Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ừ/ồ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do ngắn), sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ vựng chính xác (prefer, activities, stay in one place) và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu. Ví dụ: Nói rõ bạn không thích đọc, nêu nguyên nhân cụ thể (ví dụ: thích hoạt động ngoài trời hơn) và đưa thêm ví dụ ngắn.

Example: No, I don't really enjoy reading. I prefer outdoor activities like walking or cycling because I find them more energizing. For example, I often go for a long walk in the park on weekends instead of reading at home.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp 1-2 lý do rõ ràng, tránh ngắt quãng và filler. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (prefer, convenient, eye strain, sleepiness). Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and I can adjust the font size. Also, when I read printed pages I often feel sleepy, so screens help me stay alert.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Nói ngắn gọn: nêu khi nào đọc kỹ và khi nào đọc lướt, dùng liên từ (when, because, so) để liên kết ý. Tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp logic (mục đích → ví dụ).

Example: I need to read carefully when the information is important, for example, when studying for an exam or following instructions. For casual browsing or news headlines I usually skim because I only need the main idea.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích nguyên nhân và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (I prefer scanning, but in some cases I read in detail).

Example: I prefer scanning because I usually only need the main idea quickly. However, if the topic is important or complex, such as a work report or instructions, I read it in detail to avoid mistakes.

× I'm not a person who like reading because I refer some actives, some some more active, uh, some more active activities such as umm, like walking or doing something.

✓ I'm not a person who likes reading because I prefer some activities, more active activities such as walking or doing something.

Original uses plural/verb mismatch: 'person who like' should be 'person who likes' (subject 'who' refers to singular 'person'). 'Refer' is incorrect verb; should be 'prefer'. 'Actives' is incorrect as a noun; use 'activities'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with singular subject and use correct vocabulary: 'prefer' and 'activities'.

× I refer it on a screen because I think like it's more, umm, convenient when you, uh, read on the screen, uh, beside that, uh, when I read other paper, I feel sleepy, so I, uh, I refer read on the screen.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I think it's more convenient when you read on the screen. Besides that, when I read paper I feel sleepy, so I prefer to read on the screen.

'Refer' is incorrect; use present simple 'prefer' for habitual preferences. 'I prefer it on a screen' better as 'prefer reading on a screen'. 'Other paper' should be 'paper' or 'printed paper'. Use 'Besides that' instead of 'beside that'. Maintain present simple for habits. Also use infinitive 'prefer to read' when appropriate.

× So I think when I need to read carefully, when I I have to watch the that information I have to and I am like I need to remember and get information to to do something really important such as do the exam or do the test.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I have to pay attention to information that I must remember or use to do something important, such as take an exam or a test.

Sentence has redundancy and structure problems. 'Watch the that information' is incorrect; use 'pay attention to information'. Remove repeated fillers and duplicated words. Use 'take an exam' rather than 'do the exam'. Keep present simple for general statements.

× I'm not like, uh, just stay at the same time, the same place.

✓ I don't like just staying in the same place all the time.

After 'like' use verb with -ing: 'like staying'. Original 'I'm not like' is incorrect structure. Use negative form 'I don't like' and 'all the time' to express continuous duration.

× I prefer scanning because I I don't often pay too much attention like I just scanning to watch the main the the main idea and then I I got it just getting main idea, but some special case. I I really like it. I will read the detail you tell me.

✓ I prefer scanning because I don't often pay too much attention; I just scan to find the main idea and then I get it. But in some special cases, I really like it and I will read the details you ask me to.

Use simple present for habits: 'I just scan' not 'I just scanning'. 'I got it' should be 'I get it' for general statement. 'Some special case' needs plural 'cases'. 'Read the detail' should be 'read the details' or 'read the details you ask me to'. Maintain consistent tense and correct verb forms.