Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子意思清楚，但有些重复（兩次提到“when I feel anxious”）且句型比較單一。可以合併重複信息，使用更自然的連接詞與更豐富的詞彙，並保持回答在3到4句之內以顯得更加流暢自然。建議練習用一個主句開頭，然後用一到兩個支持細節（例如原因和例子）。

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax when I'm anxious. For example, I often read on my Kindle during my commute, which makes the journey feel calmer and more enjoyable.

Suggestion: 回答結構良好，有對比也有原因，但句子較長且信息密集。可以把長句拆成兩句，用連接詞如“however”或“but”來強化對比，同時加入一個具體例子來支持“immersive”的說法。

Example: I generally prefer reading paper books because they feel more immersive at home or in a café. However, I use screens when researching or looking up articles since they’re more convenient for finding information quickly.

Suggestion: 語法和用詞上有錯誤（如“Just as what I said”、“words by words”），且最後一句不完整。建議使用更準確的短語（例如“word by word”）並完成對比句，保持語句完整。可先總結回答要點，再用一到兩個具體例子說明。

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm researching or checking important information online, so I read almost word by word to avoid misunderstandings. By contrast, when I read for pleasure, such as a self-help book, I usually read more casually and focus on the main ideas.

Suggestion: 內容明確且個人化，但有幾處語法與用詞錯誤（如“Detailed rating”應為“detailed reading”、“reading depth”應更自然）。建議改用正確短語並用連接詞使邏輯更順暢，同時給出一個具體情境以增加說服力。

Example: I prefer scanning because I find it difficult to concentrate for long periods. For instance, I skim articles to get the main points quickly and only switch to detailed reading when I need specific facts or quotes.

× Reading can always bring pleasure and tranquility to me when I feel anxious.

✓ Reading can always bring me pleasure and tranquility when I feel anxious.

句子中“bring pleasure and tranquility to me”虽然语法可接受，但把间接宾语放在动词后面显得不自然。将“me”置于动词后直接作为宾语并把“pleasure and tranquility”放在后面，更符合英语常用语序。建议将间接宾语提前，或使用更地道的表达。

× I even bought a Kindle just for reading on the subway.

✓ I even bought a Kindle just to read on the subway.

“just for reading”虽然能被理解，但在表达目的时更常用不定式“just to read”。使用不定式可以更清晰地表达购买Kindle的目的。

× For the most part, I definitely prefer reading on paper at home or in a cafe because physical books feel more immersive, while I have to read on the screen when I need to look up articles or search for important information online.

✓ For the most part, I definitely prefer reading on paper at home or in a cafe because physical books feel more immersive, while I have to read on a screen when I need to look up articles or search for important information online.

短语中应使用不定冠词“a screen”而不是“the screen”，因为此处指的是任何屏幕而非特定的屏幕。使用不定冠词更准确。

× Just as what I said, when I look up articles or find some important information online, I have to check it sentence by sentence, words by words in case of making misunderstanding.

✓ As I said, when I look up articles or find important information online, I have to check them sentence by sentence, word by word to avoid misunderstandings.

多处问题：1) “Just as what I said”不地道，应改为“As I said”。2) “some important information”可简化为“important information”。3) “check it”中代词应与前面的复数“articles or...information”一致，改为“check them”。4) “words by words”应为“word by word”单数形式成固定搭配。5) “in case of making misunderstanding”用法错误，地道表达为“to avoid misunderstandings”。总体需调整短语和介词搭配，保持数的一致性。

× But when I read just for pleasure, like a self help book.

✓ But when I read just for pleasure, for example a self-help book, I don't read so carefully.

原句是一个不完整的从句，缺少主句和谓语，造成句子残缺。需要补全主句（例如说明不仔细阅读的情况）。同时“self help”应加连字符为“self-help”。建议把完整信息放在同一句或用两个句子连贯表达。

× Detailed rating is great, but I have ADHD and I find it hard to maintain sustained attention for long periods.

✓ Detailed reading is great, but I have ADHD and I find it hard to maintain sustained attention for long periods.

原句将“reading”误写为“rating”，造成意思错误。该错误属于词形使用错误，需改为“reading”以保持句意和时态一致。

× Consequently, I enjoy reading extensively and only reading depth when I need detailed information.

✓ Consequently, I enjoy reading extensively and only reading in depth when I need detailed information.

短语“reading depth”不正确，正确表达为“reading in depth”或“reading deeply”。这里应使用介词短语“in depth”来修饰“reading”。