Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I enjoy reading.”), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on concrete details (types of books, how often you read, benefits) and keep answers to no more than four sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read almost every day, mostly contemporary novels and non-fiction about history. Because they give me new ideas and help me relax, I often share interesting facts with my younger relatives, which encourages them to read more too.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give clear reasons using linking words (e.g. “because”, “however”). Mention specific advantages and disadvantages and avoid vague vocabulary. Use one or two supporting sentences with clear examples (e.g. comfort, eye strain, annotation).

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and I can annotate easily. For example, when I read a paperback I can make notes in the margins and I don’t get eye strain like I sometimes do after long periods of screen reading.

Suggestion: Clarify the distinction between careful and quick reading. Begin with a topic sentence (e.g. “I read carefully when… and skim when…”), then give specific contexts and reasons using linking words. Be concrete about examples (work emails, instructions vs. news headlines or messages).

Example: I read carefully when the information matters, such as work emails, instructions or academic texts, because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. By contrast, I skim news headlines or social media posts when I only want the main idea and don’t need every detail.

Suggestion: The question asks you to choose between scanning and detailed reading—answer directly and justify. Use linking phrases (e.g. “I prefer… because… For example…”). Give a clear context when each method is useful and avoid unclear or irrelevant words.

Example: I prefer detailed reading for study or work because I need to understand facts and follow instructions accurately. However, I use scanning when I’m searching for a specific piece of information, like a date or name, because it saves time.

× Yes, I do, I really love to say that I really love reading too much every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I really love reading; I read a lot every day.

The original sentence is run-on and repetitive. It uses awkward phrasing 'love to say that I really love' and 'reading too much every day.' Correct by splitting into two sentences, removing repetition, and using 'read a lot every day' which is natural and grammatically correct.

× Every new day we come back to the new experience for the life.

✓ Every day we gain new experiences in life.

Word order and choice are incorrect ('come back to the new experience for the life'). Replace with natural collocation 'gain new experiences in life' and simplify 'every new day' to 'every day.'

× And then everything is one of the kind of and important of my whole life.

✓ Reading is one of the important parts of my life.

The sentence is ungrammatical and vague ('one of the kind of and important of my whole life'). Clarify the subject as 'Reading' and use the idiomatic phrase 'one of the important parts of my life.'

× Because when we reading a lot of the book, we can spend a lot of the education to another young girl and young generation in community.

✓ Because when we read a lot of books, we can pass on knowledge to young people in the community.

Incorrect verb form 'reading' after 'when we' requires base form 'read' (present simple). Also correct count nouns and prepositions: 'a lot of the book' -> 'a lot of books'; 'spend a lot of the education to' -> 'pass on knowledge to.' Use 'young people' rather than 'another young girl and young generation.'

× I will say that I prefer to read on paper because sometime I feeling to be some of the emotional person to be reading on the paper, especially in books because we can spend a lot of many time with the something that we can improve by not just be a cream because I think when we read something on the screen, we can something on the eye and everything else.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because sometimes I feel more emotional when reading physical books. I can spend time with a book and focus better; reading on a screen can strain the eyes.

Many issues: tense and verb forms ('sometime'->'sometimes'; 'I feeling'->'I feel'); awkward phrases ('be some of the emotional person to be reading on the paper'); redundancy and wrong vocabulary ('not just be a cream'). Simplify into clear sentences, use correct verbs and collocations, and replace unclear parts with intended meaning about focus and eye strain.

× I will say that we need in the morning we something to need a reading in the morning because in the morning the bread is clearly step by step.

✓ I would say we should read in the morning because morning is a clear and peaceful time to concentrate.

This sentence has severe structure and word choice problems ('we need in the morning we something to need a reading'; 'the bread is clearly step by step'). Interpret intended meaning and rewrite: use conditional/modal 'would say' and 'should read' and replace 'bread' with 'morning' qualities like 'clear and peaceful.'

× No knew anything about the brand because every everything is clearly and then we can read step by step by one or two paper in the morning where it's pressed and relaxing to be digging.

✓ You don't need to know anything about the topic beforehand because things are clearer in the morning, and you can read one or two pages calmly when you feel relaxed.

Multiple errors: wrong verb forms ('knew'), wrong nouns ('brand' instead of 'topic'), awkward phrasing ('one or two paper', 'pressed and relaxing to be digging'). Rewrite into a coherent sentence conveying that mornings are good for calm reading of a page or two.

× Yes, I do, because it's very absolute important to be surprised or everything you make to dinner for life of the the tell something clearly step by step to be understanding the meaning of divination in the the something the urity in it's very important.

✓ Yes, because detailed reading is very important: it helps you understand things clearly, step by step.

The original is largely unintelligible with many incorrect words ('absolute important', 'surprised', 'make to dinner for life', 'divination', 'urity'). Focus on the plausible intended meaning about detailed reading being important for clear understanding and provide a concise, grammatical sentence.