Part 1
Examiner
Do you like reading?
Candidate
Yes, I really love Britain, especially in the elite book or romantic book. I love to read a love story with a many characters, make me happy and relax when I have a free time.
Examiner
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidate
I usually like read on paper because when I read in paper I can you a natural to read but if you reading on the screen you it's inconvenient.
Examiner
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidate
When you have a important practice, you need to read carefully the requires or the law when you working with a important stock and is have you purchased.
Examiner
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidate
I have referred to skinning because I'm lazy to rest on the book or own the page. I'm lazy but just kidding. I can't understand many detail but sometimes I need to.
Do you like reading?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: Be clear and natural: state directly whether you like reading and give one or two specific, relevant reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. ‘romance novels’ not ‘romantic book’) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and avoid irrelevant or confusing words like ‘Britain’ unless you mean British books. Link idea with a short connector (because/so).
Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially romance novels. I like stories with many interesting characters because they make me feel happy and relaxed in my free time. For example, I often read books about relationships and everyday life to unwind.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason with correct grammar and linking words. Say which you prefer and one or two specific reasons (e.g. easier on the eyes, can make notes). Avoid unclear phrases and correct tense/word order. Limit to 2–4 sentences.
Example: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I can make notes in the margins. When I read on a screen for a long time, I find it uncomfortable and more tiring.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: Be specific and use simple, correct sentences. Directly answer with clear situations: when careful reading is necessary (legal documents, contracts, work instructions) and when skimming is okay (novels, casual articles). Use linking words (for example, however) and correct grammar (articles, plural/singular).
Example: You must read carefully when dealing with legal documents, contracts, or important work instructions because small details can have serious consequences. However, you can read less carefully when browsing a novel or a magazine for fun.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Be honest but clear: name your usual approach and explain why, then mention exceptions. Use correct vocabulary: 'skimming' (not 'skinning'), and avoid filler phrases like 'I'm lazy'—explain briefly instead. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words (but, however, sometimes).
Example: I usually prefer skimming because I want to find the main ideas quickly, especially when I have little time. However, I do detailed reading when I need to understand complex information or study for exams.
× Yes, I really love Britain, especially in the elite book or romantic book.
✓ Yes, I really love reading books, especially classic or romantic novels.
The student used 'Britain' incorrectly and awkward adjective phrases 'elite book' and 'romantic book'. This is an issue with word choice and adjective use. Use 'reading books' to answer 'Do you like reading?' and use correct adjective-noun collocations: 'classic' or 'romantic novels'. Also 'Britain' is unrelated to the question and likely a mistake.
× I love to read a love story with a many characters, make me happy and relax when I have a free time.
✓ I love to read love stories with many characters; they make me happy and relaxed when I have free time.
Errors: 'a many characters' mixes singular article with plural noun and 'a free time' uses wrong article. Also sentence lacks correct subject-verb agreement and tense: 'make me happy and relax' should be 'they make me happy and relaxed'. Use plural 'love stories' and no article before 'many characters', and 'free time' without 'a'.
× I usually like read on paper because when I read in paper I can you a natural to read but if you reading on the screen you it's inconvenient.
✓ I usually like to read on paper because when I read on paper it feels more natural, but reading on a screen is inconvenient.
Multiple errors: missing 'to' after 'like' (verb + infinitive), incorrect preposition 'in paper' should be 'on paper', awkward phrasing 'I can you a natural to read' and incorrect pronoun/auxiliary 'you it's'. This involves incorrect verb forms and present participle misuse. Use 'like to read', 'feels more natural', and 'reading on a screen' for clarity.
× When you have a important practice, you need to read carefully the requires or the law when you working with a important stock and is have you purchased.
✓ When you have an important task, you need to read the requirements or the law carefully when you are working with important stock you have purchased.
Problems: wrong article 'a important' (should be 'an important'), wrong noun 'practice' unclear—'task' fits better, 'the requires' should be 'the requirements', missing auxiliary 'are' in 'you working', and awkward word order 'is have you purchased'. These are preposition/article and sentence structure errors. Fix articles, use 'are working', and place 'you have purchased' after the noun it modifies.
× I have referred to skinning because I'm lazy to rest on the book or own the page.
✓ I prefer skimming because I'm lazy to read every page closely.
'Referred to skinning' is incorrect vocabulary and form. The student likely meant 'prefer skimming'. 'Skimming' is the correct -ing form for this reading technique. Also 'rest on the book or own the page' is incorrect; replace with 'read every page closely'.
× I'm lazy but just kidding. I can't understand many detail but sometimes I need to.
✓ I'm lazy, but just kidding. I can't understand many details, but sometimes I need to.
'Many detail' should be 'many details' (plural). This is an adjective/quantifier agreement issue. Maintain plural noun after 'many' and add punctuation for clarity.