suggestion: 回答明确但语言不流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议： 1) 直接陈述偏好，如 I prefer paper books. 2) 用两个简洁原因支持，每个原因用连接词（because, and, moreover）。3) 改正常见错误（reading on papers → reading on paper；make us more fluently reading → help me read more fluently）。4) 可补充具体例子（e.g. annotating, flipping pages）。

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier on my eyes and I can physically flip pages and make notes. For example, when I study, I underline important points in a paperback book, which helps me remember information better.

Suggestion: 内容能传达大意但组织混乱且语法错误明显。建议： 1) 用明确主题句回答（I read carefully when...）。2) 用连接词（for example, while, whereas）区分需要精读和略读的情况。3) 用具体细节支持（e.g. plot twists, technical instructions）。4) 注意语法（we reading → we are reading / when we read；became → become; remove重复词）。

Example: I read carefully when I encounter important parts, such as plot twists or character development, because they affect my understanding of the story. However, I skim descriptions of scenery or routine actions when they are not essential to the plot.

Suggestion: 回答意图清楚但用词错误（skipping/skiing混淆）且句子结构不自然。建议： 1) 明确说出偏好（I prefer skimming/scanning）。2) 用连接词解释原因（because ... and ...）。3) 提供后续策略（then I go back to detailed reading when needed）。4) 纠正动词用法（turn back to detailed reading → go back and read in detail）。

Example: I prefer skimming because it saves time and helps me find the main ideas quickly. If I notice an important section, I then go back and read it in detail to fully understand it.

× Yes, I like reading because I think reading can improve our horizon of the world and improve our sight of the knowledge.

✓ Yes, I like reading because I think reading can broaden our view of the world and improve our knowledge.

句子中使用了不恰当的名词/形容短语：’horizon of the world’ 和 ’sight of the knowledge’ 在英语中不自然。应使用常见搭配：’broaden our view of the world’（扩展我们的世界观）和 ’improve our knowledge’（提高我们的知识）。建议多记忆常用搭配，注意名词搭配的自然性。

× Sometimes reading a book is a relaxed time.

✓ Sometimes reading a book is a relaxing time.

原句用形容词 ’relaxed’ 描述时间不合适。’relaxed’ 通常用来描述人的状态；表示使人放松的事物或时间应使用现在分词作形容词 ’relaxing’。建议区分形容词含义，practice 用现在分词描述能带来感受的事物。

× I prefer reading on paper because reading on screen is bad for our eyes and reading on papers we can touch the page.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because reading on a screen is bad for our eyes, and with paper books we can touch the pages.

错误点：’on paper’ 与 ’reading on papers’ 用法不一致；’on a screen’ 更自然，且复数 ’papers’ 和单数搭配不当；‘touch the page’ 应该用复数或更自然表达 ’touch the pages’ 或 ’with paper books we can touch the pages’。建议注意可数名词单复数和固定介词短语（read on a screen, read on paper, paper books）。

× Touch the paper can make us more fluently reading.

✓ Touching the paper can make our reading more fluent.

错误在于动词形式与副词位置：句首使用不定式/祈使式 ’Touch the paper’ 不合语境，且副词 ’fluently’ 用错位置和词性。应使用动名词 ’Touching’ 引出动作，并用形容词 ’fluent’ 修饰名词 ’reading’。建议学习动名词结构和副词/形容词的正确搭配位置。

× When we reading some interesting or important parts we should keep focused like the the characters, the talking or doing anything but some description of environment became read not very carefully.

✓ When we read some interesting or important parts we should stay focused on things like the characters, their dialogue or actions, but descriptions of the environment can be read less carefully.

错误包括现在时态用法（应为 ’read’ 而非 ’reading’）和词汇搭配：’keep focused’ 可改为 ’stay focused on’；重复的定冠词 ’the the’；’the talking or doing anything’ 不自然，应分别用 ’their dialogue or actions’；’became read not very carefully’ 时态和表达错误，应为 ’can be read less carefully’。建议注意一般现在时主语后直接用动词原形，并用自然搭配表达对比关系。

× I prefer skiing because I think it can save more time and when I realize that I have raised some important parts I can turn back to detail reading it.

✓ I prefer skimming because I think it can save time, and when I realize that I have found some important parts I can turn back to read them in detail.

原句多处错误：学生想表达 ’skimming’（略读/浏览），但写成 ’skiing’（滑雪）是词汇错误（此项属于词汇但也影响动名词形式）；’save more time’ 可简化为 ’save time’；’realize that I have raised some important parts’ 不自然，应为 ’realize I have found some important parts’；’turn back to detail reading it’ 结构错，应为 ’turn back to read them in detail’，并注意代词复数一致。建议区分相似单词（skimming vs skiing），掌握动词不定式/动名词用法及代词一致。