Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 总体回答自然且内容充实，但存在语法和表达重复的问题，句子偶有断裂（例如 “Also. It also”），有些词语选择不够精准（“a inner person” 应为 “an introverted person”）。建议：1) 避免重复表达，合并相近意思；2) 修正冠词和拼写错误；3) 控制句数不超过5句并使用连词使衔接更顺畅。可练习将两三个短句合并为一句更完整的陈述。

Example: Yes, I do. I have loved reading since I was a child because it relaxes me and broadens my horizons, and as an introverted person I enjoy the quiet concentration it requires, plus it’s an inexpensive hobby I can enjoy for years.

Suggestion: 回答清晰且有逻辑，给出了理由和对比，但可改进之处：1) 注意句子衔接，可用连接词（for example, because）使表达更自然；2) “memorize” 用词稍显笼统，可替换为“retain information”更准确；3) 可略微合并句子以控制句数。

Example: To be honest, I prefer paper books because the tactile feeling of turning pages helps me concentrate, and unlike screens, they don’t distract me with notifications so I can better retain information.

Suggestion: 回答直接且具体，区分了不同情境并给出原因。可改进之处：1) 使用连接词（for example, whereas）可以让对比更强；2) “don't waste mental energy” 可换为更地道的表达，如 “to avoid wasting cognitive effort”；3) 可以补充一个短例子说明细读时如何做。

Example: I read carefully when the material relates to my major, such as filmmaking or media theory, because precise details matter; whereas for news or social media I usually skim to avoid wasting cognitive effort.

Suggestion: 回答思路合理，说明了先扫后读的策略，但存在时态和语法小问题（“I scanned” 用法不当，应为一般现在时表习惯；“That site” 可能为笔误）。建议：1) 使用一般现在时描述习惯性行为；2) 修正可能的词汇错误（例如“that strategy”）；3) 用连词强调因果关系并给出简短例子。

Example: I usually scan texts first to get the main idea and then read in detail if the content is genuinely useful; this strategy is more efficient and helps me manage my time when I’m busy.

× I'm a inner person

✓ I'm an introverted person

原句中有两处问题：一是冠词与后接词首音搭配错误，应使用不定冠词“an”而非“a”；二是短语“inner person”用法不自然，英语中常用“introverted person”来表达“内向的人”。建议使用“an introverted person”更地道。

× It's a low cost hobby I can keep for years.

✓ It's a low-cost hobby I can keep for years.

“low cost”作为复合形容词在名词前修饰时应用连字符构成“low-cost”。此外整体句子语法正确，但需拼写为复合形容词形式以符合书写规范。建议写作“low-cost hobby”。

× Also. It also fits my personality because I'm a inner person and it's a low cost hobby I can keep for years.

✓ Also, it fits my personality because I'm an introverted person and it's a low-cost hobby I can keep for years.

原句断句不当，“Also.”后面不应单独成句，应与后文连写为“Also, it…”。同时修正了先前提到的冠词与词汇问题。建议注意标点和句子连贯性。

× Honestly, I scanned first to get the main idea, then I read in detail if it's truly useful.

✓ Honestly, I scan first to get the main idea, then I read in detail if it's truly useful.

此处描述的是常态习惯性行为，应该使用一般现在时而非过去时“scanned”。因此将“scanned”改为“scan”。如果想表达过去某次行为，可保留过去时并在语境中明确。建议用一般现在时描述习惯性动作。

× Also on screens I get distracted by notifications so paper helps me stay present and memorize.

✓ Also, on screens I get distracted by notifications, so paper helps me stay present and remember things.

原句需要在“Also”和后面内容之间加逗号以提高可读性；“memorize”通常需要宾语（如memorize information），此处用“remember things”更自然。建议补充逗号并改用短语“remember things”。

× That site is more efficient and it helps me manage my time when I'm busy.

✓ That is more efficient and it helps me manage my time when I'm busy.

原句内容接续上文为指代阅读方式（前文“scan first… then I read in detail”），若指“that site”可能不准确。若确指“that way/site”，语法本身无三单错误，但“That site is more efficient”可简化为“That is more efficient”。本条主要建议根据语境选择正确指代词。