Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 질문에 대한 직접적인 주제문은 있으나 이어지는 이유나 예시가 부족하며 연결어 사용이 없습니다. ‘Riddle’ 같은 불필요한 단어와 시제·관사 오류(books, article -> articles) 가 보입니다. 답변 길이는 적절하지만 내용을 명확하게 하고 자연스러운 표현으로 수정해야 합니다. 구체적으로는 간단한 이유와 한두 개의 예시를 연결어(so, because, for example)를 사용해 덧붙이세요.

Example: No, I don't really enjoy reading books or articles because I find videos more engaging. For example, educational videos often explain concepts with visuals, so I understand them faster.

Suggestion: 의미는 전달되지만 문법(‘prefer read’ → ‘prefer to read’ 또는 ‘prefer reading’), 전치사와 소유격 사용(‘to my eyes health’ → ‘for my eye health’)에 오류가 있습니다. 또한 한 문장에 연결어를 넣어 이유를 더 명확히 하고, 구체적인 예시(예: less glare, easier to concentrate)를 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Example: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because it feels more comfortable for my eye health. For example, paper causes less glare and helps me concentrate better when studying.

Suggestion: 문장이 장황하고 어색한 표현(‘start the my major’)과 관사 오류가 있습니다. 질문에는 두 상황을 분명히 나눠서 답해야 합니다. 연결어(for example, whereas, because)를 사용해 대비를 명확히 하고 구체적인 상황 설명(어떤 이유로, 어떤 종류의 자료인지)을 추가하세요.

Example: I need to read carefully when studying subjects for my major because academic textbooks contain important details and concepts. Whereas, I don't read carefully when I'm looking at phone webtoons, since they are mainly for entertainment.

Suggestion: 의미는 명확하지만 문법(‘when I scanning’ → ‘when I scan’), 어순, 반복 표현을 다듬을 필요가 있습니다. 한두 문장으로 간결하게 이유를 말하고, 구체적인 결과나 예시(예: better retention, deeper understanding)를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 설득력 있어집니다.

Example: I prefer detailed reading to scanning because when I scan a text I rarely remember the information. Detailed reading helps me understand ideas more deeply and retain them longer.

× I should say no, I don't like reading books, article or other texts Riddle I prefer watch the video.

✓ I should say no. I don't like reading books, articles, or other texts; rather, I prefer to watch videos.

The errors: 'article' should be plural 'articles' (quantifier/number). 'Riddle' is likely a wrong word; use 'rather'. 'Prefer watch' needs 'to' + base verb. 'the video' should be plural or general 'videos'. Suggestions: make nouns agree in number, use 'rather' for contrast, use the infinitive 'prefer to watch', and use commas or semicolons to separate clauses.

× I prefer read on paper rather than screen because I think it is more comfortable to my eyes health.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I think it is more comfortable for my eye health.

Errors: missing 'to' after 'prefer' requires infinitive. 'screen' needs an article 'a screen'. 'to my eyes health' is incorrect preposition and noun form: use 'for my eye health' or 'for my eyes' health' but 'eye health' is preferred. Suggestions: use 'prefer to + verb', include articles before singular countable nouns, and use 'for' with 'health'.

× I think I need to read carefully when I start the my major through the paper books and I think I don't need to read carefully when I read just phone webtoon.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I start my major using paper books, and I don't need to read carefully when I just read webtoons on my phone.

Errors: 'the my major' has an extra definite article—use 'my major'. 'through the paper books' is awkward; use 'using paper books' or 'with paper books'. 'read just phone webtoon' needs plural 'webtoons' and preposition 'on my phone'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before possessives, choose correct prepositions, and use plural for countable nouns when appropriate.

× I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because when I scanning the text I cannot remember anything after reading the books.

✓ I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because when I scan the text I cannot remember anything after reading books.

Errors: 'when I scanning' should be 'when I scan' (use base verb for simple present with subject 'I'). 'reading the books' can be general 'reading books' unless referring to specific books. Suggestions: use simple present 'scan' for habitual actions and omit unnecessary definite articles for general statements.